Arhi FF |Mohabat Door Jaane Na De| *Complete!* #1 - Page 23

That was so good!! U played it with words! Poetical expressions!😊

 beautifully written..it was so freaking emotional .

Wow!! tht was beautifully written...LOVELY update

hey

very emotional update...very very well written..

the ending was awesome..

will look forward to reading the next part soon..

thanks for the pm..

continue soon..:)

beautiful!! i love how u take us in to their emotional state so well..

omg loved the part...so emotional...hope he brings our khushi back continue soon

fabulous parts loved it a lot pls continue soon

beautifully written! it was filled with soulful words! wow!! 👏

aww so beautiful I cried with him! 

Hey it was such a beautiful n emotional update. U used the words so beautifully. I really hope the realization scene is something like this. Pls update soon.