RAYA SCENE PART 12 1.6.2012 pg 14 updated - Page 2

rayaloveland

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Posted: 11 years ago

After all this is over. Ram comes to know the truth and he throws out Niharika, Sid and mama. Priya is arranging the wardrobe properly. Ram comes to her.

Ram: Priya! I am very sorry. Please mujhe maaf kar do.

Priya: Aap mujhse maafi kyu mang rahe hai. Agar aapko maafi mangni hai toh mere parivar se mangiye.

Ram: me tumhare parivar se bhi mafi mangunga. but pls tum bhi mujhe maaf kar do. abhi bht late ho gaya hai toh kal subah me khud vahan jaunga office se pehle maafi mangne. I am sorry Priya.

Priya: theek hai maaf kar diya aapko mene.

Ram becomes happy. He hug her.

NEXT MORNING

Ram: Priya chal rahi ho? hum tumhare ghar jayenge fir tumhe me classes bhi drop kar dunga. thik hai?

Priya: Theek hai chaliye.

Both on their way to Sharma House together.

In Car

Ram: Priya mujhe bht dar lag raha hai unhe sorry bolne k liye.

Priya: Aapko darne ki zarurat nahi hai. Woh koi aapko kha nahi jayenge. Aur vaise bhi me hu na aapke sath. Dariye mat.

Ram: thik hai Priya.

Sharma House

they ring the bell. Kartik opens the door.

Kartik: Dee jiju aap yahan?

Ram: kartik mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai.

kartik: aap pehle andar aiye.

ram and priya go inside.

Sudhir: aree tum dono itni subah idhar?

Kartik: voh papa jiju mujhse kuch kehna chahte hai. kahiye na jiju kya kehna hai?

Ram: Kartik I am sorry. kuch din jo bhi hua uske liye me bht sharminda hu. mujhe maaf kar do.

Kartik: ye aap kya keh rahe hai jiju. pls maafi mat mangiye. aapka aisa react kart karna thik tha agar meri behen bhi hoti toh me bhi aisa hi react karta. isme sorry bolne ki zarurat nahi hai. ab sab thik ho gaya hai. asli gunahgar ko saza mil gayi hai.

Both hug each other. Priya goes to her dad.

Priya: Papa aap kaise ho?

Sudhir: me thik hu priya beta tum batao?

Priya: me bhi thik hu papa.

Ram goes to Priya's dad, mom. He tells all of them sorry.

Sudhir: ab sab kuch thik ho gaya hai. chalo tum dono nashta karlo hamare sath.

Priya: Nahi papa. hum karke aye hai. aur mujhe classes k liye late ho raha hai. toh hame nikalna chahiye.

Sudhir: theek hai beta. tum dono apna khayal rakhna.

Priya: JI papa. aur aap bhi rakhiye apna khayal.

both go from there.

In car

Priya: aap aise hi dar rahe the. ab sab kuch theek ho gaya hai ?

Ram: ha sab kuch thik ho gaya.

then ram starts thinking something.

Priya: kya soch rahe hai?

Ram: Me ye soch raha hu ki apni ma ko vapas bulayu india. unse bhi maafi mangni hai or apeksha se bhi.

Priya: ye toh bht achha idea hai.

Priya's classes come and she leaves n Ram leaves for his work.

Hope you all like it. Its just a try from my side.

If u all want me to continue I will do it.

Edited by riddhu123 - 11 years ago

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salsaly

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Posted: 11 years ago

nyc... continue soon... 😊Edited by salsaly - 11 years ago

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A. Kishore

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Posted: 11 years ago

Well written...keep it up...👍🏼...Continue A S A P

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rayaloveland

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Posted: 11 years ago

This content was originally posted by: TVserialfreak
Well written...keep it up...👍🏼...Continue A S A P

will do it soon.

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Alaadin

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Posted: 11 years ago

Very nice please continue soon

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Posted: 11 years ago

PART 2

Its night RAYA are back in their room.

Ram: Priya tumne ma ko phone kiya kya?

Priya: Nahi Ram abhi nahi kiya. woh aaj me bht busy thi. Abhi karna theek nahi hai kyuki

vahan abhi bht late hoga. Kal subah karte hai.

Ram: theek hai.

MORNING

both got ready early so that they get sometime to talk to Krishnaji. So Priya calls Krishnaji.

Priya: hello ma!! Me priya bol rahi hu.

Krishna: Priya beta kaisi ho? aur ram kaisa hai? aaj achanak kaise call kiya?

Priya: hum theek hai aur aap aur apeksha kaise ho?

