FF: Romance Lessons in Amritsar...

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Posted: 2012-03-25T22:14:03Z

STORY 7/ 24TH MARCH 2012

Time : 9 pm…  Ram & Priya in bedroom

Priya and Ram in the bed… Priya is reading book .Ram  is  doing some pending work on his laptop…  half an hour … both are fully concentrated on their own work. She is reading and he is working on laptop..

And suddenly Priya remembers the OZ HM tour and asks : Mr Kapoor… bahut dinome humne Daljit aur Kuljit se baat nahi ki.. wo naraz ho gaye honge.

Mr.Kapoor :  aree tumhe bhi na Priya… ab kahase ye Daljit aur Kuljit tumhe yaad aa gaye..ekdam achanak.. tum to book padh rahi ho na…

Priya : ha Mr. Kapoor.. is book me na abhi Australia ka jikar kiya hai .. isi liye wo yaad gaye… bulki sirf wo nahi… wo sub yaad aa gaya… humara pahela HM .. Dadi ne sponsored  kiya hua..

Ram : haste haste …. Yes Dadi ne sponcered kiya huwa… (laptop pe kam karate karate wo priya se baate ker raha hai )

Priya : Waise Mr.Kapoor aap ko disturb nahi ker rahi hu na.. nahi to mai bole hi jar ahi hu..

Ram : aree come on… priya… tu bolti raho.. mera dhyan hai … carry on..bolo kya kahena chahati ho..

Priya:  ( book close karate karate ) laughing.. : aise hi .. Australia ki bahoot yaad aa rahi hai..

Ram : ( having question mark expressions on forehead ) Kyo bhai kya khaas baat hai.. Australia ki ?

Priya : Kya Mr. Kapoor hamara trial HM bhool gaye kya.. ? ( haste haste)

Ram : ohhh. In that sense you are referring to Australia… I see… ( in his mind Krishnaji and Apeksha are in Australia and Priya is referring to them ..)  To tumhe kya yaad aa raha hai isi waqt.( hasate hasate )

Priya : sharmate … kuch nahi…. Bass aise hi..

Ram : aree kamal kar rahi ho… tumne hi abhi bola ki Australiya ki yaad aa rahi hai..kya khhass baat yad aa rahi hai…bolo bolo.. na … ab muzse kabse sharmane lagi.. ( he laughs )

Priya: hasate haste.. aise nahi Mr. Kapoor.. muze wo yaad aaya.. jub me mono rail me akeli gaiee aur fir……………. Baad me…..

Ram : Baad me kya.. baad me aake muze rote rote hug kiya … wo..

Priya : aap nahi janate Mr.Kapoor us waqt mai kitna ghabara gaiee thi…aap ko majak lagata hai kya.. kisi ko kho jane ka dard kya hota hai.. wo aap nahi samazenge….

Ram : areee fir naraz ho gaiee meri bibi… sorry yaar… mere kaheneka matlab ye nahi tha…accha aur kya kya yaad aa raha hai ?

Priya : Opera… !

Ram : ( teasing with making funny face to Priya ) Oooppeeeraaa !...  hmmm .. fantastic… aur wo story kyat hi….haaa buuusss ab sunana maat… muze yaad hai.. jindagi bhar nahi bhulunga…

Priya: actually na Mr. Kapoor kitna Romantic tha wo play … lekin aap na bus.  Romance is not your cup of tea..  waise to uske liye…..

Ram : kya kahena chahati ho… I am unromantic….. ?  ( aankh marate .. laptop close kar raha hai )

Priya :  fir kya… aap ko kya lagata hai aap romantic hai…… ?

Ram : how can you jump to the conclusion very fast yaar  that I am unromantic..come on…

Priya : Romantic hote to……. ( teasing him with laugh)

Ram : ( with confused expressions ) kya matlab.. muze aisa romantic hone ke liye kya karana chahiye..?

Priya : jane di ji ye Mr. Kapoor… chalo ab 10 baj gaye… so jate hai..kal  jaldi walk ke liye jana hai.. na

Ram : aree ha…. Walk ke liye to jana hai.. Romantic walk with lovely wife in fresh air…! Good.

Priya( L maan hi maan me) ..buddhuram hai.. bilkul buddhu.. bilkul nahi samazate… romance kya hota hai.!!! sab muze hi batana padega..( gussa ho jati hai..) aur wash room jane lagati hai..

