Lalita - this was just awesome! I just read all the chapters and LOVE your creativity! I did guess that the amnesia was an act a paragraph or two before the chapter revealed it-but I attribute that (indirectly) to the inherent desire of every RaYa fan rather than a blemish in your story-telling. Your FFs explore some truly novel ideas and make for a verrry enjoyable read.
Thank you for all your stories! Am looking forward to many more!😊