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Mohabbat hogai tum se A-K LAST PRT PG24

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Posted: 18 years ago

 

Mohabbat Hogai Tum Se

hojati hai mohabbat

bina sochey

bina samjey .....bas hojati hai

bina kisi umeed ....kisis wadey ke

de detey hein dil

kisis anjaan ko kesey .......!

kahani hai kripa ki .....jo rehti hai Karachi main wo ik Pakistani hai

kahani hai Angad ki jo ik super star hai ..mumbai ,india main rehta hai ....

kripa ..ne angad ko Tv per dekha hai .....aur wo us ki infactuation se uski ...un chahi mohabbat ban gya ........jantey howey bhi ke kabhi us ka nahi hosakta ...wo kabhi us sey mil nahi sakti apna sab kuch usey de diya ..........aur angad ko ye tak nahi pata ke kripa naam ki koi lerki hai is duniya main !

kismat ne shayad kripa ka saath deney ki thani hai .....kripa apney project ki liya purey 1 month ke liya india ja rahi hai .........!

kya wo angad ko mil paye gi ..........!

CHARACTERS:

ANGAD KHANNA: ..he is a super star of indian television ....veiwers are crazy about him ..he is a hot cake .....he is nice by natured ..aged 26 ...he has girl friend named mishty he loves mishty ..very much his parents live in US ...he has strong family background !he love his profession alots ....!believes in purity of every thing ...!

KRIPA SHARMA: she lives in karachi ,pakistan ...she is hindu by cast but her fore father prefered to live in pakistan at time of partition becoz they felt like to live at place where u are from she had visit india when she was at agae of 5 ....she has just complete her bachelours in fashion designing ..and working with KASHIF ....in his fashion house she soon become famous among media personalities for unique creations she is sweet by nature ...she try to live away from fantacy of media ...but she has to becoz of her increasing popularity ....she believes that one day she will achieve success in fashion world ...she had crush over angad ...when she saw him on -screen ..but as time passed her infactuation turned in true love ! !

Kashif: he is super star of Pakistan ...he is gr8  page 3 personality also owned a fashion house ....he is now planning to make a serial in india ..with indian actors .....also to launched kripa as an international designer!

 

mishty: a sweet girl ....very cute and loves angad as well ...she always seen besides him .....she has one good quality of sacrifice !

 

what destiny is planning for kripa- angad !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

I will continue if u like !

love

 amnaπŸ˜ƒ

 

 

 

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gold111 thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
nice intro... πŸ˜› & very funny siganture... πŸ˜†
all the best πŸ‘
sweet honey thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
nice introduction plz cont soon
Mrs.Fr.. thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
part:1


We see an office in paintings are hanging ...and at one side ..there are two trolly hangers ...on which ..newly stiched dresses are been hanged ..seems they are two complete wardrobe one for male another for females ...a big plasma screen is in front of ..main wall ..on which a channel Fashion tv is seems ....in center of room there is office chairs and table on which laptop is placed which is on ....while paper are spread all over of sketches ...the walls of room are of apple green colour giving it a calm look ....the room is empty some suddenly open the door .......a girl enter seems to be in hurry ..she is wearing light baby blue churidaar pajama ..and knee lenght kameez ...only a light embroidery is done over her sleeves and ..neck ...she is wearing bangles ...and bindi over her fore head ... a phone rings ...!she pick up the phone .,.and hold it with giving curve to neck ..while her hands get busy again with sketch papers

gal: hello

person: haan kahan

gal: yahan defence waley office main

person : acha ..wo sketches final ho gai

gal: hmmm nahi wo bhi nahi howey or model ka kya howa

person: ...KRIPA ...u dont worry ..tum apna kaam sukoon se karo wo sab main manage kerlonga

kripa: acha kashif bhai ..wo ....app ko pata hai ...ajj beach luxury per party hai ....

kashif: dear app ko pata hai ki wo party main ne di hai

kripa: haan

kashif: tu main kesey bhool sakta hoon ..wesey us main ik surprise hai tumharey liya

kripa: kya

kashif: agar bata donga tu kya surprise rahey ga

kripa: oh God kashif bhai pata nahi app ki ..surprise deney ki addat kab jaye gi

kashif: accha ab bas ...ok Allah hafiz

kripa: bye ...

kripa keeps down the phone finally her face backs to orignal relaxation ...she looks cute ..like an angel .....

kripa: ...mehmood

mehmood - a servant

mehmood: ji ma'm

kripa: dekho ...main ghar ja rahi hoon ....theek hai

mehmood; ok ji

kripa: sahi bye


kripa heads to her home ..she reached to ..a beautiful house ..at main sea veiw ..karachi . the area is quite posh ...! she meet her parents and after taking some rest ...she start getting ready ....she wear a white saree ...embellished with white ...zardoosi work .

she reached at venue the whole set was on ship . kashif was happy to see her ...the crowd was of none other then ...great page 3 personalities of karachi ..kripa was almost talking with every one ....kashif come over the stage and said ,

ladies and gentle man thax for being here at my party ..its always being great to do party in karachi ....well main ik announcement kerna chahta hoon apney new project ko leker aur wo yeh hai ke ...main ..ik indian production house ABC .. production jo ke off-course bhoot known hein ik serial plan ker chuka hoon ...well i m leaviung for india tommorow well paksitan se we have plenty of actors in the serial ..plus technical staff india ka hai except a fashion designer ...! or wo mera kaam tha ...so the person who will work for us ....and remain with us in india for two complete months ..is none other then kripa sharma ........!

kripa was shocked yet happy ........!

coming up: ...they heads to india ....kripa will design costume for ...whom .....she is shocked ....and refuse to design dress for that particular actor why ????????????????????????????

