my random thoughts.. ff pg .16. 21-1-2012 - Page 2

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I start  this with ram  and  priya fighting'

 Ram in the  office  thinks he is tiered of fighting with priya' he  go to house late .. by then  priya  is  sleeping in the couch  sitting    with book in the hand'

 RAM enter the room , priya is awake .. as usual she greets him

Priya :  arey  agaye aap.. bahut dheer ho gaye'

Ram  remain silent  , lokking at her,  priya came back to her senses and  remembers how rude  he was with her    in the morning'. Stand up and  go near intercome and as   the cooks to come to  ram's  room ' 

BAnsi kaka :  aap  ko kuch   chahiye madam

Priya  : nahi     mein  kahana kha chukka hu '  mr. kapoor abhi ayi   aap unse puch lijiye..

BAnsi kaka  ..    sir  aap  kya  khayege aaj '.    Befor  ram could answer   bansi kaka  says  we have strict orders to  look after u  sir .. and   spells his menu  out and the  rest all  cooks and servents are there in the room

 Ram  looks  at priya  '.. who is reading her nbook  and lost in her own  way but enjoys   all that is happening..  as ram   habit of ordering his food is  gone after priya  came in his life.. he finds to order his own  food very difficult

Soon food came inn  .. they  took the food inside his room  .. while   bansi kaka and troop are about to leave.. priya  calls out kaka

P:  arey aap kaha jar aha hai..   yehi ruk na   mr. kho kaun  serve karega ' aur upper se yeah   baadha mein  chillathe hai ki  iss ghar mein  serve karne kha koi  aur nahi '.

KAKA:  gi madam ''. And  remains at the place'..   ram  is stirred up  with anger with priyas words..frowns at priya  through eyes'

Ram finish  his supper  and was on bed  priya  went near to take pillow'  and  move towards  couch..

R:  kaha  ja rahe ho''

P:  sone .. aur kaha  ja sakthe ho ..  

R:  itna din  tumnne bed par  sogaye na ..  shouting at her ab zayada natak math kar..  ah  yeaha so javo

P:   ohhh  ab  aap yeah  decide karega ki mujhe kha  sona hai.. waha kuch option nahi hai  chen  se sone ka'  ab mujhe  chen  se sona hai..  and moves towards    couch

R:  kya kha tumne .. very angry  ram  'chen matlab  tum mera  karatom ki baaath kar raha ho na'

P : aur nahi tho kya..  kisi  engine  ki   souch  se kam nahi hai.. jitna bhi ruhe dalo  phir bhi  avaz tho ayega'''.

R: haan   dalo  .. kaun mana kiya tha aap ko '.   Mera karma  hai  mera bed hai ..  mera marzi.. jo chao karlunga '..  gana jana gan hai tho  gaunga  , agar  nach na  hai tho nachunga ..

 Mara  marzi hai..

 Priya   turns on  cd player    haan tik hai  nachna  mujhe kaya  pharak padtha hai aap ka  karma and  aap ki marzi'

 Ram sees  at her angriy  who is standing  near to him and   repeating his words.  Seriously pulls priya to his arms  holds her tight  by her waist..

R:   haan  nach na chati hu '..  nacho mera sath '.. 

P: feeling  nervour  her pitch   became less'..  trying to get out of his arms'   mein kyu aap ki saath nachna hai ..  sab kuch  aap ka hai yeah  par   mein  nahi  hai na'. aap ki  sath  mera ristha samjotha hai  na  ..    ab mein  kyu aap se nachu'  aap ka zinda gi mein  mera koi hak nahi banta hai  '  kis adi kar  se mujhe pakda ''  angry  ram   jholds her  still  close 

R:  mein  kaun hu  '  tum bhul gaye mein kaun  hu  tummari.. for ur  kind information   mein tumara pati hu..   tum par mujhe hak hotha hai..

P: oh rally  aap mera pati hai  tho aap ki patni nahi'. Mera koi  haak nahi bantha hai na  aap ke uppar'''..

Ram  immediately  leaves her .. seing    tears in her eyes' priya  switch off the  cd player and  go near couch and sleep .. ram got  shocked and   was thinking of all the questions he   was put  by  priya''..

Ram was sleep less as well priya  both think of the  days they spent together'  ram remembers  priyas hand on his'priya  remembers she ask  ram s permission to hold his hand and sleep' 

Both  drift to  sleep  thinking of  both of them''..

  Tune  plays  .. Bade ache lagthe hai  '''''''''.

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recap

Here in Sharma house    everybody is happy'. About Natasha'  Ayesha  suggest to call  ram priya  for dinner tonight in order to celebrate  as ram was not told abt  nuts officially.. he wil be really happy for her sister ' and isse bahane humme toda time milega  di aur jiju ki  saath..Priya 's mother and father   say's  yes to the idea..  sudhir ji says that  after  their marriage  they had never had a family dinner  along with ram .. they decided to call ram  to the  dinner  after all he's become their family''''''''''and proud of their damath

In kapoor mansion:

Ram feel literally bad for treating priya. But he want to avoid  her  by the  time he woke up he could not find priya  in the room '' soon he freshen up and sat  with paper  but could not concentrate'''.  Called her mobile .. it was lying on the couch'..

