OS: I held her heart - Page 13

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Posted: 9 years ago
aww..i loved it..so emotional!!d hope factor plays a key role here n its been portrayed very well!!
Posted: 9 years ago


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Posted: 9 years ago
loved it soo.well written
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by naddiya26


i am not able to find the next part you have send the 12 page link


did i??? Shocked sorry sorry naddiya swthrt...
there is no next part... Cry 
that was itEmbarrassed
Posted: 9 years ago
AMAZING!!
That's right Arnav just let your feelings take over! Man you need to understand she's innocent. Can't blame you though..you're too cute ;)

Awesome writing again! I read this OS like 5 times because it truly captured Arnav's emotions essence! Gotta go but will keep refreshing the page to see if you update ;)
Posted: 9 years ago
I know there was so much angst throughout the OS, but it was the last line that stung me the most! :'(

Beautifully written Lyraa! :)
Posted: 9 years ago
very well written!! 
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by MrsRaizada101


AMAZING!!
That's right Arnav just let your feelings take over! Man you need to understand she's innocent. Can't blame you though..you're too cute ;)

Awesome writing again! I read this OS like 5 times because it truly captured Arnav's emotions essence! Gotta go but will keep refreshing the page to see if you update ;)

that was the only part hun... normally i have never continued my one shots the scene was from the show.. i just wrote down feelings,,,
thanks for the commentSmile

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