Sindoor Tere Naam Ka

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Posted: 18 years ago
I'm so so so so so sorry that I don't update my fan fic when I say I will. I'm really really sorry!!!! Anyway here is the next part!!!

Recap:
Dhruv: Woh ek surprise hain...aur tum ek kaam kyun nahi karti? Tum ek cd play karo

VedS: Kaun si???
Part 6

Niharika and Rahul

They are having a lot of fun together because they are

finding so many things in common, and Rahul is really

starting to like Niks.

Rahul: Ok enough chit-chat, hum aab serious baata karte

hain…to….(niks interrupts)

Niks: serious talk?? Kya matlab hain tumhara??

Rahul: matlab….ke main tumse kuch saval karonga aur tumhe

woh saab saach saach batana parega..

Niks: ok I'm ready

Rahul: aacha to mere phele saval hain…(niks interrupts)

Niks: Jab tumhare saab saval poore ho jayenge to kya mein

bhi tumse pooch sakthi hoon??

Rahul: Of course!!!! AAB NO MORE INTERRUPTING!!!

Niks: Ok baba sorry!!

Rahul: kya tumhara koi boy friend hain??

Niks: Nahin, varan woh mera saath iss waqt nahin hota??

Rahul: ok, sorry iss mein itna chir ne ki kya baat ain??
(irritate)

Niks: sorry aab pooch

Rahul: Kya tumhe koi larka pasand hain??

Niks: Ummmmm………

Rahul: U have to answer honestly.

Niks: I know I know. Ok haan mujhe ek larka pasand hai

Rahul: kaun hai woh??

Niks: Woh…….(her mobile rings)

Niks: Hello!!! Oh Dhruv, haan hum….KYA??? Tum log

saab…..ok I'll tell him….yah I'll tell him..

Rahul: Kya huwa??

Niks: Everyone has reached the picnic site and we are

still not there……..pls Rahul for my sake pls pls pls

speed up!!!!!!!!!

Rahul: oh ok sorry sorry!!!! Lekin hum kitne door hain???

Niks: Dhruv ne bataya ke who log saab Raizada farmhouse

par hain, to tum Yahaan se right lelo, aur phir seedhe

chalte raho….aur haan……chup chap se gadi par dhan do aur

kuch bolna nahin……

Rahul: lekin…..(Niks doesn't let him talk, she puts her

hand on his mouth and tells him to keep driving. Rahul is

surprised but excited that she touched him on his

lips.!!!

Everyone at the Farmhouse

Gia: pata nahin woh stupid si larki niks main Rahul ne

aisa kya dekh liya ke woh usi ke saath ghum hogaya (Lost)

Veds: Excuse me??? Tum meri didi ki baat kar rahi ho…and

I don't appreciate anyone and I mean anyone to talk bad

about my sister!!!!

Dhruv (Quietly in Veds' ear): Ved, calm down…….yahaan hum

sab hain aur who Rudra bhaiyya ki special guest hain….to

tum usse kuch ulti seedhi baat mat karo..

Veds drags Dhruv to a corner: What do you mean Dhruv???

Woh didi ke bara ma itni ghalat baat kare..air main chup

chap sunti raho??
Dhruv puts his hands on her shoulders to make her face

him and looks into her eyes, and she gets a weird

tickling feeling in her stomach.😳 😳 😳

Dhruv: Dekho ved, Gia ke kehne se, kya niks ko koi farak

pare ga?? Nahin na?? To phir tum kyun itni ghusse ho rahi

ho?? Pls mere liya tum pls ek cute si smile kar do….Aur

agar mere cherra dekh kar tumhe smile karne ka mood na ho

to tum humari gadi ka safar yaad karlo…..and remember us

singing to suraj hua maddham (K3G)

When Dhruv says this Veds starts laughing immediately!!!

Sorry but I gtg so I'll post the next part tom!!! But pls leave comments if you want me to change any parts of the story!!

Meera
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Posted: 18 years ago
wicked Fan Fic!!! can't wait for more!! 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
plz continue soon it woz excellent!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
GREAT JOB 👏 👏 except Rudra and Niharika should be together 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
Recap:
Vedika was really angry at Gia for saying mean things about Niks so then Dhruv takes her away to a corner and cheers her up

Part 7
Veds: So Dhruv, hum farmhouse to poonch (reach) gaye, aab

hum Yahaan kitne din (days) takh hain?

Dhruv: (dreamily to himself) jitney din tum chaho…(To

Ved) mujhe lagta hain ke paanch (5) din kafi hoge naa??

VedS: Paanch din???Uss stupid Gia aur Rudra ge saath??

Dhruv: Ved, tumhe aacha laga that jab Gia ne Niks ko

stupid kaha that?? Nahin na?? To phir mujhe kaisa lage ga

jab tum mere bhai ko stupid ke rahi ho?? Lekin agar tum

chaho to tum Gia ko stupid ke sakhthi ho…..

They both laugh!!!

Ved: fine, aab tum batao ke farmhouse aab finally

renovate kiya ke nahin??

Dhruv: For your kind information, haan kar liye renovate

Veds: YAY!!!!! Now the bathrooms will be clean!!!!!

Dhruv: VED?!!!

Veds: DHRUV!!