Ram : ( maan hi mann me ) yaar  ab isse mai kaise bata du ki Priya …. I am …..

Priya comes back.. and swiches off the lights… Ram turns to her side.. but she has turned her face to other side… lagata hai.. madam naraj ho gaiee…. Wo priya ke kamarpe haath dalke use hug karata hai.. and starts kissing her back…neck… and the life moves on….

Monring scene  :6 am .

alarm bajata hai… Priya gets up and calls Mr. Kapoor …. Aree he is not there in bed. She thinks .. he must be in wash room… so gets up .. and enters the wash room and surprised to see no Mr. Kapoor in wash room.. she comes back in the room and calls him… and just enters the study room .. ohh Ram is sitting and doing some work on Laptop..

Aree Mr. Kapoor aap yaha kabse baithe hai… ? kub uthe … muze kuch pata bhi nahi chala.. aur aisa konsa kaam itni jaldi uthke kar rahe hai aap… itni bhi kya urgency hai.. aap bhi na kamal karate hai…..

Ram  : good morning… kitne sawal ek saath… areee muze to lagata hai meri bibi nahi koi CID Inspector muzse baat ker rahi hai….. aree baba jara ek urgent kam tha.. kal raat ko pura nahi ho paya to ab jara jaldi uthe baith gaya karane… baass. Ab thoda kaam bacha hai… ek kam karo na…. aaj mai nahi aau morning walk ke liye to chalega… pleassse..

Priya :aree kam to hamesha chalata hi rahega Mr. Kapoor .. aap aise kaise ? morning walk aap liye kitna jaruri hai… ye bhi ab muze batana padega aapko?  Waise aap nahi aana chahate to aap ki marji….aur wo study room se bahar aa jati hai… and goes to washroom..

Ram : yaar isko to bahut jaldi gussa aata hai…. and  he starts his work on his laptop..

Time :7.30 am..

Priya upar aa rahi hai.. apne room me aur itne me Rishab use bula raha hai

Rishabh :Bhabi.. bhiya kaha hai…. aaj aapke walk pe nahi aaye ?

Priya : tere bhaiya ko bahut kam hai na.. wo study me kam ker rahe hai..

Rishabh : accha bhabi suno na… dadi aapko bula rahi hai.. unke room me. Aap jara unse mill li jiye na.

Priya : tu chaal mai aati hu… aise bole priya fir niche sidiya utarke dadi ke room me jati  hai..

Priya : ha dadi .. boliye.. muze yaad kiya aapne ?

Dadi : Priya Puttar… muze ab Amritsar jane ka maan ker raha hai…

Priya : aree dadi..lekin…. abhi kaise… kyo…kya ho gaya aapko..muzse koi galati hui ho to maaf ker dena dadi..please … lekin ye Amritsar wali baat mai nahi manungi….

Dadi  : aree puttar .. mai bilkul tuzse naraj nahi hu…. Muze ab golu ki bhi fikar nahi hai… tu sab acchi tarah sambhal legi… lekin ab muze Amritsar jane ka maan ker raha hai Priya… mai fir 6 mahine baad aa jaungi…

Priya : dadi aap apne golu se puch lijiye… wo aapko nahi chodenge…

Dadi : thik hai puttar .. tu ab ja.. golul ko nashta , chai de de… aur baad me usko bol muze milke hi office jaye..

Priya : thik hai dadi.. mai chalati hu..

Priya enters in the room.. Ram is reading newspaper..

Ram : aree tum aa gaiee morning walk se.. chalo ab ek saath chai pite hai…

Priya: ha Mr. kapoor …. Dadi ko bhi milke aaie… wo Amritsar jane ki baat ker rahi hai aur dadine office jane se pahele aap ko milne ke liye bola hai… maine dadi ko mana kiya Amritsar janese… lekin wo maan nahi rahi hai..

Ram : aree aisa kyo..?  Dadi kyo wapas jana chahati hai.. Amritsar…. Thik hai me dekhata hu…

Dono  newspaper padhte padhate chai pi rahe hai..

9am Dadi's room

Ram comes down to dadi's room

Ram : dadi goodmorning.. aap ne muze yaad kiya ?

