Oh my god, Navin this is amazing! None of us would mind if you made this into an ff! As a reader, I've always maintained the following expression taboo when commenting on an author's work, but
I want more!
This is a story that many write, but your take on it is so original. I love the viewpoints you write this from - Khushi almost suicide attempts, her return to KKG, the gossip, Arnav's despair at the gossip, Khushi overcoming her despair, her adoptive parents helping her, Payal half shunning Khushi. It's all wonderful!
And what is the meh half interesting nonsense? I'm practically jumping I love this so much already
I am very very excited to read more of this story!
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