Aaaw...you know what? I feel like the creatives would have done this scene more or less like yours! As I was reading, I was imagining each part of this scene...it sounded so realistic! Hehe..really enjoyed it...typical for both of them to act like that...aaw! Thank you for writing an alternative for this scene..loved it!!!!
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