Dadi : Ha gollu puttar… menu na Amritsar jane ka maan ker raha hai…. ( rote rote )

Ram : aree lekin kya huwa.. dadi…. Aise achanak Amritsar kyu?

Dadi :  golu tu ab meri baat sun.. mera na ab jaldi se ticket nikalwa de… mai jana chahati hu..ab iss baar muze maat rok.

Ram : ha dadi … ok…. Lekin aap akeli kaise jaoogi.. mai aapko akele nahi jane dunga…mai Rishabh se baat karata hu.. & he calls Rishabh..Rishabh.

Rishabh : ha bhaiyaa bolo..

Ram : Dadi Amritsar jana chahati hai.. to tum uske saath Amritsar jake use chod aao..

Rishabh: aree lekin bhaiya mera exam chalu hai… wo bhi next 20 days mere papers hai… bech me 3-4 days ki gap hai.. to mai abhi nahi ja sakata…

Dadi : golu puttar tu kuch bhi kar lekin muze jaldi jana hai Amritsar..

Ram : okkk dadi… muze jara sochaneka time dijiye.. thik hai

Dadi : Ha golu puttar .. thik hai.. waise jaldi se soch le..

Ram : ha dadi ha… ( and he comes to his room again .. priya is in front of the mirror.. baal bana rahi hai… aur bine laganewali hai…itne me )

Priya : ye kya .. aap fir wapas aa gaye..

Ram : tumhari tedhi bindi sidhi karane aaya hu uppar.. ( he laughs ) and hold priyas and hugs her.

Priya : kya Mr. Kapoor aaj office jane ka irada hai ke nahi.. dadi ko milna hai aapko.

Ram : aree baba meri class maat lo… mai dadi se milke aaya hu… wo jana chahati hai Amritsar but problem is Rishabh use chodane nahi ja sakata.. uski exam chalu hai.. to fir kya kare ?

Priya :  kya kare matlab..?

Ram : Priya… idea…. Kyo na hum dono dadi ko chodane Amritsar  ja kea aye… ? ( he is laughing )

Priya : hum  kaise ja sakate hai.. ?  aur aap ka office…. ? kam ?

Ram:   aree wo sab tum chinta maat karo… mai sub handle karunga.. chalo… bag pack kar lo.. aaj  ki flight ki tickets book ker raha hu.. 

Priya : aree lekin mr. Kapoor…  aise itne jaldi me… ?

Ram : tum ab yaar ye sawal band karo… jo bola hai.. wo karo… waise hum dono ke liye accha change bhi hoga.. dekhta hu . Amritsar ki mitti me kya khushbu hai…ki hasin wadiyome…. Hare hare khetome .. kuch romantic baan jata hu ya nahi.. waise to muze ab tumse  training leni hai.. kaise romance kiya jata hai… to kyu na hum Amritsar ki khetome… romance ki padhaie ki shuruwat kare.. kya kaise khayal hai.. ( teasing priya )

Priya : haste haste.. aap bhi na… maine aisa to nahi kaha tha?

Ram : gana gane lagata hai…   ag ye jawal ye laju nako >> ( both hugs each other and smiles
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Posted: 2012-03-25T22:45:04Z
nice work...bahut mazaa aaya ji...shukriya...aaj ke din ki shuruwat accha rahega...aap ne dil jo khush kar diya...thank you ji...WinkSmile
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Posted: 2012-03-25T23:13:36Z
very nice awesome
please update soon

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Posted: 2012-03-25T23:42:18Z
Great Scene.

Let's hope something like this is  incorporated in BALH soon. We just cant get enough of romance between Ram and Priya.
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Posted: 2012-03-25T23:49:33Z
Very nice. keep updating.
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Posted: 2012-03-26T00:07:26Z
very nice, mujhe next update ki intejar rahega, kyu ki hamein bhi tou romance kase kya jate hai sikhna hai, so dear please mission Amritsar adhri maat chodna, waiting 4 next update.
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Posted: 2012-03-26T00:13:40Z
nice superb post !!!
i also want to know what will happen after they go to Amritsar...
continue asap..
waiting..

continue soon !!!!!!!


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Posted: 2012-03-26T00:16:05Z
Great going Pangy. Can't wait.please update soon. Yeh dil maange more.
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