Krishna: hum bhi theek hai. vaise mujhe apeksha ne kaha tha ki tumne ram ko promise

diya hai ki tum mujhse baat karne ki koshish nahi karogi. toh fir kaise call kiya?

Priya: ha yahi batane k liye phone kiya hai ki Mr. Kapoor ne khud mujhse kaha hai ki me

aap se baat kar sakti hu abhi. aur aap dono vapas india aa jayiye. aapka beta

taras raha hai aapse milne k liye.

Krishna: kya? ram mujhse milna chahta hai? yeh sab achanak kaise hua? lekin voh

niharika hai na vo usse milne nahi degi.

Priya: ma agar niharika hoti toh aapko milne nahi degi. lekin aap mil sakte hai. Mr. kapoor

aapse milna chahte hai. voh chahte hai ki aap dono hamare sath rahe.

Krishna: lekin yeh sab kaise hua?

Priya: aap ayiye fir me bataungi.

Krishna: theek hai hum next flight se nikal rahe hai.

Priya: Me rakhti hu phone. bye.

Krishna: bye

Ram: bht achha kia tumne. hum baad me dadi ko batayenge.

Priya: nahi Ram. hum dadi ko surprise denge.

Ram: theek hai. chalo chalte hai.

AUSTRALIA

Krishna: apeksha apne bags pack kar lo hum india ja rahe hai.

Apeksha: ma achanak kaise?

Krishna: priya ka call aya tha. ab pack karo bags humme 2 hrs me nikalna hai airport k

liye. tumhe sab me raste me bata dungi.

Apeksha: theek hai ma.

Priya is back from classes. Krishnaji calls her.

Priya: hello ma! kahiye aap kab aa rahe hai?

Krishna: hum kal 4pm tak India pahuchenge.

Priya: yeh toh bht achhi baat hai.

Krishna: chalo me rakhti hu. kal milte hai.

Priya: jee thik hai. have a safe journey!

Krishna: thanks.

Priya calls Ram

Priya: ram ma ka phone aya tha. voh unki flight kal 4pm india pahuchegi.

Ram: yeh toh bht achha hai.

Priya: ha. abhi me rakhti hu.

Ram: thik hai. bye.

Priya: bye

its next day 2pm.

Priya: dadi me or Mr. kapoor abhi 3hrs me ate hai.

Dadi: ja kaha rahe ho?

Priya: dadi aapke liye surprise hai. hum jaldi aa jayenge. Tab tak rishubh hai na aapke pas.

dadi: theek hai tum dono jaldi aa jana.

Priya: jee dadi.

its 4pm. they are outside the airport. Ram is in the car and he is scared. Priya is standing out. Krishnaji and apeksha come.

Krishna: are priya tumne taklif kyu ki hum khud aa jate?

Priya: isme taklif ki kya baat.

then ram comes out n has tears. he takes the bags n keeps in the car. Krishnaji tries totalk but he just couldnt talk to his mom n sis.

Krishnaji and apeksha stare at him.

Priya: aapko journey me koi problem toh nahi hui na?

Krishna: nahi beta.

They reach Kapoor Mansion. Ram runs to his room.

dadi shocked to see her bahu n her poti and looks at priya.

dadi: yeh tha tumhara surprise?

priya: ji dadi. kaisa laga yeh surprise.

dadi: yeh toh bht achha surprise hai priya puttar.

she hugs priya.

krishna ji and apeksha take blessings from dadi.

to be continued.

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Alaadin

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Posted: 11 years ago

Nice update. Continue ASAP

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salsaly

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Posted: 11 years ago

bhai... lovely update.. i love it !!! bhai , ye kya , aapne chapter no.s upar heading me nahi likhi... pls likh lena... nyc one !!! muje next part jaldi chahiye... so continue asap !!!!

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rayaloveland

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Posted: 11 years ago

This content was originally posted by: salsaly
bhai... lovely update.. i love it !!! bhai , ye kya , aapne chapter no.s upar heading me nahi likhi... pls likh lena... nyc one !!! muje next part jaldi chahiye... so continue asap !!!!

mujhe voh karna nahi aata. pls help me. I will continue soon

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salsaly

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Posted: 11 years ago

This content was originally posted by: riddhu123
mujhe voh karna nahi aata. pls help me. I will continue soon

wen u update parts as post reply... after posting , go to first page where u have written part 1 , click edit & then change the heading ( example raya scene_ part 2 updtd_27.4.12_ on pg 2 )...

hope u understood... thank u & sorry !!!

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