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Posted: 18 years ago
brilllient start plz con soon πŸ‘
Mrs.Fr.. thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
should i continue it or u guys don't like it πŸ˜•
rajeev1 thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
πŸ˜† ..nice work amna...kya brilliant idea hai...kahan se socha?? πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜› πŸ˜†

do continue πŸ‘
Mrs.Fr.. thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
farha ...sab bata doon yahan ...forum per pm ker key bata ti hoon kahan se ayya idea πŸ˜†
rajeev1 thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
πŸ˜† πŸ˜† ..sahi hai jaani!...waise thoda thoda idea hai muje..... πŸ˜‰
Mrs.Fr.. thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
RECAP

kripa is a hindu girl but her family lives in Pakistan the reason they like to live at place of birth. kripa is fashion designer she works with kashif an owner of fashion house and a leading media personality of Pakistan. kripa working on project kashif offer her another project although kripa is new in fashion field but her creativity make her famous. kashif offered her for doing joint project with him in india. kripa was happy about that but shocked yet ......read more now !

Part: 2

kripa after party goes back to her home ...she tells her mother gayatry the great news.

karipa: mommmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

gayatry: arey kya howa kripa beti itni zoor se bola rahi ho mujey

karipa: mom mom mom app ko pata hai i get break through today...mom kashif ney mujey india wala project de diya hai mamma main kal india ja rahi hon

gayatry: magar itni jaldi

kripa: mom app ko yaad hai kashif ne thorey dino pehley mera passport liya tha ....today he gave me ....tickets.

gayatry: great

kripa hugs her mother and leave for her name ....

kripa is happy ...and shocked and confused also about one person.....!

kripa: main kal us ke mulk (country) ja rahi hoon ...us ke daise ja rahai hoon ....agar wo mujhey wahan mil gya tu .....tu main khud per kaboo nahi rakh paoongi ......mgar .....oh GOD .....nahi kripa kuch bhi ho .....tum nahi kabhi nahi essa karogi jis sey ..tumharey maa baap ...ko koi takleef ho wo tum per bherosa ker ke tumey itni door bhejh rahey hein ........
nahi kripa tum sirf apna kaam kerogi chaey kuch ho jaye ...chahey angad khanna tumharey samney aajaye

kripa: ok done ...with that

NEXT DAY:

kripa with kashf and other unit members leave for india she was excited ....and finally they reached india ...kashif was doing project with famous indian production house ....owner of production house mr. mehta welcomed them on air port ...finally they heads to hotel ....they reached at hotel relaxed for some time and leave for production house where actors were waiting for them . they reached their ...kripa ....was happy ..but at sudden she become shocked to see that face.

kashif: kripa in ko tu tum janti ho right ...the famous super star ....ANGAD KHANNA .....the camera zooms on face ...the deep brown eyes ....the cute smile ...and ....handsome looks ...!

angad: hi ms. kripa

kripa: hi kahsif ....ye

kashif: yup kripa tumey is serial ke paanch 5 ....main characters ..ke liya ......dresses design ker ney hain ...and angad khanna is main character ok ...

kripa: kashif

kashif: hmmm

kripa: main mr.angad ke ilawa sab ke dress design kerongi

kashif: ripoa: are u nuts tum janti ho tum...tum kya keh rahi ho ...tumhara demagh theek hai

angad is totally shocked after listening what kripa just said he is furious too he leave the place with out saying a single word ......

kashif: kripa tum ye nahi kersakti

kripa: kashif but

kashif: no if not buts .....go and say sorry to angad

kripa: kyun

kashif: jo tum ne kiya us ke liya

kripa : magar

kashif: kripa nowwwwwwwwwwwww

kripa: fine ...she moves her hands in air .....

kripa ghoes to angad where he was sitting alone ...drinking water

kripa: mr. angad sorry

angad: excuse me cant hear properly

kripa: ..i m sorry main appp ke dress design kerongi ..actually ,......main kuch soach rahi to i m sorry ,,,......

angad: bye ..

kripa: mr angad

angad: bye kripa ji .....jab serial start ho ga .......tu hum milengye byeeeeeeeee

kripa (now furious ) bye mr khanna

angad leave and kripa turn around saying.......

krip[a: .....nakchira ......pata nahi kya samjta hai khud ko idiot ..and leave .....while we see angad standing besides he actually forgot his lighter there .......and as came back he heard kripa .........

angad: kripa ji

kripa: ....a-a-angad

angad: ji main ...aur suna main ne wo haseen words jo app ney merey barey main fermaye .....

kripa: wo actually .....why should i give clearification saying this she left

angad: attitude problem ......


coming up:

angad kripa fight