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My Random Thoughts about 2.1.12..updated pg2

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Posted: 12 years ago

this is my 1st time i am tryin to write somethin about BALH..some random thoughts which came on my mind at work as i had nothin much to do..

and please ignore my weak english as i live in a country where ppl hates to speak english so i am sorry if i make mistakes..
 
ok the scene starts from thursdays scene..where Ram enters as Santa Clause..
 
Ram enters the Sharma house singin HO HO HO..and everyone feels very happy specially Vik and Nehas kids..but no one recognize him accept Priya..😊
 
Priya looks at him and thinks acha huwa maine unko Natz ki pregnancy ke bare main bataya dekho na kitne khush lag rahe hain bacho ke saath bilkul bache bane huwe hain..
 
Ram notice that Priya is lookin at him and he stares her as well..and neha catches both of them..
 
Neha: (in her naughty mood) Priya kya huwa waha kaha dekh rahi hoon..oh kahi Santa Clause ko Ram toh nahi samjhe..
 
Priya: smiles woh jo Santa Clause hain na wohi Mr. Kapoor hain..
 
Neha: kya fatty tumhe kaise pata..plan tha tum dono ka yeh..
 
Priya: nahi baba koi plan nahi tha magar maine unhe pehchan liya..
 
Neha: oh toh aap apne unko even Santa Clause ke avatar main bhi pehchante hain wah kya pyaar hain..
 
Priya: Neha tum bhi na..dekho woh kitne khush hain bacho ke saath..
 
Ram starin at Priya..thank you Priya mujhe itni badi good news de kar main yeh din kabhi nahi bholonga..
 
so by now everyone got that its Ram..and huggie huggie was on..
 
itne main Priya ka phone bajta hain..and she sees a new number and gets the call and says Hello kaun..on the other side is none other then our lovely new entry Krishu Ji..
 
Krishu Ji: hello Priya main Krishu Ji bol rahi hoon..
 
Priya: oh Krishu Ji aap..kaise mera matlab hain aap ne kaise mujhe phone kya..
 
Krishu Ji: haan main hoon Priya..tumhari yaad arahi thi toh socha tumhe phone karke happy xmas bol doon aur baat bhi karlo..kyun tum buzzie thi kya..??
 
Priya: nahi nahi bas woh new number dekh ke mujhe laga ki kaun hoga..buhut accha kya aapne thank you very much happy xmas to you too..
 
Krishu Ji: Priya kya baat hain buhut khush lag rahi hoon..
 
Priya: haan khush toh hoon..woh maine aap ko bataya tha na ki kisi ko kuch kehna tha magar bhol gayi thi toh maine bataya aur unko khush dekh kar main buhut khush hoon..
 
Krishu Ji: aur woh tumhare pati hain rite..??
 
Priya: haan wohi hain..Krishu Ji woh itne khush hain ki main kya batao aap ko..aur main buhut acha feel kar rahi hoon unko khush dekh kar..
 
Krishu Ji: toh jo baatein maine tumse kahi thi woh sab sach hain na..
 
Priya: kaunsi baatein..??
 
Krishu Ji: kaunsi bateein ab mujhe woh sab phir se duhrani hogi kya..Priya tumhe apne pati se pyaar hogaya hain..
 
Priya: nahi Krishu Ji woh baat nahi hain main toh bas essi hii hoon sab ki Khushi main khush hoti hoon..
 
Krishu Ji: Priya main sab ki baat nahi karrahi hoon main tumhare pati ki baat karrahi hoon jis se tumhe pyaar hogaya hain aur tum iss baat ko jitni jaldi samjho utni behter hain..
 
Priya: Krishu Ji aap bhi na maine kaha na aap se aisa kuch bhi nahi hain aur na kabhi hosakta hain..main aur pyaar nahi..
 
Krishu Ji: kyun nahi agar tum uski khushi main khush hoon toh phir yeh kya hain samjhota..??
 
Priya: pata nahi magar jo bhi hain pyaar nahi hosakta kyunki hamara rishta hii aisa hain..
 
