Originally posted by: anjali0111
wow!!!!!! it was jus awesome!!!!!!!!π
it was full of shock n happy surprises!!!!!!! Thanks dear π³
first of all abhay treated pia wid his famous kiss therapyπ³...which we were dieing to readπ... then her memory came back...thats all we wanted since so long. I miss kiss therapy like anything n still some left btw π
you beautifully described pia's pov...her emotions, pain,helpnesness when abhay again tried to convince her to stay away frm him...her outburst...her reaction when he saw abhay entering the room...the way she touched his face n cried...all was fabulous!!!!!πβοΈπ a big hug to you for describing it so well.π€ Thanks a lot dear...glad u liked it π³
abhay's inner turmoil...his myriad emotions seeing pia like that...in pain, feeling guilty for leaving her...n accepting his defeat n finally promissing that he will not leave her n love her till the end of timeβ€οΈ...all this was mind blowing...i had happy tears in my eyes reading this!!!π Awww that's such a huge complement π³ I always pay extra attention to Abhay's feeling while writing because he is the most difficult to comprehend
n pia's naughty punishmentβΊοΈ...made me blush thinking about your next updateπ...make it soon n give us long chapter full of abhiya romance.ππ³ Will try my best to please you π
aryan's pov was also nice ...so he knw that alina love him...poor guy..torn between his past n present...π..well...whoes gonna get him in the end...peehu or alina??? Time will tell π
n that π€¬gaurav...kill him asap...btw you have created a nice villain in the form of gaurav...but what about the real villain..mohini...where is she??? you havent told yet much about her n abhay n aryan's past...reveal it soon. I will write Abhay's flashback n Mohini's story soon..within 1/2 chapters... u will know who's Mohini n trust me.. if u thing Gaurav is a good villain... u haven't seen anything.. wait for Mohini π
n lastly you gave a surprise by reaveling that armaan is vampire hunter!!!! what turn will his n amby's story will take??? eagerly waiting for that. For the time being they will be staying far from each other
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