OS: It was that moment - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
BeautifulEdited by Kritianya - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
It was that moment when tears slipped from my eyes unbridled...
It was that moment when I realized I love you so much that it hurts...
It was that moment when I knew I could love no one more than you...
And it was that moment when I came to know that we were not meant to be...

Loved it Lyraa...really...no more words :)

Cheers,
Fatima
Posted: 9 years ago
m happy for la..she has a happy endin sumwhr
Posted: 9 years ago
yar i just loved it..it was really nice..awsome..my eyes welled up ..they way u have written.kudos to u
Posted: 9 years ago
That was amazing! Loved reading from Lavanya's perspective, I really hope something like this happens in the show.  Very well writtenStar
Posted: 9 years ago
awesome work...pls do continue and let me know too
Posted: 9 years ago
AMAZING OS!!!!!!!
lyraaa...loved it
it was like for real...
u described lavanya's emotions so beautifully
i had tears in my eyes while reading this...
bt sooo happy  that u gave her a happily ever after...
she deserves it...n u did justice to her character...
hope the cv's show sumthing like ur wonderful os for la...
thnx for the pm...

~sam 
Posted: 9 years ago
Very nice with la,s pov

Well written

Thanks for the pm


I feel very bad for la now

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