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Two Little Birds..A Poem(Treat for the weekend!)

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Posted: 12 years ago
Another weekend will be here shortly and for next three days we will  keep reminiscing about BALH..Leaving aside all our discussions and commenting on old posts; here is a treat for you all, my friends..A poem from me after a long hiatus..Read, enjoy and do please comment.. Thanks..
 
TWO  LITTLE  BIRDS -- A Poem.
 
 
 

Two little birds they were

Living to please others.

 

One named Priya

Another named Ram.

 

Birds of different feathers

Yet destined to fly together.

 

A chance encounter on that date

 A Meeting arranged by fate.

 
 Fighting and shouting in a bother
 
Matching and opposing each other.

 

Skirmishes and arguments

Bickering and spats

 

Order and Norm of Day

Vexing and annoying each day.

 

Both never looked the same way

But couldn't avoid the other, anyway

 

Two little birds they were

 Living to please others.

 

 A sudden marriage of compromise

For families' wishes and needs to concede.

 

Together they came, yet apart

Living and adjusting for a start.

 

Paradox and antithesis; two poles in spectrum

Irony and sarcasm enliven their daily humdrum.

 

A day of close call, fast and celebration

A day of anew regard and admiration.

 

Slow but steady, sure yet lasting

Unknown feelings started sprouting.

 
 
 
 

Flying away to Down Under

Honey and moon still asunder.

 

Together the birds, soared their feathers

Their hearts now seemed to flutter.

 

Exploring the unexplored; a tender love sublime

Two souls united; emotions played in pantomime.

 

Roots of love strong and deep

Will withstand the tests of time.

 

Joys and sorrows, happiness and content

Shared and enjoyed till an eternity.

 

Two little birds they were

Living to love and care.

 

Each for the other; together as one

 We like and love them as none.

 

 

 

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PS: Dont ask me " How could you equate Ram to little Bird?"..Its a poetic liberty..

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pavitra123 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow superb poem maris
thank you
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Posted: 12 years ago
kudos to your liberty... very nice
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautifully penned thoughts about our love birds..😳

Much needed for the weekend survival..thank youπŸ€—




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Posted: 12 years ago

FANTASTIC 
2 GOOD
AWESOME...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome work Maris!⭐️
You have covered their journey in fabulous poem.Kudos to your talent.
 Do you think a lot about RaYa ? 😳
On weekends we miss RaYa terribly.Thanks to IF we discuss, share our feelings about our lovebirds so weekends become easy with friends.πŸ˜ƒ And when I see the posts like this, totally dedicated to RaYa...their emotions ...my heart starts  with joy.
Thanks.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful !!!!πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ Maris, keep them coming!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
MarisπŸ‘
What a weekend  treat u gave us yaar!Apoet is allowed poetic liberties not in small quantities but in larger doses...The whole finished product is a classic...U went right into the skin of the characters and described it so vividly...Pictures  added  too were so amazing...lovebirds
Fantastic piece of creativityπŸ‘πŸΌ
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Posted: 12 years ago
Mind-blowing poem...πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
The pic matchings was too AWESOME...!!!!
LOVED it...
Thank u 4 the lovely poem
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb maris...you are awesome writer