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fanfic :love never ends- Pg 28 - Page 3

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Posted: 18 years ago
its good
cont soon plz plz
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Posted: 18 years ago
damn kool
its really nice
u rite vry nicely
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Posted: 18 years ago
its awesome nikki continue and please make the parts longer
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Posted: 18 years ago
thanks.I have my exam tomm so i'll cont later.i can only makes parts londer after the 24 march
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Posted: 18 years ago
thts ages!!!!!! please write more
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Posted: 18 years ago
Sorry to keep u guys waiting for so long.By the way i am nikhita and would love to be friends with u all.

varun and ranveer hav reached India.mauryas reunon has been planned.

At the reunion
ashi,Yuvi,varun,sid,meher,vrinda and ranveer are standing together
Ashi:hey bhaggu!i cant believe hum sab itne saalao baad mil rahe hai.
Yuvi:ha Ashi,god its long since all of us meet.Vo bhi kya din tha jab hum sab saath mein milkar bahr jaate the,remix perform karta tha.I wish vo din waapas aa jata.
Ashi and Yuvi are engaged.
Ashi:he bhaagu,i am so thankful to u ki tumne finnaly Yuvi ko brains de he diya.
Yuvi:ashi!
Sid:sab badle sakte hain par ashi kabi nahi.
Ashi:u are wrong .i dont think timbo badli hogi.
that u me seems impossible.
Yuvi:well all i can say is vo looks wise to bilkul nahi badli.
Varun:aur vo tumhe kessa pata?
Yuvi:vo dekho
Tia was standing at the door
Ranveer immediately turned to see her
Yuvi:vaise kuch aur log bhi nahi badli,jaise ranveer ka Tia ko dekna ka treka

Tia walked up to them
Tia:hi guys
Yuvi:hey tia.
everyone else:hi Tia.
all this time Ranveer was too busy looking at Tia.then Tia saw Ranveer and there eyes met.(Dil ke yeh dhakan tune playing behind)
Words failed them they did not know what to say.
suddenly....
Ashi:so guys its done hum sab saath mein holiday ka liye jaaga.Tum bhi Tia.
Tia:but..
Yuvi:nothing doing Tia tum aa rahi ho.What say ranveer?(teasingly)
Ranveer:ji,ji bana(with a confused look on his face)

hope u like it.ill make it longer after 24 march.soory for the dissapointment
and thanks for the appreciation
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Posted: 18 years ago
please continue it was very nice 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
please continue it was very nice 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
continueeeeeeeeeeeeeee please do soon you are amazing 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
cont nikki

btw can   i   call you that??? its so short and

sweet