ff DECEPTION and DESIRES 2nd PART

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Posted: 12 years ago
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"WHY YAAR ??LAST WEEK U SAID NO TO THE JOB NA...TOH PHIR AB KAISE MOOD CHANGE HO GAYA APKAA MADAM JEE"ASKED KAMODI IN A  TEASING VOICE TO AMOLI.LITTLE DID SHE KNEW THAT THE CIRCUMSTANCES OF LAST WEEK AND NOW ARE TOTALLY OPPOSITE.THIS TIME LAST WEEK AMOLI WAS HAVING DINNER WITH HER BABA,MOM AND LITTLE SISTER TANIYA WHOM THEY ALL CALLED LOVINGLY TANI.BUT NOW HER FATHER WAS NO MORE HER MOTHER WAS HOSPITALISED AND HER LITTLE SISTER HAD NO CLUE OF ANY OF THIS,SHE WAS HAPPILY SLEEPING WITH HER MAASI UNKNOWN TO THE SORDID REALITY OF LIFE AND DREAMING OF FAIRIES, RAINBOW AND HER HAPPY WORLD.                                                                                                  " BCOZ NOW I NEED IT."  CAME A SHORT AND CURT REPLY FROM AMOLI. SENSING THE TONE OF HER VOICE KAMODI GOT WORRIED AND ASKED HER"KYA HUA??IS EVERYTHING ALL RIGHT YOU DONT SEEM FINE ...WHATS WRONG??"SHE ASKED ALL THESE QUESTIONS  IN 1 GO WHEN SHE SENSED THAT SOMETHING IS TERRIBLY WRONG WITH AMOLI...AND WHY NOT???? ...THEY WERE FRIENDS SINCE THE TIME THEY COULD REMEMBER THEIR FIRST DAY IN ELEMENTARY SCHOOL...THEY WERE INSEPARABLE SINCE THEY FIRST BECAME FRIENDS AT THE AGE OF 3 WHEN THEY FIRST MET IN A CLASS FULL OF TINY LITTLE CHILDREN WHO WERE SO AFRAID TO LET GO OFF THEIR PARENTS BUT WHEN THEY SAW EACH OTHER AN INSTANT WARM SMILE CREPT ON BOTH THEIR LIPS AND SINCE THEN THEY WERE LIKE SOUL SISTERS.        "KAMODI...BABA IS NO MORE...HE HAS LEFT US ALL ALONE".AMOLI CRIED ON THE PHONE NO LONGER ABLE TO HOLD HERSELF ANY LONGER."WHAAAT????R U SERIOUS AMO"ASKED KAMODI IN A VOICE FULL OF SHOCK AND DISBELIEF.AFTERALL,HOW COULD THIS BE POSSIBLE???? SHE SAW HIM IN THE MORNING HAVING HIS USUAL CUP OF TEA AND READING NEWSPAPER SITTING IN THE VARANDAH WHEN SHE WENT TO MEET AMOLI AND HAVE BREAKFAST AT HER HOME AS AMOLI'S MOM PREPARED POHA ESPECIALLY FOR HER BCOZ SHE KNEW HOW MUCH SHE LOVED IT.                KAMODI COULDNT      GET THE REPLY AND COULD ONLY HEAR THE WEEPING AMOLI AND SHE KNEW THAT WHAT AMOLI JUST SAID IS ABSOLUTELY TRUE."PAR KAISE??KAB???AND U R TELLING ME NOW????"SHE ASKED AMOLI IN A VOICE WHICH CLEARY DISPLAYED THAT SHE WAS HURT AND ANGRY WITH HER AFTERALL,HOW CAN SHE NOT TELL HER BEFORE WHEN SHE GOT THE NEWS.BUT IN AN MIN. SHE REALIZED THAT NOW WAS NOT THE TIME FOR ALL THESE CHILDISH QUESTIONS AND EGO AND QUICKLY ASKED HER IN WHICH HOSPITAL WERE THEY RIGHT NOW...SHE REACHED THE HOSPITAL IN 20 MIN.AND WHEN SHE SAW AMOLI SITTING ON THE CHAIR WITH HER SHOULDERS SLUMPED DOWN AND HER HEAD HELD LOW SHE KNEW HOW MUCH SUPPORT SHE NEEDED NOW AND WENT TO HER SIDE.SHE SAT THEIR BY HER SIDE AND HUG HER TO COMFORT HER BUT IT WAS ALL THAT AMOLI NEEDED TO BREAK DOWN AS SHE CANT KEEP HERSELF TOGETHER WITH THE STORM BREWING INSIDE HER AND THE CLOSED GATES OF HER EMOTIONS FLUNG OPEN AND SHE CRIED AS IF AN EMOTIONAL BARRAGE WAS BROKEN FROM INSIDE OF HER...                                                                                                                                  KAMODI TRIED TO CONSOLE HER AND TO STOP HER FROM CRYING BUT THEN SHE REALIZED THAT ITS BETTER TO LET HER FREE HER HEART FROM ALL THE SORROW AND SADNESS WHICH HAS ENGULFED HER .LATER SHE GOT UP TO BRING WATER FOR AMOLI AND THEN SHE REALIZED THAT SHE HAVE NOT SEEN AUNTY SINCE SHE HAS COME IN THE WAITING ROOM . AT FIRST SHE THOUGHT THAT SHE MUST BE BUSY WITH SOME PAPERWORK OR PERHAPS GONE HOME TO GET SOME MONEY BUT IT HAS BEEN  AN HOUR SINCE SHE HAD BEEN HERE AND STILL THERE WAS NO SIGN OF HER..."WHERE IS SHE ??"THOUGHT KAMODI     WHEN KAMODI CAME BACK WITH  WATER AND SOME COFFEE FOR BOTH OF THEM SHE ASKED AMOLI "WHERE IS AUNTY???I