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Posted: 2012-03-31T11:16:01Z
heyy guyzz aftr clearing my all misunderstandings with my  software i  m back with  my weekend FF or tortur fr u u guyz but what to do Petrol khtam hi nahi honda 

so here is part 1 


Priya was shckd afte hearing so called Wrning or Challange frm her Mother in Law  she cleared all the tears tht were cmng frm her voice she didn't understand why was she cryng bcs of niharika's taunt & challange or the way Ram has taken his hand back frm her or bcs she was nt abl to do any thng to  protect her sis with all this thaought she came bac to her room.

Ram was their in room waitng for priya he wanted to talk to her to assuer her she need not to erry he is thr to prtct  her and her family .

Ram : Priya kya hua kya soch rahi ho chalo dnnr karte hain .

Priya :  who was lost in her thaught came back to reality ha MR. kapoor  main bolti hu Bansi kaka ko dnr lane  ko 
Ram & priya were hvng dnnr but Priya was too quite today ram thaought maya be  she was dstrbd so he dcded to talk to her aftr dnr .
Ram : Kya hua Priya tum itni paresan  kyn ho dnt wrry sab thik ho jayega aurr abb to tumhe khush hona chaiye ki tumhare aurr nutzz k man me jo misunderstandng thi Sid k liye wo bhi clr ho gayi 
 Priya : hmm Mr kapoor main thodi paresan thi but i m srry pahle mjhe sab pata kar lena tha fir apse bolna chaiye tha i m srry .
Ram : itzz ok Priya aurr main bhi Sid se bat kartta hun u dnt wrry .
Priya : thanxx MR. kapoor but apko sid se bat karne ki koi jarurat nahi hain aurr agar aap ko koi prblm na ho to kya main apka Study room use kar sakti hu mjhe class k kuch kam hain .

Ram : aree isme puchne ki kya baat hain priya u can yarr aurr mera nahi wo hamara study room hain .
priya : thanx and smiled weekly .
 IRam obsrvd tht Priya was nt bhvng nrmly she was too quite and was thnkng so much even to talk to him . 
Priya  was seating in study room and was thnhkng wht will she do nw she lvs ram so much and the way niharika reacted and challanged her she was wrrd nt fr herself but fr Ram bcs she knw hw mch Ram lv his Family and whn he will cm to knw reality he will nt abl to handle it . 
nw she was sure tht this were the ppl abt whm KK ji was talkng . 

Niharika room :
  Mama : oyee sweety teri aulado me to bas ek ye sid hi kam ka nikala bilkul tere pe gaya hain  sara kamina pann bhara hain isme wahh kya bat hain . Tere iss hakim ne to aisa nushka diya ki wo Priya ka putala hi rahega iss ghar me usse to jana hi hoga aree main to kehta hu uski jagah TOTE ka putla rakhenge . jab dekho HARA pahen k ghumti hain room bhi hara hi paint karwaya .
Sid :: hmm mama thanxx apse aurr maa se hi to sikha hain ye sab .
Niharika : hmm chalo koi aulad to kam ayi mere kisi k liye to proud feel akru .
Mama : waise Sweety tune uss priya ko opn challng kar k thin nahi kia 
Niharika : bhaia aap ki prblm pata hian kya hain aap darte  bahut ho . chill us bhikaran ki itni himat nahi hain ki wo mjhse panaga le aaj usse uski aukat dikha di soo chill aurr abb apni royall scotch njy karo 
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Edited by vinan2050 - 2012-04-01T13:01:30Z
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Posted: 2012-03-31T11:36:34Z
plzz let me knw ki aange badhu ya nahi Wink
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Posted: 2012-03-31T11:51:23Z
Nice ff and that hara tota dialouges of mama was hilarious. :-D
update next part soon.
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Posted: 2012-03-31T16:35:57Z
update soon...it is interesting...
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Posted: 2012-03-31T22:45:34Z
ClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClap plz do continue 
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Posted: 2012-03-31T23:05:22Z
Srry for errors guyzzz


Part 2:

Ram wake up at mid night and ds ntv find  priya in room he moved to stdy room and find Priya slpng thr nw he was sure tht priya was upset but why she was upset with him he thaught may be she was dng her class wrk and slept their i will talk to her in mrng  and will gvg my suprise as wel jo abhi tak nahi dia  usse maine .

Next Mrnng Ram was sleeping 

Priya MR. kapoor uthiye maine brkfast mangwa diya hain fresh ho k aa jaiye .
Ram : Gm priya  main aata hu .
during the whole brkfast priya was too quite she even dsn't stop him by taking exte butter & sweet nw ram was sure tht smthng is wrong priya is upset with him  but why ?

Ram : chalo priya main tmhe drop kar dunga.

