OS: It was that moment - Page 12

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Posted: 9 years ago
wow
one moment that changes life 
Posted: 9 years ago
Wow! How refreshing (and painful) to read something from Lavanya's POV! Glad she finds her soul mate in the end. She deserves to be happy, too!
Posted: 9 years ago
Really, beautifully written... You described the emotions so wellSmile
Edited by Happy-go-lucky - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
Hi Lyraa,
             Lavanya's feelings were so poignantly expressed in your OS.Each sentence was full of emotions. It was brilliant.Loved the happy endingClapClapClap
Posted: 9 years ago
In all the FFs and SSs and OSs that i have read i had never come across any written from Lavanya's prospective, the girl who had been vengeful and spiteful and yet who had changed so drastically and become the sweet friend of her Chamkili, who had seen and understood their love even when they themselves hadn't done so.

I really liked reading something from her perspective. Liked the way u have put her thoughts out without even naming her.

Posted: 9 years ago
Tht was really really sweet.
Posted: 9 years ago
wow..that was quite something..so moving. Thinking of it this way from Lavanya's point of view..such a brilliant thought. And so well executed! the writing is beautiful! emotions so well portrayed...my fav lines, 'it was that moment' & 'watching my dream through the eyes of a spectator'..wow..perfect! This for me is the best OS of your's that i've read so far..and they're all pretty good! Clap

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