HAVE NOT SEEN HER SINCE I HAVE COME HERE, IF SHE   HAS GONE TO THE HOUSE TO GET THE MONEY ILL GO AND PICK HER UP FROM THERE AND WILL BE BACK SOON AS SHE WONT BE ABLE TO FIND A TAXI AT THIS TIME AND ITS NOT SA FE ALSO". AMOLI LOOKED UP WITH TEARY EYES AND FACE FULL OF SADNES AND REPLIED"SHE IS IN THE I.C.U."MY GOD!!WHY??WHAT HAPPENED TO HER??SHE WAS NOT IN THE SAME ACCIDENT IN WHICH UNCLE'...HER VOICE TRAILED OFF AS SHE STILL CANT BELIEVE THAT HER EVER LOVING AND SUPPORTING UNCLE WAS NO MORE WITH THEM.IN RESPONSE AMOLI JUST SHOOK HER HEAD IN NO."THEN WHY?????"SHE COULDNT TAKE THE SHOCK OF PAPA LEAVING US AND SUFFERED A HEART ATTACK WHEN THEY GOT THE BODY OUT OF THE MORGUE"REPLIED AMOLI IN A VOICE SO HEAVY AND CHOKED WITH TEARS THAT KAMODI COULDNT HELP BUT FEEL THE GUILT OF NOT BEING THERE WHEN HER FRIEND NEEDED HER MOST.SHE PRESSED AMOLI'S HAND AND TRIED TO REASSURE HER THAT FROM NOW ON SHE WILL BE THERE WITH HER AT EVERY STEP OF HER LIFE."HOW IS SHE NOW??"KAMODI ASKED OF  MOM'S HEALTH. "SHE IS OUT OF DANGER NOW THE DOCTOR SAID AN HOUR AGO BEFORE U CAME DOWN HERE"REPLIED AMOLI WITH A HINT OF HOPE IN HER VOICE THAT SHE CAN SALVAGE OF WHAT WAS LEFT OF THEIR FAMILY NOW IF SHE TRIED HARD ENOUGH.                   THEN SUDDENLY AMOLI ASKED KAMODI ABOUT THE JOB AGAIN."YEAH ITS OPEN AGAIN NOW AS THEY HIRED A SECRETARY BUT SHE LEFT WITHIN 4 DAYS AS YOU KNOW HOW OUR BOSS MR. D.V. IS WITH UNMARRIED GIRLS...HE JUST CANT OR WONT SPARE THEM...THANK GOD THAT IM MARRIED TO RADHE SO WHAT IF HE HAS TO BE ON TOUR FOR 20 DAYS EVERY MONTH ATLEAST IM SAFE FROM THIS DEVIL D.V."KAMODI TRIED TO JOKE AND MAKE THE ATMOSPHERE A LITTLE LIGHT FOR THE SAKE OF AMOLI."BUT R U SURE THAT U WANT TO WORK UNDER THAT DEVIL...I MEAN AS A SECRETARY AND THAT TOO SUCH A BEAUTIFUL ONE AND TO TOP IT ALL U BEING UNMARRIED HE WILL SURELY WONT LEAVE U"SHE ASKED IN A CONCERNED VOICE..." YES, I HAVE TO ...AS NOW I HAVE TO SUPPORT MAA AND TANI AND THE SALARY IS SO MUCH MORE FROM ALL THE OTHER COMPANIES ARE OFFERING AND AS FAR AS HIS BEING A DEVIL IS CONCERNED THEN I KNOW HOW TO TAME THE ONE AND ABOVE ALL I KNOW MYSELF ".  AMOLI SAID IN A DETERMINED TONE AS SHE KNEW THAT NOW SHE HAS TO BE AT HER STRONGEST AND NOT AT HER WEAKEST. "OK,DEAR, AS U SAY, ILL ASK FOR THE INTERVIEW AND INFORM U TOMORROW.BUT BEWARE DEAR, OF HOW MUCH I KNOW OF THE DEVIL HE WONT LEAVE U IN PEACE IF U ARE APPOINTED AS HIS SECRETARY"AGAIN KAMODI TRIED TO WARN HER OF HER NEXT STEP.        " AND OF HOW MUCH U KNOW ME,  U CAN EASILY SAY THAT I M NOT GOING TO SUCCUMB TO ANY PRESSURE"THEY BOTH SAID THE LAST LINE TOGETHER AND SMILED AT EACH OTHER AS KAMODI KNEW VERY WELL THAT IF AMOLI SETS HER MIND TO SOMETHING NO 1 CAN MAKE HER BUDGE FROM HER DECISION BUT DEEP DOWN SHE WAS A LITTLE SCARED AND APPREHENSIVE OF HER JOINING THE FIRM OF THE GREAT DEVIL AS SHE KNEW THAT HE TOO IF SETS HIS MIND FOR SOMETHING HE TOO WONT STOP TILL HE GETS IT.AND THIS THOUGHT SCARED HER BUT SHE ALSO KNEW HOW MUCH AMOLI NEEDS A JOB NOW,SHE TOOK THE NAME OF GOD AND WISHED THAT NOW  NOTHING BAD HAPPENS TO AMOLI.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                               [OK GUYS, PLZZ LET ME KNOW HOW U LIKE IT AND WHICH PART U DID NOT LIKE REPLYYY GUYS AS I NEED ALL THE BOOSTING I CAN GET BCOZ THIS IS MY FIRST FF EVERRR AND TELL ME DO U WANT KAMODI TO TURN A NEGATIVE CHARACTER IN THE FUTURE OR SHOULD SHE REMAIN THE SAME MRS. 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Posted: 12 years ago
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  Tweety dear ur fantastic and a very good story writer ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ Have no words to praise ur talent. Hope ekta Ji and BT would read the story and appoint u and no doubt we'll get our SK and SK back in a new show ๐Ÿ˜‰ 

