SS: tum main zindagi hai. Updated part 5(page 9) 29.5.12

(Part 1= page 2)    (part 2 =page3&4)
(part 3= page 6)
    (part 4=page 7)
(part 5=page 9)
hey guys, we (pinkjali & lavi961) are soon starting a new ss on raya. (Tum main zindagi hai). Hope u guys will like it. And ya! I want to share something with u that lavi is the main mastermind behind this effort. After this intro, story will be posted by lavi . Thanks and we will love ur feedback .Edited by Pinkjali - 11 years ago

plese start your ss fast. Waiting...

Ths stry will be a result of efforts put on by both of us .. Hope u al like it..

After a long discussion, i and anjali decided that since there is a lot of discussn going on leap, we'l strt the stry at ths pnt.. First part wil be postd sn..

hiii...always welcome for your thoughts

waiting for your post ..plz post soon

gr8t idea!! Plz post ur FF soon😳

Hey guys.. Presenting.. Part 1 of
tum mein zindagi he..
By
pinkjali an lavi_961

in australia
a big cottage..
two children running here and there... priya calling them... are bachchon... jaldi tayyar ho jaao.. ridhaan... ridhima...   tumhe nursery jaana h naa??
woh nahi sunte hein and aur bhagne lagte hein... priya bhi peech peech bhagti hein..
priya: are bachchon.. mama ko aise thang kyun kar rahe ho...
thabhi priya chot lagne ka natak karthi he.. aur zor zor se rone lagti he.. yah dhekkar bachche bhagte hue priya ke paas pahunchte hein...
ridhaan:kya hua mama???
riddhi: are mama hamari wajah se ko chot lag gayi...
ridhaan: haan... we r sorry mama...
priya: agar aapko sorry chahiye tho pakka wala promise karo ki thum kabhi bhi scl jaane ke liye mana nahi karenge... teek he??
kids: haan mamma...
and the kids went to their scl... happily with loli pops in their hands given by priya's friend mallika who they call maansi...{mallika- the only friend of priya.. who stood with her }

tabhi mallika hanste hue enter karti he.. .
priya: are mallika.. kitne nakre karte hein ye bachche scl jaane liye.. mein tho bas thak gayi..
mallika: haan.. mein tho tumse wo tender wali file maangne aayi thi..
priya: haan... wo mere cupboard mein he..
mallika: aaj meeting hein na .. tho wo file mujhe de do..
priya.. haan.. mein abhi laathi hoon ..
in the mean time, mallika gets a call and she goes out..
..
priya comes to her room and takes the file and suddenly a photo falls from it.. she picks it up and on seeing that.. her tears started flowing down... yes.. it was ram's photo...

mallika enter the room and sees priya crying..
when she noticed the pic in her hand, she understood the reason for her tears...
mal: priya...
startled priya trying to hide her tears: y..yes mallika...
mal: ye kya kar rahi ho.. pure theen saal ho chuke hein.. tum abhi thak uski yaadon mein ho??? thum usse abhi bhi pyar karti ho na??
priya: aisi koi baat nahi he.. and quickly takes the photo and puts inside a book and closes the cupboard..
..
mal: thum mujse jhoot mat bolo.. mein thume achchi tarah se jaanti hoon.. agar itni pyaar karti ho tho waapas kyun nahi chali jaati uske paas???
priya: nahi... kabhi nahi... unhone hi apni marzi se mujhe apne zindagi se bahar nikala tha.. mein kabhi bhi paas waapas nahi jaana chahti.. ab bas.. meri zindagi mein mere bachche aur thum ho .. .
mallika: pls priya.. wo thum se bahut pyar karte hein..
priya: achcha... ??? tho wo pyar theen sal pehle tho kahin nazar nahi aaya.. kya thum sab kuch bhool gayi??..

End of part 1

dnt frgt to leave ur cmnts...<3 <3Edited by Lavi_961 - 11 years ago

Hey lavi, atlast humare SS ka opening seremony ho e gaya.

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