Posted: 2012-03-12T04:58:24Z

hey zoha aaj hi last part dedi k

nice update dear
well geet plaing with mangalsutra was nice
osum para

She giggled but soon he starts kissing her lips.. I never thought you would change.. He chuckled nibbling her neck.. I have to.. Tumhe wapas lane k liye kuch bhi kar sakta hu.. She smiles closing her eyes when a light moan escape from her lops when he start sucking her throat making her go crazy..  They stayed in each other's embrace not saying anything for a longer time just feeling each others close. When she whispered. I love you.

we miss all these
epilogue osum
nice ending
with khushi returns
khushi maan geet ki conv nice
well maan khushi ki tarah baby talks geet all happy

Maan hug geet more tightly. Mama dekho Na Khushi KO. Geet laugh bringing Khushi in her lap. Kissing her both cheek. Mama Apne dono baby ki baat sunegi. Bus.


Yay.. Both yelled hugging her kissing her either cheek. She smiles happily.]

we miss FF aot ZOHA
continue ur others FF
bye TC
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Posted: 2012-03-12T05:00:51Z
Originally posted by tamanna1391

me going to miss it

mee too going to miss it... beautifully written ... loved last some lines... maan repeating daughters words. and geet's answer... mama dono ki baat sunegi... a normal family talk...
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Posted: 2012-03-12T05:22:17Z
it was sooo cuteee
will surely miss LL
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Posted: 2012-03-12T05:45:31Z
awesome update yaar!!!

Congrats for completing a fiction!!!!

loved the story... 

thanks for writing
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Posted: 2012-03-12T06:05:20Z
awesome  part
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Posted: 2012-03-12T06:12:02Z
maan will be a baby infront of geet Heart
sweet ending
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Posted: 2012-03-12T06:18:03Z
Awesome !!!
Loved it !!
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Posted: 2012-03-12T06:21:28Z
awesome ending
loved it sooo much and now it endsCryCry
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