OS: It was that moment - Page 10

You have portrayed Lavanya's emotions really well. It's amazing.. And the end I liked much more because I love happy endings😊

this is just absolutely brilliant!

wow! so beautifully written! totally loved it. 

poor lav ! but iam happy at last she found her soul mate !! thank u so..much for sharing !! well written - emotionally ! 👏👏👏👏

Loved it. Really its the first time I've felt that another soft side of Lavanya can be depicted. Really brilliant concept.

It's more that one years old, but it's awesome .. 

wow lavanya's POV...the emotions never seen before

luvd d OS...!
U have potrayed each nd evry emotions so dam perfctly...i jst luv d line -
''I stood there watching my dream from the eyes of a spectator..''
truly suprb...!

That was perfect <3 <3 Bookmarked! Beautiful!

Loved this OS...  Just read it today for the first time.  Lavanya... I felt so sorry for her... but there was someone special waiting for her just around the corner literally.