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Kyun Dard Hai Itna Tere Ishq Mein #2 link Pg142

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Posted: 11 years ago
hello everyone!! this is my first attempt in writing something... i beg ur pardon if there r any errors... u may find this work close to the show but this is my very own version and u'll get to know this as the story proceeds... m not expecting much from this piece as m not a writer bt i'll really appreciate ur feedback in the form of likes and comments... thank u... 

CHARACTERIZATION

Khushi Kumari Gupta: 
an innocent, bubbly, chirpy, lively girl with strong values... believes in love, marriage, Devi Maiyya (DM)... she lost her parents in a car accident when she was 8 years old... she does not remember much about her parents or family... her new family is everything for her and she can do anything to keep them happy... simple, rooted in family and driven by a clear moral compass... she stands for what she believes in, and never lets go of her inculcated values... she is righteous, intelligent but slightly nave at the same time...



Payal Gupta:
Khushi's elder sister... she is thoughtful and mature, as opposed to the impulsive Khushi... Payal understands and supports Khushi in all matters... her marriage breaks when Khushi takes a stand against the dowry demand... yet she is rationalises the whole issue and stands by Khushi when the entire family denounces her... she is khushi's best friend... a graduate... shy, intelligent and calm by nature...



Garima Gupta:
Khushi and Payal's mother... she is somebody who considers self respect and family honour topmost... fear of infamy haunts her, as she has gone through that ordeal when she was a young woman... a loving mother and doting wife... considers khushi as her own daughter...



Shashi Gupta:
runs a sweet shop in interior lower middle class area of Lucknow... a man of modest and honest means.. he has belived that "ties of the heart are stronger than ties of blood"... he is married to Garima... Payal is his real daughter and Khushi was brought in as an orphan when she was 8 years old... he knows nothing about Khushi's original family... he has never treated Khushi any different from Payal... both his daughters are the apples of his eye... he doesn't know anything about khushi's original family...



Madhumati (Buaji):
Shashi Gupta's elder sister... she is a widow, very conservative and traditional in her approach... she is strict and appears rude, though somewhere deep down, she means well... She had migrated Lucknow to Delhi...



Arnav Singh Raizada:
a self made, ruthless,hansome, arrogant, rude but very successful business tycoon... he is a 'win at all costs' man... he believes everything can be bought in the world, including love... ge has no consideration for relationships and can even manipulate people to achieve his ambitions... he does not believe in marriage or love or god or destiny... his sister is his world... his sister calls him "chote"...



Anjali Jha:
a loving sister and doting wife... she is arnav's world... she is a strong believer of traditions, god and destiny... marriage & love are very important for her... totally opposite to her brother... married to Shyam Jha... she became the strength of arnav after their parents died...



Shyam Jha:
married to anjali... he is a lawyer... he is an angel in the eyes of the Raizadas but is a double faced personality... he's cunning & he married anjali for money...



Akash Raizada:
a shy, smart, sweet and intelligent guy... a caring brother... very down to earth... always tries to find out good in others and does not judge them on monetary terms...



Manohar Raizada (Mamaji):
Akash's father... a simple man... a respected family member and a very supporting father...



Manorama Raizada (Mamiji):
Akash's mother... a funny character... she thinks high of herself and her family... her favorite lines are "hello haye bye bye"...



Naniji:
the head of the Raizada family... she took care of Arnav & Anjali after their parents' death...



Lavanya Kashyap:
she is so called girl friend of Arnav... she is high headed and works with Arnav... western influence is very clearly visible in her dressing style and attitude... later she becomes traditional...



NOTE:  will b adding some characters in this story in further chapters... their relationships will b revealed in further chapters... most important will b...

Sonam Mehta:
owner of Mehta Empire... a singer by profession... enjoys celebrity status... she lost her parents when she was 3 years old... since then her father's best friend and manager took care of her...



Dinesh Singhania:
best friend and manager of Sonam's father... he treats her like his own daughter and he is the one who told Sonam about her family when she grew up and handed over her family business to her... he loves her very much... (a very positive character)



Rohan Singhania:
son of Dinesh Singhania... treats Sonam like his own sister... he is 7 years older than Sonam... very protective about her... always supports her and is her best friend... music composer by profession and composes music for Sonam's songs... his mom passed away 2 years ago due to cancer...



Prologue is on the way...
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PROLOGUE

can there b love without trust?? does love exist at all?? people fall in love... but is there any way of falling out of love??



m leaving it here for ur feedback... plzz tell me should i continue or not??

