guys i know you are angry with me cuz i ended my other fanfic soon,soon i thought of cooling you down with this fanfic it's called Ehsaas
Sheetal-....ligiye meri kas friend a gaye.
shabbir,prithvi,josh,angad,misty and aaliyah turn around and are shocked to see a girl and the girl is also shocked to see them.
Who is this girl?(who do you think)
so tell me should i continueEdited by khushi19 - 2006-03-02T20:47:05Z
kripaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa but why they are shocked ....she is cute ..not an alien ! ...any ways continue sounds interesting !
thanks alot i will write the first part tomm.and you will knoe why eveyone is shocked tomm
They start of with beautiful sences of U.S. Then slowly we go towards a beautiful hall decorated with lights.We slowly go toward the main hall you see eveyone enjoing themselves.There is a big stage at front.There are two people on the stage,and it's none othere then sheetal(in the show she was kripa's friend and doctor who treated angad when he met with an acciedent while saving kripa's dad) and shabbir.Someone comes from behind and sings.
Someone-Congratulations and celebration.......badme tho mujhe pata nahin.
The person is none other then prithvi.
Shabbir-prithvi.omg.....tum,anyways sheetal yeh hain Mr.Prithvi Bose,my collage friend and my sala.(brother-in-law)
Sheetal-oh,tho tum ho prithvi,hi
Prithvi-hi and congratulation for your engagment.
Shabbir-well hamari ladli behen our apki wife,Aaliyah kaha hain?
Prithvi-well vo bahar josh aur misty k beach kabab main hadi banrahi hain.
Someone-kya kaha tumne?
There is an angry aaliyah standing there.
Prithvi-kuch nahin,main tho apni wife ki tarif kar raha tha. (muttering)-tumhare age bolne ki himat mujme tho nahin.
All have a little laugh at this.
Shabbir-well i think ise tho tum janti hi ho,yeh hain meri behen aaliyah.
Prithvi-Vasie josh aue misty kaha her gaye ?
Someone-tumne pukara aur hum chalein ayee
well it's josh and misty..
Shabbir-ayein aphi ka intzaar ho raha tha,sheetal yeh hain.......(interupted by josh)
Josh-apne interdution main kud dunga hi main hun josh kapoor,hum collage friends hain.aur yeh hain misty my sweet wife and prithvi ki behen.
Aaliyah(sadly )tum logo ko kisi ki kami mehsus nahin hoti?
Josh(also sad )main janta hum tum kiski baat kar rahi ho.
Prithvi-well vo kami bhi puri hogyee.
Eveyone confused-kya matlab
Eveyone looks behind.finally it's out hero angad.
Angad comes to the stage
Prithvi-angad tumhe itne der kyu hue?
Angad-vo mujhe kuch kaam tha.anyways conratulation to both of you.
Shabbir and Sheetal-thankx
Shabbir-sheetal,yeh hain angad mera cusine yeh bhi hamare saath padta tha aur ab london move hogaya hain.
Sheetal-kahin ap Khanna fashion se Angad Khanna tho nahin?
Angad-ha main vahi hun.
Sheetal-maine apke bare main bohot kuch suna hain.
Angad-really? well thankx
The conversation keeps on going.The engament is at full swing.Eveything was going great.But sheetal was looknig for someone.Everone notices this.
Misty-kya hua sheetal kise dund rahi ho?
Sheetal-vo actually aj meri ak kaas friend canada se ane wali thi,lakin abhi tak ayee nahin.
Just then sheetal see someone.
Sheetal-ligiyein meri kaah friend agye.
Everyone turn around and are shoucked to see kripa!!!!!
Just then kripa also notices them she was just as shocked to see them.
hope you liked the frist part pls write commentsEdited by khushi19 - 2006-02-24T19:20:41Z
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