Krishu Ji: Priya yeh pyaar hain aur mujhe yaqeen hain woh bhi iss baat ko buhut jald samjhenge..
 
Ram with a gift on his hand lookin for Priya and again Neha catches him..
 
Neha: fatty kisko dhund rahe hoon..Priya ko..
 
Ram: haan woh main..
 
Neha: kya woh main biwi hain tumhari haq se dhundo..anyways shayad uske liye kisi ka phone aaya tha woh dosre kamre main hogi..waise kya baat hain miss kar rahe hoon usko..
 
Ram: Neha tum bhi na koi muka nahi chodti mujhe chedne ka..nahi woh aaj usne itni achi news sunai na Nutz ki pregnancy ka toh main soch raha tha ki usse thanks bol doon aur yeh gift dedo..
 
Neha: wow kya pyaar hain tum dono main..jao jao
 
Ram comes near the room and sees priya talkin on the phone and doesnt want to distrub her and wants to go from there when he hears Priya talkin..
 
Priya: Krishu Ji na toh woh iss baat ko samjhenge aur na hii mujhe koi umeed hain..hum auratein hoti hii aisi hain..apni pati ki khushi keliye sab kuch karte hain magar uska yeh matlab nahi ki hum bhi iss intezar main rahe ki woh bhi hamari tarah sochte hain..atleast mere saath toh aisa kuch nahi hoga issi liye main apni zindagi main choti choti batoon se khush hoti hoon..pehle apne parivar ke liye khush hoti thi ab apne pati ke parivar ke liye bhi toh jab sab khush tab Priya khush..mujhe kisi se kuch bhi nahi chahiye..
 
Krishu Ji: Priya mujhe buhut khushi hain ki main tum jaise honhar ladki se mili hoon..chalo ab main phone rakti hoon milte hain phir..
 
Priya: thank you bye..
 
Ram knocks the door..and Priya sees him and says Mr. Kapoor aap yahan..
 
Ram: haan woh Priya main tumhare liye kuch laya tha..magar tum phone pe busy thi..
 
Priya: oh its ok woh meri couschin classes se kisi ka phone tha..aap boliye kya kehna hain aap ko..
 
Ram: oh bas yeh chota gift hain tumhare liye..tumne ujhe itni achi news sunai hain issiliye..
 
Priya: Mr.Kapoor iski koi zarorat nahi thi..mujhe toh aap ko buhut pehle batna chahiye tha magar main bhol gayi uske liye sorry..
 
Ram: its ok thanks..
 
Priya: chale Mr. Kapoor hall main sab intezar kar rahe honge..
 
they go to the hall and Ram still starin at Priya and thinks about what Priya was talkin on the  phone and then comes balh song.. (new lyrics by me.. πŸ˜†
 
male version
 
Tumse milke tumko pake khush hain meri yeh duniya..
Kehna chaho main bhi tumse apni sari khushiyan..
Magar main keh na sako..
yeh majbori..yeh tanhai..bechaini aur hum..
 
i know its very stupid..feel free to comment/criticize but i had nothin to do so i thou lets try this..πŸ˜›
 
Edited by Celina_ - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
πŸ˜ƒ oh ,celina your ff is the coolest wish the cvs heed by your advie plz do continue.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Celina nice story.. Continue writing, Its interesting..Lets hope 1/1/12 brings good tidings in Raya's life..
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Posted: 12 years ago
very nice            thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice one, Celina!!!
do continue...lets hope to have a fresh, new beginning in RaYa's story in the new year'sπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice 1 do cont and the lyrics were awesome πŸ‘
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Posted: 12 years ago

very enjoyable, i really wish osme of the cvs start visitng our forum we have such wonderful scenes thanks to you and the other writers here.

 
awesome lage rahu πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome lyrics for Ram! very nice scene Celi. πŸ‘ Loved it. U remember Sakshi's interview at big star red carpet...she has said sumthing about Ram to become a Santa for Priya.He should do sumthing to make her happy. Hope the scene like you have written, is on the way. Edited by saniya9919 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice celina... continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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