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roseycheek

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Posted: 11 years ago

wat a wonderful cocept! looking forward to read more...

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731943

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Posted: 11 years ago

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ilive2laugh

@ilive2laugh

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

wow she is really hurt and mad...cutting her hair was just scary.

nice chapter btw

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731943

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ilive2laugh
wow she is really hurt and mad...cutting her hair was just scary.
nice chapter btw

Thank you :)

If I'm honest I just wanted the Khushi in my imagination to not be wearing that atrocious hairpiece. It was either this or having her accidentally set fire to it. 😆

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dumas

@dumas

IF-Stunnerz

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

ouch she just cut her hair out loved it that was scary loved how she responded but did not think she acted loved it thanks for the pm

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purplekid

@purplekid

IF-Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

I liked how you made her cut her hair! That sounded liberating somehow! And OMG! You just inspired me... Imma write, post then scrap you! Please do check it out when I write it!

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Nina

@-Maggie-

Goldie

Posted: 11 years ago

Nice chapter!!! My favourite line: "Okay. I personally don't want to slip and fall. It's not so much that I'm worried I'll get hurt as I am that you'll be the one that's there to catch me."

I can see Arnav wincing at this line...I know I did!

Good job.

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arshifreak2711

@arshifreak2711

Groupbie

Posted: 11 years ago

Good riddance to the awful hairdo ...😆

naice update !!!

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Bibliobibulus

@Bibliobibulus

IF-Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

Fantastic update.. I'm trying to imagine what Khushi would look like with shoulder length hair, and I just can't get a picture in my head.. But it has to be better than the atrocity they make her put on her head in the show..

I love how Arnav picked the apron up and put it on again, just because she'd told him too.. And the fact that he ate what had to be some disgusting congealed mess, just to punish himself.. And even though Khushi doesn't want to make any of this easy on him, she can't stop herself from asking him to be careful.. She doesn't want him to get hurt...

The million sorries scene reminded me of the day Arnav found out about Khushi's engagement on the show.. Beautifully written...

Thanks for the PM.. Loved the update.. :)

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purplelove

@purplelove

Goldie

Posted: 11 years ago

😭 The hair cut, ouch. 👏 Actually from someone who use to have really long hair, that was intense.

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