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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey friends.. i understand..that we all are upset by.. ashwin's nuisance...so here is a small... comic ff... based on today's episode...

The party is on...
Ram very angry...with priya... Priya is completely upset with... Ashwin's call...

The waiter is serving.. juice and drinks...

Sid: mamaji... ab dekhiye maza... mixes alcohol...in priya's juice.. and tells waiter to give juice to priya...

Priya unknowingly... drinks the whole stuff... and goes to waiter to have one more... she comes and sits besides.. ram... and says...

Priya: golu... aaj itna muh phulake kyun baithe hai...?

Ram: tumhari himmat kaise hui... mujhe golu kehne ki...

Priya: smiles... iske liye himmat kyun chahiye Mr. kapoor...? ab golu ko golu nahi kahege toh kya kahenge...

when priya's phone rings... its ashwin's call...
Priya: Mr. kapoor... ye ashwin bhi na.. mujhe ek mahine se tang kar raha hai... jaante hai Mr. kapoor... isse na meri shaadi hone wali thi...
Ram: angry... jaanta hoon...
Priya: jaante hai kaise?
Ram: aise hi... tumne bataya na abhi...
Priya: ek no. ka ghatiya insaan hai...M. kapoor... ye ashwin...
Ram: kya? lekin...tum toh..usse...
Priya: woh Mr. kapoor... and explains whole story...

Ram: kya? shocked...toh tumne mujhse kyun nahi bataya pehle...
Priya: woh na...Mr. kapoor... maa ne mana kiya tha...

Ram: ok... lekin...woh tumhe abhi kyun call kar raha hai...?
Priya: woh...uska...shruti ke saath jhagda... ho raha hai..woh ghar chod ke jaana chahti hai... and he feels ke..only i can stop her...
Ram: ok.. toh chalo..hum chalte hai...
Priya; lekin...mujhe toh shruti ka msg aaya ki...she is fine..toh i idont know main kya karu...and sings... raatakeli hai...
Ram: thinks...ye priya...aise haalat main aisi behki behki baatein... and goes near her... and smells...alcohol... and says...oh fish... aaj phirse isne... daaru... oh god... and calls..vikram... and explains thw whole situation...

Vikram and neha... make excuse and take priya and ram with them...

In car...

Ram: ye ashwin... priya ko itne raat gaye kyun bula raha tha... woh toh acha hua..ke shruthi ka msg aaya... varnapata nahi kya hota...
Neha: thanks..to the alcohol.. that priya came to you and starting speaking... nahi toh ram...
Ram: yes neha u r rt!!!!!!! main na..is ashwin ko chodunga nahi...
Vikram: ram... tu relax kar...iske baare me hum kal baat karenge...
ashwin's call...
Ram takes phone from priya's hands and switches off he cell...

Ram: ye priya bhi na... aise...  usse samajhta kyun nahi hai..ke juice me..kuch milaya hai...

neha: ram... you should be thankful... that she is drunk...issi bahane usne apne dil me..dabaye hue raaz toh tujhe bataye.. nahi toh..

Vikram: rt... waise bhi tu priya pe shaq karne laga tha...

Priya: starts crying...
Ram: ab kya hua..priya...?

Priya: ram.. mujh kulfi khani hai... woh... waali...
Ram: oh god yaar,,... phirsse.. i cannot bear... this drunk priya yaar...

neha: chalo..acha hai..issi bahane... i mean drunk hone ke baad... priya ne ram ko ram kaha... Mr. kapoor nahi...

Ram thinks...oh yeah.. and smiles...


\friends...plz bear the spells i have written this on the spot...  so kindly bear...

Thanks
Lucky
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Posted: 12 years ago

Thanks aton 😊..

 
This is helpfull to bring down the frustation levels...
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb ff  lucky loved it thank you
pls continue soon means tomorrow only
thanks 
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Posted: 12 years ago

It is so nice ... i loved it ! well written yaar ..you are a saviour ! Please continue soon 
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice post yaar..
continue soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
thank you very much 
it's fab and damn good👏👍🏼
pls continue if u can
 these FFs really brings our frustration down

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Posted: 12 years ago
i m happy of this scene but epi 🤬
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great FF.i wish something like this would happen in the show. Such a drag fest  till nowEdited by SriB - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice comic f f.continue it
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Posted: 12 years ago
I wish aisa hi ho! Plzzz I am bored of Ass-win track