INDEX:

Chapter-1: Page 2

Chapter-2 : Page 3

Chapter-3 : Page 3

Chapter-4 : Page 4

Chapter-5 : Page 5

Chapter-6 : Page 6

Chapter-7 : Page 8

Teaser to Chapter-8 : Page 10

Chapter-8 : Page 11

Chapter-9 : Page 12

Chapter-10 : Page 14

Chapter-11 : Page 16

Chapter-12 : Page 19

Chapter-13 : Page 21

Chapter-14 : Page 22

Chapter-15 : Page 25

Chapter-16 : Page 27

Chapter-17 : Page 29

Chapter-18 : Page 32

Chapter-19 : Page 34

Chapter-20 : Page 37

Chapter-21 : Page 40

Chapter-22 : Page 43

Chapter-23 : Page 46

Chapter-24 : Page 49

Chapter-25 : Page 51

Chapter-26 : Page 54

Chapter-27 : Page 58

Chapter-28 : Page 62

Chapter-29 : Page 65

Chapter-30 : Page 69

Chapter-31 : Page 72

Chapter-32 : Page 76

Chapter-33 : Page 79

Chapter-34 : Page 82

Chapter-35 : Page 86

Chapter-36 : Page 89

Chapter-37 : Page 92

Chapter-38 : Page 95

Chapter-39 : Page 101

Chapter-40 : Page 105

Chapter-41 : Page 109

Chapter-42 : Page 113

Chapter-43 : Page 117

Chapter-44 : Page 120

Chapter-45 : Page 124

Chapter-46A : Page 128

Chapter-46B : Page 132

Chapter-47 : Page 135

Chapter-48 : Page 138

Link to thread 2 : Page 142
Edited by archa2810 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
sounds good interesting..
continue soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi.Cont soon. Thnx for pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sia also a part??
w8ng 4 ch-1

do cont

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Posted: 11 years ago
This looks really interesting could you add me to your PM list I would love to read more!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Liking it so far :)

Do continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
looks really intresting...😊

continue plzzz
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter-1

The track continues after Payash & Arhi wedding. It has been 1 month since the wedding. Khushi still does not know the reason for this marriage. Neither she is able to understand the hot and cold behavior she is recieving from Arnav.

RM (Arnav's Room)

Khushi woke up in the morning to find Arnav missing. She quickly gets up, freshens herself, gets ready & goes to the temple. She prayed to her DM to give her strangth to face this ordeal and go through the pain Arnav's harsh words give her time and again. 

Althogh the family has forgiven her after the Holi incident but she still feels guilty for hurting the feelings of people she had started accepting as her own family.

Khushi finishes her prayers and enters Dining Hall to find that Arnav has already left for the office without breakfast. This was not something new for her but she felt bad as skipping meals was not good for Arnav's health but he is doing it avoid being around her.

Reluctantly, she starts eating her breakfast.

Anjali teases Khushi: Khushiji aap chote se kahiye na ki wo breakfast kr k jaya kre. Waise b aaj kal to wo sirf aapki baat mante hain.

Khushi with a faint smile: Di aapke bhai hain. Agar aapki baat nai sunte to humari kaise sunenge.

Nani with a teasing smile: Khushi bitiya!! Biwi k aane k baad to bete waise b paraye ho jate hain. Wo sirf aapki hi sunenge. Kyun Anjali bitiya??

Anjali: Bilkul Nani.

Mami: Lagta hai ee Phati Saree Arnav Bitwa ko apne trap me bohat ache se trap kiye rahi. Hello Haye Bye Bye.

Nani: Manorama!!

Mami leaves the room.

Payal: Khushi tu kahan khoi hui hai?? kayi dino se dekh rahe hain hum tu badi chup chup si hai.

Khushi: Kuch nahi jiji. Hamare sir me thoda dard ho raha hai. Bas isliye.

Anjali: Khushiji hum to soch rahe the k aap chote k liye lunch le jaye office me or unhe dawai b de aayein. Wo khud to apna dhyan rakhenge nahi. Ye b ek hafte k liye bahar gaye hue hain. Chaliye hum khud le jate hain.

Khushi: Koi baat nahi Di. Hum le jate hain. Aap araam kijiye.

Anjali: Lekin khushiji apki tabiyat...

Khushi: Aap chinta na kariye Di. Hum theek hain.

Khushi leaves for office with lunch.

Mehta Mansion

Rohan running in the stairs: Kahan ho Princess?? Mere paas tumhare liye bohat badi news hai.

Sonam: Kya hua bhai?? Subeh subeh itne excited??

Rohan: Arre ho kahan??

Sonam: Gym mein hu. Aa jao.

Rohan enters the well equipped gym to find Sonam on the Treadmill.

Rohan: Tumhari album top pe hai is hafte. Already hit declare ho chuki hai. Success part hai iss saturday.

Sonam: Iss saturday?? Nahi bhai. Iss saturday nahi.

Rohan: Kyun Princess?? Koi problem hai??

Sonam: Bhai party ek hafte k liye postpone kr do na please.

Rohan: Lekin kyu??

Sonam: Bhai aap to jante hain k next saturday bohat special day hai. Mai chahti hu k party tbi ho.

Rohan: Tum ajeeb ho Princess. Tumhari line k log events prepone krte hain or tum postpone krne ko keh rahi ho.

Sonam: Please bhai.

Rohan: Acha theek hai bachha. As u say.

Sonam gets off the Tradmill and hugs Rohan.

Sonam (excitedly): Love u bhai.


Precap:

Arnav and Khushi's interview with the magazine.

Sonam's reasons for that special day.



Stay tuned as a very important twist is on the way.
Edited by archa2810 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
I like the detailed characterization you have done 😊