R: yeah priya bhi na'. mujhe kya hai '  ram tu itna pareshaan kyu ho raha hai'.

Then he went to dadi 's room  dadi was alone and went in and enquired abt  priya'

DADi:  arey golu iddar ah tumse baath karna hai

R: wo priya '. Ghare mein  nahi hai kya app ko batha kar gaye

DAdi: mujhe bataya tha par mein na tumme nahi batihu '''.

R:yeah kya haio dadi'.. mera dam gutraha hai ' kaha gaye yeah priya'''

DAdi: kyu   bathay tumme  tum mera bahu ko  itna duk de raha hai' na'   mat karo  puttar'.. biwi ko duk dena acha baath nahi hai'  tum kyu  apnre kam ki takleef us par utar raha hai' bechara sab kuch  sehan raha hai..  uska cheharepey   muskan  hai  par unka  dil ki duk  akhome  dika deti hai' tumme kyu nahi dikhate hai  in akhome tumariliye paayar aur duk bhi.. hai

 Tu mujhe  promise kart um mera bahu ko khayal  karha hai .. aur usse duk nahi  detha hai.. tabi  tak mein tumse baath karlunga''..

R:  plz dadi   aise mat kahiyega   mein promise kartha hu .. mein priya kha  khayal  rakhunga pakka ''.. aap naraaz math ho jaye ga.. waise wog gaye kha'.wo bhi akhele'

Dadi: puttar  won a  bahut  dull hai  . mujhe keha diya ki wo  pehale mandhir aur phir se  NGO mein kam tha  waha jate hai..  pjikar na karo   tera biwi  akhele nahi .. rishub gaye   priya ke saath.. tum jao   nastha karo  aur office kheliye  dher ho raha hai na..

Ram   says  thanku to daadi and leave from there'. All the day in the office he was thinking of priya' how rude he behaved with  her..   all his shouting  for priya''  her tears and every thing' he opens his laptop to work but  he could not work  '. He decided  not to bother priya.. any more and  dosent want to hurt her' ''then  with all his efforts he  tried to call priya but his ego  hurted and  stopped him..  and finally texted her'..  "when will ur classes finish'." '. Priya was shocked to see the text from  ram  as she is  in the class  she replied " am now in class  will  finish in an hour'  kuch kam tha mujhe?" '. With that ram decided not to  interrupt priya in the class.. and reach there to pick her  home..

Priya came out of the  coaching classes  soon finds ram standing out near the car.. ''  whos waiting to pick her up'   aap yeha ' . then ram answers  her  as he was passing this way so   stoped to pick her up.. but priya senses  ram 's  intentionally coming  there   sit in the car and  say him thanks'.   Ram ask her   if she has some work at home' or  they can   go late  as he has some work in the middle'  priya says ok..

Ram drives   long and haults   near the a mandhir'.  Ask priya to ge t down  .. priya question  him     u  have work in mandir?? Ram nods his head and make way towards mandir''.  Darshan  ke badh  R:  sorry priya..  with all his efforts.. I was so rude .. 

P stops him in middle and  no need  it was all my fault  plz  dnt feel sorry I should not asked u ..   I wnt ask u any thing  I dnt wanna knw anything abt ur past which hurts u so much tears rolled ' ram holds priyas  sholder  to console her. Plz dnt cry I cant see u like this   and thank  god for  priya'. Then priya looks at him and say aap plz mujhsenaraz math ho .. mujhe pe chillvo math .. kaafi hai mere liye'  kaafi din hogaye aap ki chehare par hasi  dekar  sab mera galti hai..

R: interrupts   plz priya it wasn't ur problem .. u did nothing and I  hurted u a lot'''  sorry and  holds his ears . priya  smiles  at his action '. Ram says  Maan gaye tum  itna jaldi ''..  mein  na tumse kabhi  duki nahi dekh saktha'''.   Chalo  chalthe hai

Ram haults  near  priya's fav  kulfi point'.   And  madam  here comes it'..  yeh aap and  ram pulls priya down..   ram orders for a kulfi .. and priya  says  aap kho hygein ki problem haina  and smiles .. phir se taunt'.  Ram gazes at  priya while she enjoys  kulfi.. then ram look around and see a couple sharing kulfi  looks ' priya says   mr. kapoor  app bhi  khayiye na  aaj  bahut acch hai taste hai..   ram  says  sachi .. and  take kulfi  from her hand which she is eating  and have a bite '.   Says hmm  ur true.smiling '''.. ram pays  to the kulfi and enter to the car . priya  finishes the  remaining part ram shared with her and  shyly sit in the car'''''.