They both laugh again!! (see how they always manage to

make each other happy)

Veds: To aab renovate kiya hain, to kitne bedrooms hain??

Dhruv: phele to tumhe pata tha ke sirf teen (3) the, aur

aab guess karo ke kitne hain??

Veds: Mujhe lagta hain……

Dhurv: Kya lagta hain ????

Veds : Mujhe lagta hain Dhruv ke…..

Dhruv : Kya lagta hain Ved ????

Veds : Dhruv !!!!!!!!!!!STOP NA

Dhruv : Ok anyway, humare renovated farmhouse mein ath

(8) kamare hain. Che(6) upar aur do(2) neeche

Tara: (from the entrance of the farmhouse) Dhruv bhaiyya,

Ved chalo. Rahul aur Niks aage.

Dhruv: Shall we??? (links his arm in hers)

Veds: We shall..

So they walk towards the house and where everyone else is

standing. They see Rahul's cool convertible roll up, and

they wait by the front steps for them to get out of the

car. Rahul gets out first and goes to Niks side to open

her door, seeing this a little jealousy appears on

Rudra's face. Just as Niks steps her foot out of the car,

she sprains her foor and falls into Rahul's arms. They

both smile at each other. Right at the moment where she

falls, Rudra makes a movement towards her.

Sorry guys I know it was short, But I gtg, I'll continue tom!!! Hopefully u liked the DhruVedika moments!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
Cute!!! 👏 👏

Cont soon!!!cant wait!! 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
Recap:
Tara, Suraj, dhruv, and Vedika go out for dinner while Rahul was staying home with a hurt niks, but he takes advantage of her. Rudra saves her and is now onfused a his different feelings for both Vedika and Niharika, but towards Vedika his feelings are more just anger that she wasn't interested in him. But for Niks he has awkward feelings. "Kahi mein Niks se pyar to nahin karta??

Part 9
Since Niks is asleep on Rudra's shoulders, he puts her down slowly on the
sofa while he goesto get some dinner, all he finds in the farmhouse

kitchen is some Maggi noodles so he makes that. Niks slowly wakes up at

the nice smell of the noodles

Niks: Yeh kya khusboo arahi hain?? Rudra?? Rudra?? Kahan chalagaya?

Rudra: (runs out of the kitchen in an apron) Kya hua?? Tum theek to ho??

Niks: (immediately laughs at seeing Rudra in an apron) Tum kya bana rahe
 ho??

Rudra: mujhe o aur kuch nahin aate isliye mein maggi noodles bana raha

tha.

Niks: (shyly) main madat karo?

Rudra: Haan chalo

So they have fun cooking then they ate their food and just as they were

about to start a movie the door burst open

Dhruv: tum log sab kahan ho?

Rudra: Guys hum T.V. room mein hain.

They all walk towards the T.V. room

Tara: Yahaan to sirf tum fono ho...Hia aur Rahul kaha hain??

At hearing Rahul's name Niks' get's uncomfortable Ved notices

Ved: Kya hua didi? Kya Rahul ne kuch.....

Niks: haan woh....(Suraj interrupts)

Suraj: Kya kaha didi?? usne appke saath (niks interrupt)

Niks: it's ok Suraj, mujhe bachane Rudra aa gaya tha

Dhurv who knows that Niks likes Rudra, smiles

Ved: Oi Idiot yahaan itni seeious baat ho rahi hain aur tum idiot ki thara

mushkhura rahe ho??

Dhruv: Nahin woh...kher choro...aab hum sab khushi hain na ke niks ko

kuch nahin huwa?? To phie let's celebrate that the original gang is back

together (they all cheer) Ok to aab main pesh karta hoon aapna

renovated farmhouse. Suraj Umm..Dhruv sorry to burst your bubble but

hum yahaan do phar (afternoon ) ko hi poonch gaye thae.

Tara: Suraj, don't bug my brother.

Suraj: theek hain baba. Main jhootha aur dhurv sacha, mujhe iss waqt

World war Three nahi shuru karni

After they all finish laughing at Suraj. dhruv says go ahead and pick a

room. Everyone runs up stairs except ved, Dhruv,and Suraj Rudra helps

Niks up the stairs

Dhruv: Suraj, tum upar kamra choose karne nahin gaye??
Suraj: Dhruv

this is a very sweet gesture on your part! this is a great way for us to be

together

Dhruv: baas baas Suraj. tum mere dost ho, tum meri itni tarif....(ved

interrupt)

Ved: haan Suraj, iski arif karoge na, to iska sir(head) tarboos

(watermelon) ka size ho jayega!

Suraj laughs as Dhruv glares at Ved

Suraj: Main upar ja raha hoon (goes upstairs)

Dhruv: VEd tum kyun nahi gaye upar?? Tumhe bhi to kamra chiya na??


Sorry everyone gtg But I promise to continue tomorrow
Let's see what reason that Ved gives for not going upstairs!!Edited by indiandoll89 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
WOW!!! this is getting really good, cannot wait to see the reason why vedika didn't go upstairs
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Posted: 18 years ago
AWESOME!!!!!!!
I THINK UR MY FAV. AUTHOR NOW!!!!!! 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
AWESOME!!!!!!!
I THINK UR MY FAV. AUTHOR NOW!!!!!! 😆 seriously 😆