fanfic :love never ends- Pg 28

Posted: 18 years ago

guys,this is my first attempt at writing a fanfic .hope u like it.

Dear diary,
Its been 5 years since i left maurya,5 years since i met ranveer...5 years since i have spoken to ranveer.but it seems only yesterday when we were together in happy and sad times.time passes by but memories,memories always remain.Till when will this waiting last ?when will i meet ranveer? or are we destined to be separated?
Tia
tia slowly closed her diary and lay down her bed remembering the last time they met and what ranveer had told her...
flashback
in the shed
Ranveer:tia hum apse kuch bat karna chahta hai
tia:ha ranveer bolo na tia sun rahi hai
ranveer:tia ,aap to janti hai ki zindagi mein hum kuch bana chahte hai,hum apne parivaar ko vo khushi dena chahta hai jo unhe kabhi nahi millie.
tia :(smiling and putting her hand into ranveers hand)
ranveer:tia humhe US jana kay liya scholorship millie hai.
tia's smile slowly faded away.
ranveer:tia hum vaha jana chahte hai but
before ranveer could say something tia interupted
tia:its ok ranveer tia janti hai ki tum apni family sa bahut pyaar  karte ho .aur agar tum US jata ho to tumhe bahut achi job oppurtunities mil sakte hai .tia janti hai ki use tumse door rehna para ga lekin tia tumhari khushi kay liye kuch bhi kar sakte hai .tia knows that u really love tia aur tum mujhe kabhi cheat nahi karo gaye.but tia knows it for a fact that tia will really miss u.
At that moment ranveer realised that they understood each other completely
ranveer:hum bhi apko bahut miss karega.Ilove u
tia:tia loves u too.par tum  kabhi tia ko bol to nahi jaoga na
ranveer:kya koi kabhi sans lana bol sakta hai?
and smiling faintly they hug.
end of flashback.
if u like it then only i will continue


 

Edited by nikki_k - 17 years ago
Posted: 18 years ago
its verry cute do continue 👏 😊
Posted: 18 years ago
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. 😳 😳 😳 that was so sweet.pls do continue 👏 👏 👏
Posted: 18 years ago
really nice.....plzzzzzz continue...... 👏 👏
Posted: 18 years ago
US
Ranveer and varun are together in the same college
Ranveer:bana, kal humara term khatam ho raha hai,hum india vapas ja raha hai(thinking and smiling to himself)tia kay paas vapas ja raha hai

Varun:ha ranveer,going back is a grat feeling.tum aur main jo yaha achieve karna aaye the vo hume mil gaya hai.And now we can go back to our land ,our country and our family and friends.

Meanwhile ranveer is in deep thought .varun notices this asks
Varun:ranveer, any problem?
Ranveer:kuch nahi bana bas aisi hi soch rahe tha ki hum vapas to ja rahe hai lekin kya jo hum peche chod kar ayeee ha vo hume vapas milega(indicating towards tia)

Varun realizes this and says
Tia:agar vo humra tha tha to zaroor milega.aur vasa bhi (smiling)Distances makes hearts grow fonder.
Ranveer:lekin bana humne to tia ka naam nahi liya
Varun:to mainne bhi kaha liya
making ranveer smile and blush at the same time.

Thank u for appreciating my work.this part is a bit boring but i'll make the next one better.
Posted: 18 years ago
Very Cute! Lubed da second part 😳
Posted: 18 years ago
i wait for second part please continue this was amazing 👏
Posted: 18 years ago
please continue it is supa dupa awesome
Posted: 18 years ago
very nice 👏 tia ranveer renion will be so sweet 😳 😳 😳

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