OS -RaYa ke Bacche part 2...

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Posted: 2012-04-14T06:59:45Z
Its was dull winter afternoon... Allya n arhaan were on a school trip... Daddhi had went to Amritsar with rishab [In my story niharika n d other evils dont exist ] krishuji n apeksha were in australia...So it was only ram n priya in d house..
Ram Is sitting on d sofa,watching a not so interesting match.. priya here is bored so she is checking out albums...
Der is complete silence [ignoring d tv sound ] sum1 had to break dat cold silence,here was priya to do d job...
Priya - Ram ye dekho kya hai..
Ram absolutely disinterested asks
Ram-kya hai yaar ? Mujhe match dekhne do na...
Priya-mujhe pata hai aap match dekhne me interested nahi ho , sirf timepaas ke liye dekh rahe ho.. Uss tv ko chodiye aur yaha aayiye... Look at this .. Jaldi...
Ram-uff yaar kya hai..
Struggling to get up,ram moves towards priya n asks
Ram- haan kya dikhana chahti ho ?
Priya-ye pic yaad hai aapko.. Says so n points at a particular pic in d album...
Ram-(smiling) haan.. Ye din me kaise bhool sakta hon... Meri toh halat karaab ho gayi thi..
Priya (giggling)- haan.. Uss din toh mujhse zyaada toh aapko tension ho gayi thi..
Ram-Obviously priya kaisa na hota mujhe tension... It was such a crutial day of our lives ... Mujhe aaj bhi yaad hai...
Goes to black-white flash back mode..
6.5 years ago...
Ram priya r in d room.. Priya lying on d bed.. Ram sitting beside her.. Holding her hand says
Ram-Aaj ko priya tumhari delivry date hai.. Pata nahi kya hoga...
Priya-kya hoga kya ram.. Baccha hoga.. aur nahi toh kya... Aap bhi na itna tension kyu lete hai..
Ram-tension toh hogi hi na.. Agar tumhe toda sa bhi dard mehesoos hua to turant mujhe inform kardena.. Me yahi pe hon..
Priya-haan teek hai...
Krishuji n dadi along wid apeksha n rishab enter..
Krishuji had a plate in her hand wic contains dry fruits n pieces of apple
KK-priya ye phal kha lo.. Isse tumhe talat rahegi delivry ke tym pe...
Daddhi-haan puttar.. Aur ye lo.. Ye anjoor ka juice bhi pee lena..
Apeksha-Bhai.. Aaj aap baap banne wale ho .. Toh feeling nervous ?
Ram-very yaar.. Mujhe toh lag raha hai ki aaj meri hi delivry hone waali hai..
Rishad-waise aapka peth dekh ke aisa hi kuch lagta..
Ram-rishab ke bacche..
Everyone laughs...
Priya-Aaa...
Ram gets tensed n asks
Ram-labour pain start ho gaya.. ? Rishab ambulance ko bhulaon doc ko phone karo jaldi jaldi.. Priya sirf panch min haan.. Chill
Priya-nahi..
Ram-nahi ho raha.. ? Ek min .. Rishab jao jaldi..
Rishab runs out..
Priya-nahi ram... mera labor pain nahi strt hua hai...
Ram-toh phir aaa... Kyu kaha...
priya-wo aap mere haat ke upar betein hai..
Ram quickly gets up...
Ram-oh.. Sorry..
meanwhile Neha n vik enter...
Neha-kaisi ho priya ... ?
Priya-first class... Yahi q tumhe ram se poochna chahiye...
Vik-kyu ? Pregnant toh tum ho na...
Priya-lekin mujhse zyaada tension toh inhe ho rahi hai...
Neha-aw... How sweet.. ?
Ram-jao priya... Tum sabke saamne aise mera mazak kaise uda sakti ho ? Jao me baat nahi karta..
Priya trying to get up...
Priya-suniyeto rammm...
Aaa... Screams... Holding her abdomen
Ram-I m not buying it priya [turning away frm her]
Neha-Fatty priya ko sach me dard shuru hogaya hai..
Ram turns around quickly... Worried..
Moves towards her whos screaming on pain..
Ram-chalo hospital chalte hai... Vikram gadhi nikhalo.. Neha daddhi aur maa ko le jao me priya ko lekar aata hu..
Saying so he lifts her... She is crying in pain...
After raeching the hospital..
Ram holds priyas hand who is lying on d stretcher... N says "Kuch nahi hoga priya... tum dheeraj rakho..."
Priya nods her head in pain..
Ram-breathe priya breathe hard...
D doc takes her in d OT.. N tells ram dat priya is week n dey must perform d cezarian to take d baby out... He says dat due to priya age diff dey hav to take dis step...
Ram worried lyk hell walks lyk a mad man round n round...
He walks to n fro.. His BP shoots.. He is under a lot of stress..
Its been 2hrs now... All r awaiting d arrival of d baby...
THe Doc cums out...
Doc-Mr.Ram kapoor... Congrats aap ek pyaari si pari ke pita ban chuke hai...
Hearing dis everyones so excited..
Ram toh itna kush hogaya ki he fainted...
All of dem took ram to a ward n laid him on d bed...
Priya after gaining conciousness looks at d doll n crys... N she sees everyone but ram..
Priya-ram kaha hai?
Neha-wo ram...
Here ram is still lying on d bed..
Priya walks in wid a beautiful angel in her hand...
Ram gains his senses n sees priya wid d baby..
Priya hands d baby into ram's hands..
Rams eyes fillled wid water sees d child kisses her on d forehead...
Neha cums in n says cheeez...
D perfect pic...
Ram-toh uff ye sab kuch hua tha uss din...
Priya-hAMari lyf kitni adhuri hai inke bager na ?
Ram-haan sahi kaha
Saying so dey hug...
Hope u guys enjoyed...
Plzz leave ur coments n hit d like button
Edited by Pinky.Raya - 2012-04-20T03:31:30Z
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Posted: 2012-04-14T07:22:04Z
me first, me first...yaay!! Dancing
Di that was so very cute Embarrassed
and u wrote it so wellClapClap
 loved itHeart
and m telling u, u have to update it and not just let it go, Ok
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Posted: 2012-04-14T07:36:04Z
its lovely...so supab...such cute imagination...keep posting more...
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Posted: 2012-04-14T07:52:14Z
thank u so much. Haven't read so compliment it later..
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Posted: 2012-04-14T08:03:46Z
Originally posted by Nancy_NUTS


<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="2" color="#0000cc">me first, me first...yaay!!</font>
Dancing
<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="2" color="#0000cc">Di that was so very cuteEmbarrassed</font>
<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="2" color="#0000cc">and u wrote it so wellClapClap</font>
<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="2" color="#0000cc">loved itHeart</font>
<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="2" color="#0000cc">and m telling u, u have to update it and not just let it go, Ok</font>
U too had written one post on the topic related to raya kid, hadn't u? Btw ur post on same topic was hilarious n emotional at the same time. Why didn't u continue? Continue that post. I mean post on raya kid. I got confused whether that was urs or sammy's one but that post was superb.. If that one was urs then i request u to continue..
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Posted: 2012-04-14T08:04:32Z
That was so sweet and cute pinky di.
Come up with more and more os and ff.
You are a very good writer. :-)
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Posted: 2012-04-14T08:11:25Z
superb loved it, ClapClap
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Posted: 2012-04-14T08:14:01Z

i love it...
thanks a lot 4 this lovely OS... Hug

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