Bade Acche Laggte Hai

OS - Ram and Priya's first day after marriage

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi everybody...this is my First OS...hope you will all like it...this happens after Ram and Priya are married. Both of them have not known each other that much.. I know that this is pretty old stuff...but I thought to write it because in the show Ram leaves for USA after his marriage...my imagination is on how the scene would be if he had not left for USA...

 That Night Ram is sitting on his bed thinking of something...Priya enters the room

Priya: Kya baat hai Mr. Kapoor...kya soch rahe hai?

Ram turns and looks at Priya...he gets stunned to see her in the night costume - she looked so beautiful...but he could not speak anything owing to his inhibition and fear towards her...Priya keeps repeating her question...

Ram: Woh...woh..

Priya: Kya baat hai? aap ke chehre se  itna paseena kyun nikal rahi hai? tabiyat to teek hai na aapki? comes to touch his forehead...

Ram gets startled when he finds Priya nearing him.

Ram: Koi baat nahi hai Priya...( in a low voice to himself ) - tumhe dekhne se pehle tabiyat to teek tha...lekin tumhe dekhne ke baad...

Ram: Its ok Priya...rehne do..tumhe takleef lene ki zarurat nahi hai...

Priya: Main aapki biwi hoon...I understand ki hamari shaadi samjhaute ki shaadi hai.. lekin jab aapko koi baat pareshaan kar rahi hai to main usse dekh ke chup nahi reh sakti...bataiye na ki kya baat hai...

Ram: Tum bhura to nahi manogi na?

Priya: Nahi...aap boliye to sahi

Ram: Tum apna yeh nightie change kar sakti ho?

Priya: Kyun? Kya baat hai?

Ram: Tum is me bahut khoobsurat lagti ho..there is no doubt about it lekin isse dekhne ke baad mere dimag mein ajeeb ajeeb si khayal aati hai...aur wohi baat mujhe pareshaan karti hai...

Priya: Kaisi khayal Mr. Kapoor?

Ram: Tum gussa to nahi karogi na agar main tumhe bataoon uske baare mein?

Priya : Nahi karungi...

Ram: I got a thought of you touching me...that thought really brought shivers in me...

Priya (laughs): Arey isme yeh nightie beech me kahan se aayi?

Ram: Tumhe is nightie mein dekhne ke baad hi woh khayal aayi dimag me...I am sorry Priya...I know it is a strange thought...pehli baar zindagi mein kisi ladki se  saath reh raha hoon...so I hope you understand...

Priya: Don't worry Mr.Kapoor mein isse jaake change kar leti hoon...aur aage se mujhse itna darne ki zarurat nahi hai... apna paseena poch lijiye...aap ke bhulane par hi main aapke paas aaungi...don't worry

Ram: Thanks for being so understanding Priya.

Priya: You are always welcome.

Priya leaves the room to change her nightie...Ram's innocence and shyness brings a smile to her face...Ram gets a sigh of relief...








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luvsakshi thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey ..its good bhai ..thank you for posting
but ye dil maange moreee...plz cont kuch lovely dovey moments plzzz
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very nice kishore bhai...πŸ‘
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: luvsakshi

hey ..its good bhai ..thank you for posting
but ye dil maange moreee...plz cont kuch lovely dovey moments plzzz


Thanks for liking it dear...will continue to write based on the response to this OS.. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜³
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: dayabhi

Very nice kishore bhai...πŸ‘


Thanks Afu πŸ˜³
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very nice bhai.keep write some more os.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: sowjii06

Very nice bhai.keep write some more os.


thanx dear...😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
sweet start omg gollu is so innocent!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

great work keep it up...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awww...how cute!! hamare Golu ka pasina choot gaya...Priya ko nighty mein dekh kar. Nicely written...please do write some more. Old episodes are still very mesmerizing and any take on them certainly makes a gr8 readπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 11 years ago
Bhai its to good super os. Its   super ,super, super and wont more please another one.