OS-Happy Ending

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Posted: 2012-03-30T11:08:19Z
HAPPY ENDING!!

NOTE:-
1. I do NOT mean to hurt anybody's feeling by writing about the closure scene...i too can't think of BALH ending. It was just i was thinking what would happen after true faces of evil trio comes out in front of Ram, and it came randomly to me...sorry if anyone felt bad about it.
2.I've written most of dialogues in hindi, i hope that would not be a problem for u.
3. This is Bachcha's first ever attempt on writing any story or scene, so comments/criticism would be highly appreciatedHug
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Priya standing by window enjoying the feeling of rain drops falling on her hand and talking to Shipra.

Shipra: Beta, how are u all?

Priya: Maa, sab bilkul theek hain. Aap sab kaise hain? Bahut dino se aap se baat karne ka mann kr rha tha par time hi nahi mila...

Shipra: Haan haan main sab janti hun tere bahane. Tu to wahan jaake jaise hume bhul hi gayi h. Waise tu kuch bhi keh le par main un logon kabhi maaf nahi kar sakti jinhone tujhe mujhse itni dur bhej diya...bhagwan sab dekh rha h...they will surely pay for what they did one day

Priya: Uff!! Maa, aap aaj bhi wahin atki hui hain? aaj 5 saal ho gaye us baat ko. Aur waise bhi Maa ye humara decision tha ki hum yahan shift ho jayein...aur main jaldi aaungi na aapse milne.

Shipra: Tu kuch bhi keh le par wo log kabhi khush nahi reh payenge

Priya: Maa maine aap se kitni baar kha h ki aisa nahi kehte. Chaliye mujhe abhi kuch kaam h mai aapse baad mei baat karti hun

Shipra: Accha beta. Bye.Take care.

As Priya cuts the call and turns around, she finds Sam standing in front of her with eager expressions.

Priya: Sam what happened?

Sam: I want to tell u something?

Priya: what Sam?

Sam: Main aapse bahut...arr...bahut pyaar karta hun!!

Priya: huh??

Then Priya sees Raya rushing towards her.

Raya: Mumma Mumma main bhi..main bhi aapse bahut pyaar krti hun.

Sam n Raya(in excitement): we spoke correct hindi na Mom??...u always ask us to speak in hindi...see we are learning.

Priya bewildered at this kneels down only to hug her 5 year old son and 4 year old daughter.

Priya(kissing both): Aww yes, beta, u both spoke correct hindi. But who taught u??...Daadi??

Sam(pointing towards Ram who was standing at the door listening to their conversation with his trademark smirk): No Mom...Papaaa
Priya(smiling hard): Ok beta, chalo der ho rhi h na...Hurry up n leave for school...ur cab is already waiting.

Sam n Raya: Ok Mom...bbyeee

And kids leave after hugging Ram too who was still standing at the door. As the two left, he came towards Priya.

Priya: aapne sikhaya unhe?
Ram: haan...waise mujhe bhi kuch kehna hai...m bhi aapse bahut pyaar karta hun

Priya(blushing): uff Ram humare do bachche ho gaye par aap ab bhi aisi baatein karna nahi chodhte 

Ram: bachche ho gaye to kya hua?? Main aur tum to wahi hai na

Ram comes very close to Priya so as to kiss her.

Priya: Ram ye aap kya kar rhe hain. Koi aa jayega

Ram: Aane do

Just then they hear Krishna Ji calling Ram to come outside.

Ram(reluctantly leaving Priya): aaya Maa!

Priya laughs at this and ask him to go. They,then, together go outside their room only to find Krishna and Apeksha waiting for them with some envelop in hand with tensed faces.

Ram: kya hua Maa??aur ye aapke haath me kya hai?

Krishna: Beta, ye Mumbai head office se tere ex-manager ka letter aaya hai.

Apeksha: Bhai, he has written that almost each company is in loss. Bhai we r facing huge loss. He has asked u to come to Mumbai n sort out things. I think u should go.

Krishna: haan beta, mujhe bhi lagta hai tujhe jaana chahiye. Wo company tune aur tere bauji ne itne mehnat se is mukaam pr laakar khadi ki thi, hum uski aisi haalat nahi dekh sakte

Ram: Apeksha, Maa m aap logon ko pehle bhi bol chuka hun, ab mujhe un comapnies se aur unke owners se koi lena dena nahi h. Maine bauji ko vaada kiya tha ki mai us logon ko kabhi kisi baat ki koi kami nahi hone dunga, aur maine unhe sab kuch de diya h...agar wo company loss me bhi hongi na Maa to bhi Sid aur uski saat generations bina kuch kiye aaram se reh sakte hain. Rahi baat meri, toh main yahan apni choti si family ke satha apni choti si company se bahut khush hun. mujhe sirf aap logo ka saath chahiye phir m aisi kayi company yahin set up kar lunga.

Priya, Apeksha and Krishna Ji have tears in their eyes listening to Ram's words and remembering how Sweety n clan got exposed 5 years back n how Ram was in trauma but Priya n Krishu ji's love n the arrival of Sameer in their life made him forget all his pain and they all moved to Australia to live a comfortable happy life,far away from those evil people.

Ram: Arre aap log kahan kho gaye bhai??...Jara itna to dhyaan rakha kijiye ki maine subha se kuch nahi khaya h...agar aap log aise hi emotional honge to mujh bichare ka kya hoga??
All the three ladies laugh at this and begin preparing food.

Hanste Hanste Kat Jaye Raste
Jindgi Youhin Chalti Rahe
Khushi Mile Ya Gum
Badlenge Na Hum
Duniya Chahe Badalti Rahe
...
As i sat to write, it got somewhat lengthy at the end, sorry for thatOuch
Thank You
-Nancy
Edited by Nancy_NUTS - 2012-03-30T11:16:03Z
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Posted: 2012-03-30T11:26:17Z
very nice post Nancy, keep continue dear.
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Posted: 2012-03-30T11:30:23Z
awesome , superb , touching story !!!!!


continue asap...
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Posted: 2012-03-30T11:42:06Z
Very touching nancy...

Fab work..do continue..:-)
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Posted: 2012-03-30T11:45:21Z
Please continue
Very nice update
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Posted: 2012-03-30T11:46:55Z
great post Nancy. Specially now that we have dark clouds looming in the real show, such FFs are so nice to read!
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Posted: 2012-03-30T12:17:47Z
WOW!!!!!  Loved it!! great work!Star
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Posted: 2012-03-30T12:30:21Z
nice post ClapClapClapClapStarStarStarStar
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