OS: One day from Raya's life

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Posted: 2012-05-06T05:11:24Z

Hi everyone I'm Saly and this is my first OS ever…. This is my 3000 th post…. This is a treat from my side on becoming IF-Dazzler… this is dedicated to all my loving sisters & brothers here….

This is just an imaginary story on Raya. In my post only Raya is there. Raya alone in KM all others out of town !!! this story is not according to present situation.

I'm not so good in neither English nor Hindi… so please bear the mistakes. So here goes my first OS ever… hope u will lyk it… thanks!!!

 

OS: One day from Raya's life

 

It's a Sunday morning 6am. Raya woke up to the sound of alarm.

Ram: Priya yeh alarm band karvao.

Priya: aap band kariye na , aap hi ki side me hai na alarm clock.

Ram stops the alarm & lydown on bed. Priya gets up & sits on the bed.

Priya: ram utiye na , 6 baj gaey hai

Ram: 6 to baja hai 8 nahi… aur waise bhi aaj to Sunday hai , yaar aaj ke din to sone de.

Priya: aise kaise sone de. Aapne muje promise kya hai ki aap har Sunday subah subah mere saath lawn me walk karenge,

Ram: lekin muje aaj sona hai.

Priya: lekin vaikin kuch nahi , aap bas utiye aur chaliye mere saath.

Ram gave up & gets up to go to lawn. Ram & priya enjoy talking while walking in lawn. (I'm not going to give detail on what they r talking. So just imagine that they talking about something). After walk ram enter KM hall priya followed ram.

Ram: Bansi kaka , Bansi kaka.

Priya: kya hua ram.

Ram: ye bansi kaka kaha chala gaya. Kab se avaaz dheyrahaa hoon.

Priya: ram meine bansi kaka ko do din ki chutti di hai unki ma bimaar hai , isiliye.

Ram: tum yeh baath muje pehle kyu nahi bataayaa.

Priya: ab ye sab cholho , aap pehele fresh hojaao mein chai lekar aataa hoon.

Ram makes his way to their room. Priya went to kitchen to make tea. After preparing tea , she takes two cups in a tray & go to their room. In room ram has freshen up & sitting on sofa watching tv. Priya serves tea to ram & went to fresh up. When she came out after freshing up she sees ram holding his cup not even had a sip.

Priya: chai tandi horahyhey.

Hearing her voice ram look at priya. Priya's hair is wet & she is wearing a purplish pink saree. Ram is lost in her beauty. He came back to his senses when priya said.

Priya: chai kaisi hai.

Ram: bohoth acchi hai (pause) tumhaary tarah

Priya smiles & takes her cup of tea & sit beside ram & starts enjoy her tea while watching tv. Ram placed his hands on her shoulder & continue to watch tv. After finishing drinking tea , priya took two cups on tray & said.

Priya: ram mein kitchen mein jaathaa hoon. Break fast banaa ney keliyey. saarey chefs ko bhi meine chutti di hai kyu ki mein aapko apne haath ke banaa hua kana kilaanaa chaathy thy.

Ram smile & says: waise muje bhi teri haath ka banaa hua kana kaney kan man kar rahaa hey. Tum jab tak break fast prepare karthy hain mein office ke kuck kaam karley thy hoon.

Saying this ram took his lappy & sits on bed & priya went to make aloo paraata's for him.

After breakfast is prepared priya calls ram down stairs to have beak fast. Raya had break fast together & went to their room to rest for a while. Ram again sits with his lappy on left side of bed. Priya took a book from book shelf make herself comfortable on right side of bed & starts reading.

~After few hours~

Ram: priya mein soch rahy thy ki kyu na hum kahi lunch keliye bahar jaae.

Hearing this priya looks at ram & smile, ram continued.

Ram: waise bhi hum aise bahar gaye kitne din hue. Chef's bhi yaha nahi hai to.

Priya: tik hai ram. Meine tayyar ho jaa thy hoon.

Then they both get ready & headed to a 5 star restaurant. Had lunch & went for a long drive. Just when the sun was going to set they reach beach where they counted stars. Sit on a beach close to each other watch the sunset. They walk near beach spend sometime there & return KM went to their room changed their clothes lydown on bed close to each other. Ram asked breaking the silence between them.

Ram: aaj ka din kaisa laga tumhe.

Priya: bohoth accha tha, bohoth din ke baaad aapke saat time spend karney ka mauka mila. Thanks ram!

Ram: mein tumse vaadhaa karthy hun ki aaj ke baad har Sunday hum aise hi saath bithaagege. Thanks for coming in to my life priya.

Priya: I love u ram.

Ram: I love u too priya.

Soon they drifted into sleep in each other arms.

~ end ~

 

To be honest it has been about five years since I have written a story by myself. Today Raya has made me to write this story. Hope u liked this story.

Please like & leave ur comments. Thank u !!!

With love,

Saly

 

 

 

 

 

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Posted: 2012-05-06T05:26:19Z
very nice saly...loved it


Edited by dayabhi - 2012-05-06T06:06:50Z
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Posted: 2012-05-06T05:26:49Z
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*edited*

hey nice post,i loved it ...hope in balh we will get a day between them like your story ...
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Posted: 2012-05-06T05:31:34Z
Kya baat hai saly dear. What a surprise. Love the update. You write well Edited by SWEETETIKA - 2012-05-06T05:49:52Z
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Posted: 2012-05-06T05:41:24Z
Saly...wonderful os sweety...pls do write more OS if you can...






  just like you...


Edited by kaviya10 - 2012-05-06T07:07:05Z
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Posted: 2012-05-06T05:46:42Z
Its good dear and thanks for surprise.
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Posted: 2012-05-06T05:48:55Z
Well written Saly...lovely...loved it very much...thanks for this beautiful story sister...EmbarrassedSmile
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Posted: 2012-05-06T05:53:13Z
Originally posted by SWEETETIKA


Kya baat hai saly dear. What a surprise. Love the update. You write well

thanks eti... i belive that i dnt write well... my english teacher also say that... anyways thanks again Hug
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