Priya : nahi Mr. kapoor main mannage kar lungi aap jaiye 

Ram: kya maanage  kar logi main tmhe drop karta hu na .
priya : Wo MR. kapor mjhe apne ek frnd k yaha jana hain so aap jaiye main pahle usse milungi fir jaungi .
 Ram : sure na 
priya : hmm  
ok byee .
Ram & priya seprately went to their destination.
evil trio watc that 
mama : oyee sweety is hakim ka nushka to kuch jyada hi tezi se kam kar rha hain tune to in pyar k panchiyo k  raste hi badal diye .
niharika & sid jst laugh .

it was aftr noon ram was  seating in his offc & was thnkng abt yesterday wyhy  Priya was nt talkng with him usnne mjhe butter aurr sweet lene se bhi nahi roka aurr mjhe drop bhi nahi karne dia na  mjhe   abhi tak uski koi call ayi wo mjhe avoid kar rhi hain lekin kyn ? thn only his phn rings 
ram see the caller name and was very happy 
Priya : Mr. kapoor wo mjhe apse kuch puchna tha .
ram : hmm bolo Priya 
Priya wo aaj main apne ghar ja rhi hun 
RAm : apne ghar matlab ?
 priya : matlab kya Maa k ghar jaa rhi hun 
Ram : to aise bolo na priya tumhara ghar to abb kapoor mention hain aurr tum waha kyn jaa rhi ho ?
Priya : MR. kapoor main waha is liye jaa rhi hun kynki main ayesha ko samjhana chati hun akhir  wo apke bhai k piche pasi hian .
Ram : ye tum kya kah rhi ho maine aisa kab kaha .
Priya : srry Mr. akapoor bus main aaj waha jaa rhi hu ye batane k liye phn kia tha 
Ram : disappointed OK 
 Sharma House :

Shipra :: oh Mrs. kapoor ayi hain hamare yaha mil gayi tjhe furssat  humare pass ane ki haa ?
Priya : kya  maa tum bhi naaa 
sudhir : priya beta tu is waqt yaha kya hua 
priya : hmm papa wo main aaj ayhi rahungi mera aap logo k sath rahne ka maan tha to main aa gayi .
sudhir ntcd that priya was  sad their must be sm reason behiund that haa kyn nahi beta tera hi ghar hain .

Night KM :

ram reached to his room and find it very Quiet  
RAm : yarr ye priya nahi hain to room kitna ajeeb sa lag rha hain uske sath bat karte haste ladte timekaise nikal jata hain pata hi nahi chalta .
RAm at his bar drnkng and thnkng  ki yar priya kyn naraz hain mjhse maine kia kya hain ya i lv her but iska ye matlab to nahi ki main  uski galat baat ko bhi support karu ye humesa mere sath hi kyn hota hain jinhe main pyar karta hu wo mjhse durr ho jate hain pahle maa, fir Vikram  hmm usne bhi mera offc chod dia , aurr abb jab mjhe ye ehsas ho gaya tha ki priya is ma lf to wo bhi chali gayi hain naraz ho ke sayad mjhme me hi koi kami hain 
 TIn namuno ram ko bar pe dekhte hain .
 mama: sweet tere hathi to Dev dass ban gaya hain aurr apni muni k yaad  me piye hi jaa rha hain .
Sid : mama aap school to gaye nahi lekin filme bhi nahi dekhi kya devdass k sath muni nahi Paro thi .
mama : aree yarr jab devdass ayi thi na to hum mvi dekhne k layak nahi thei waha tckt bechta tha black me  aurr tere bhai ki jindagi me paro nahi munni hi hain dekha nahi hain tune kaise iss budhe ko bhi javan bana dia hai usne 

Sharma house : 

Priya sensed tht hw shipra and ayesha were behavng with nutzz 
Priya Ayesha aurr maa mjhe aap done se bat karni hain .
Priya : Ayesha maine tjhse us din bhi bola tha na ki sid se durr rah 
Ayesha : di aap ko is nutzz ne hi bhadkaya hain jalti hain ye mere se aisa kuch nahi hain di main aurr sid bas ache frnd hain wo meri help karta hain ussi ne mjhe shoot aurr intrvw dilvaye .
Priya : AYesha uske bre me mjhe tujhse jane ki jarurat nhi hain and tjhe kab se kisi k support ki jarurat padne lagi haan ??  main bus tjhe samjana chati thi ki bina kisi ki hepl k aage bar aurr agar tjhe aisa koi madad chaiye bhi to mjhs bol . abb ja aurr soja .

Whn evry one left 
Nutzz : Priy mjh apko kuch batana hain 
priya : ha bolo :
Nutzz tell her abt hw sid was tryng to provouge Sponsor to change ayesha frm her dhw .
Priya : ye baat tum apne bhai se batao . wo tab sayad kuch karenge .

Priya was lyng at her bed and thnkng abt all the thngs Sid character , Niharika's challange she decided i ave to go Back and i hv to act smart mjhe Mr. kapoor ka trust apne uppar au aurr increase karna hoga aur main unse kyn baat nahi kar rhi and she msgd ram :
Mr. kapoor plzz drink jyda mat kariyega dnr kar lijiyega and no butter and sweet  gd night .
Ram  read msg and was feeling very happy  and thnk to him self wo jaaha bhi rhe usse mera khayal humesa rehta hain so sweet   aurr yaha pe main kab se hu aurr kisi ne ntc bhi nahi kia  .
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Posted: 2012-03-31T23:06:15Z
nice one ... plz continue soon...
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Posted: 2012-03-31T23:19:48Z
Nice Vinan, do continue Edited by ravichitra - 2012-03-31T23:20:03Z
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