raya scene part 3 update 26-03-2012pg 4 by ASHA

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Posted: 2012-03-23T15:20:19Z
...i am writing it first time...so please forget me if u not like it. :plz: :plz: :plz:

priya was busy in her task,ram try to spend time with her but kabhi dadi to kabhi rishab koi na koi use apne saath le jata tha...them ram deside a plain...

ram- priya idhar aao,jaruri kam hain...
p- kya hua...
r- boton tut gaya hain,mujhe der ho rahi hain...
p-dusri shirt pahan lijiye...
r-are tum kese biwi ho bechara pati yaha musibat mein hain aur tumhe koi fark hi nahi parta...
p - mene kaha to dusri shirt pahan lijiye...
r - vikram sahi kahta hain aurto ko samjhna bahut muskil hain...jab us din mujhe garmi lag
     rahi thi aur der bhi ho rahi thi...phir bhi tumne meri tie khole aur shirt change 
     karvai...aur aaj mujhe tumhari  jarurat hain...to tum aaese hi ja rahi ho...
    sahi kahte hain log vakt ke saath pyar bhi phika ho jata hain...pati ki to kadar hi 
     nahi hoti...
p- aap bhi bahut natak karne lage hain...vikram ka aasar ho raha hain aap par bhi...
    sidhe sidhe kyoun naahi bolte batan laga do...
r- acha ji ab mein natak karne laga hu...jao mujhe batan lagani hi nahi hain tumse...

p- are naraj kyoun ho rahe hain mene kaha na laga deti hu...
r - nahi mujhe nahi lagwani ( smile mischiefly )
p- (understand his intention )  thik hain mein ja rahi hu...
r - are ye to ja rahi hain...,thik hain ruko...laga do batan...
p - think hain dijiye shirt...
r - are mene kaha na mujhe der ho rahi hain...aese hi laga do batan...

    ( priya come closer & start stiching batan...ram put his hand on her waist...)
p - ye aap kya kar rahe hain...
r- kuch nahi...tum thik se batan laga sako ..isliye tumhari madad kar raha hu...

   (ram started playing with her hair...)

p - ab kya kar rahe hain...
r - are tumhare baal aage aa rahe the...to socha ye tumhe disturb karege..vese bhi 
   mujhe bhi dekhana hain tum  kese batan lagati ho...
p - lijiye ho gaya...turn to go...

r-  (hold her hand...& go near her...& wishper in her ear ...) mujhe lagta hain mujhe 
    apne sare shirt ke batan tod dene chahiye...taki tum roj mere itne pass aa sako...
p - (smile...puse him back...)ha accha hain isse aapko bhi ghar ke kam karna aa 
     jayega...
r - matlab...
p - ha jab mein batan laga rahi thi tab aap ne kaha na aap dekh rahe hain me kese batan 
     lagati hu...to aapne dhekha liya hoga...
     vese bhi aapko dusri bar sikhane ki jarurat nahi part...aap pahli bar me hi sikh lete 
     hain...
r - tumhe kese pata...
p - ha jab aa  ek bar batane se hi shikh gaye the kese huk lagate hain...aur aap to ab
      usme expert hain.   ...yad hain us din...( stop in middile & realise what she is 
      saying) ...
     (both raya think about c night scene...) :blush: :blush: :blush: :blush:

r -  smile naughtly...try to come close to priya...kis din... :wink: :wink:
p -  bit her lip...shy...&run to  go out of room...
r-  try to hold her again...but fail this time...smile ... :blush:..
Edited by girdharmona - 2012-03-25T14:40:39Z
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Posted: 2012-03-23T15:59:09Z
awesome post...

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Posted: 2012-03-23T16:04:21Z
Originally posted by salsaly


awesome post...

thanks for liking it...
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Posted: 2012-03-23T21:33:11Z
SmileAwesome imagination...love it very much...thanks for posting it...Wink
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Posted: 2012-03-23T23:20:28Z
Great imagination. Kaash the CVs would have the brains to think of such scenes, then we could  get some eye catching moments of RaYaWink Edited by Indomitable - 2012-03-23T23:20:42Z
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Posted: 2012-03-23T23:36:12Z
awww it was very cute 
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Posted: 2012-03-24T03:26:03Z
wow wow wow; it's really awesome, sooo romantic just loved it muhaaa
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Posted: 2012-03-24T03:34:59Z
hey great work man...u write it very nicely ...
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