simply an outsatnding job tanz, update was fantabulous, povs were described so well, i was in awe while reading it, simply wonderful!!
it couldn't av been btr, it was at it best!
starting frm aryan- "I can already imagine what he will do next"- this is d best thing abt aryan, he knws abhay inside n out n wl do nything for him n this time i think he wl against abhay;s wish to bring him n piya together.Then you have no idea what Piya can do or not. Sorry but I know her in 1 months u could know in 6 months. If she could break every barrier of the labyrinth named Abhay Raichand.. She can do anything- this was one f d best dialouge of ur last update n when aryan called amby ms.vampire hilton, i was pictursing some too adorable to resist n aryan as a student , sounds interesting..ahem ahem
abhay- dunno wat to say abt him , he is man of true heart, even when he is nt aving d one.
His pain n his love both av no boundaries, no matter aryan is swthrt in ur ff bt abhay is d one who actually shineouts like moon in darkness. i found demon in him in ur last update. no matter how dark he shows himself , u cn't stop loving him n d best was when he saw those sketches...i loved dt part most in his pov. abhay is d one , u would love to fall for whose darkness.
pia- dunno whether to call her lucky or unlucky, bt i want her to b lil strong nw n i want her n aryan to b bestie again
amber- her character is reli different, a person of her own will, i m thoroughly enjoying her role in ur story
ResYep,aryan is brilliant.jst loved his idea to make abhiya meet.m so touched by abhay's emotional turmoil.Tanzie,sweetheart u potraited everyones pov so well.piya's determination to knw abt abhay,abhay's suffering nd aches for his ladylove,aryan's games to reunite abhiya nd amber's confusions abt whts rational-everything is jst perfect.so aryan would be joining college.precap seems thrilling.Edited by TISA07 - 2011-12-13T21:00:22Z