I don't feel this is ur first FF dear ๐Ÿค— I liked all the part tweety. Nooo please don't change kaumudi as negative character let her b as Mrs. Nice ๐Ÿ˜‰, there are still so many characters left we'll change any of those as -ve character. Well I am desperately waiting for the 3rd part of FF Plzz do it fast Yaar can't wait any longer ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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Posted: 12 years ago
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aww ๐Ÿ˜ณ thanks so much dear really needed it as no 1 is commenting  so really felt as if i have not done a good job๐Ÿ˜•but u really boosted my morale thanks alot๐Ÿ˜‰well for the 3rd part you have to wait for it for a little bit as that will be the entry of D.V. and where he will meet AMOLI for the first time so obviously it has to be special๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†. thanks again for all the appreciation๐Ÿ˜ƒ. love and take care
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Savitha0101

  Tweety dear ur fantastic and a very good story writer ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ Have no words to praise ur talent. Hope ekta Ji and BT would read the story and appoint u and no doubt we'll get our SK and SK back in a new show ๐Ÿ˜‰ 


I don't feel this is ur first FF dear ๐Ÿค— I liked all the part tweety. Nooo please don't change kaumudi as negative character let her b as Mrs. Nice ๐Ÿ˜‰, there are still so many characters left we'll change any of those as -ve character. Well I am desperately waiting for the 3rd part of FF Plzz do it fast Yaar can't wait any longer ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

arre sorry kya yaar jawaab post karna tha aur post ho gaya aap hi ka msg๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†sorry. thanks for all the praise really needed it as no 1 is replying so thought shaayad  kisi ko pasand hi nahin aaya ๐Ÿ˜ญbut u really boosted my morale thanks alot ๐Ÿ˜Šaapko next ff ke liye thoda sa wait karna padega as that will be where D.V. will be introduced to us and he and AMOLI will meet for the first time so thodaa special to hona chahiye ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†but dont worry will be posting soon in about 2 or 3 days ๐Ÿ˜‰love and take care
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Posted: 12 years ago
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๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ โญ๏ธ โค๏ธ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ  ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ No words tweety only emotions. Loved the way you write. Me too eagerly waiting for the next part. Ocourse DV's entry should be a very special one like his entry in Bairi Piya. Still can't forget that entry scene. Once again keep up your good work.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its amaazing yaar good work love it ๐Ÿ˜‰ and yess keep it up and yesss agree with savi let kamodi bee good woww married with radhe greate  AND  YESS WAIT   MORE  BEOFRE THEY MEET MUST BE special naa ๐Ÿ˜› you are amazing wriiter loved all the part 
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thank u UX and VARSHA for all your kind and appreciative words ๐Ÿ˜ƒthanks alot guys really the appreciation of u guys is really imp. and Varsha welcome to the forum dear๐Ÿ˜ƒ.u will see devil D.V.in a more devilish form ๐Ÿ˜‰hope u guys like it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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first and second part
 
Lovely ones...'
kamodi is a good?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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kamodi is a good?
[/QUOTE]yup KAMODI is a positive character here
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice to see kaumodi as positive character