Hi all, written a new part with Ram-Priya-Peehu...on page 13. I started this FF long back,so instead of Peehu, there are other kids upto part-3.
Part-1 Page 1
Part-2 Page 5
Part-3 Page 10
Part-4 Page 13
Part-5 Page 16
Hello everyone!Let me introduce about me & my family.You know my mamma-papa better than me. What people call them...ahhh.. ok! something like 'Priya' to my mummy & 'Ram' to my 'dad'. Actually there are many people in my house. I don't know much about the other people,I would tell about others later but one lovely lady pampers us a lot. She calls my dad as 'Golu puttar'. I am confused cause same thing my mamma & other people says for my brothers & me...????
One lady always yells on my mamma. Daadi always keeps shouting at her as "oyee'Chutaki". When she kisses on my cheeks, some color appears on my cheeks...Dad shouts at her, "Please mummy aap khayal rakhiye. Apna lipstick kam kejiye. Meray bachoko skin irritation ho jayega ! That brings a smile on my mamma's face.
Ok.I am here to ask u something .My Pa teases my mom that I am the only one ...among his children who is not naughty.Others r just like him...what he says...'Panjab de sher'. Why he is proud of them. Let me show u...
Rishabh: Priya bhabhii! I dont know, how my favorite Jelly disappears from the refrigerator every day. Can u find out plz? Aap shayad mystery solve kar sakti ho..jaise 'Pushtaini haar' ka mystery aapney solve kiya tha.
Priya to herself: OMG!!!!!!!!!How he has done it again???????? Mr. Kapoor ko bhi 'besan kay ladoo' churaney ki aadat thi.Bilkul apney papa pe gaya hai.
In Kitchen RaYa Juni1: Yummy jelly! Let me finish it before anyone!!!!!
RaYa Juni2: Pandu uncle! u know whose son am I? U know he is India's no. buiz tycoon.Take this dairymilk for ur kid.
Mamaji: Ram dekho yeh Piiriya kay bachhe! phir se ek accident kar diya. Maine toh peheley hi kaha tha yeh Priya kay laad-pyar ka nateeja hain!
Ram(angrily): Mamaji yeh mat bhulna woh mera bhi beta hai. He has closed the case successfully by giving a chocolate to Pandu.
Tensed Priya(to herself): kyon humarey bachhe 'Mr. Kapoor' ki sab bad habits follow kar rahe hain.
Raya Juni 3: Muaaah! (Ram's Buiz-friend & his wife with their 2 year old daughter had come for a dinner at Kapoor mansion.RJ-3 kissed their daughter.)
Priya: Ram have you seen, Mr. Roy's daughter cried so much. Abb! bas yahi baki tha... meray baccho ko sikhana!Yeh kyon itnay shaitan ho gaye hain.Aapney bigada hain unko...
Ram:Oh meri Gudiya!don't worry. Ek kiss he to kiya hai. Baccha he to hai.Tum bhi na chhoti-chhoti bantey dil pe leti ho aur rona suru...
Saaniya,Kudos for your post...Reading your post made me travel back to memory lane..You have indeed come out of your pupa stage and blossomed into a butterfly...Chaka mar diya with this post...You envisioned the future and took BALH to FF track...loved this cute golu molu ...good job
The lil one loves jelly very much...kindhearted like his father...Liked your style of writing but didn't like Priya musing he has all the bad habits of Golu...Golu is a sweet heart compared to a lot of men out there yaar..When u wrote this u stuck to the story lines...Niharika, Dadi, Rishabh, klep Mammu...go on writing ..it was something very unique