OS ON RAYA...last part updated on 13th nov pg 5...

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Posted: 2011-11-10T02:38:09Z
hii guys..was just irritated to watch this ashwin crap vey much..
so think to write an os as how raya will come out from these clouds of misunderstanding...
so my os will start from yesterday's episode,where ram was unable to stand and both ashwin and priya forward their hand to help him..
so here goes the os...
After seeing priya's hand come forward to help him ram was happy but his happiness was no longer as ashwin also put his hand forward..ram in full jealousy hold priya's hand and stand up and said: no thanx ashwin,my wife is here for helping me...you just stay away..and ram hold priya's hand and take her to his cabbin...
ashwin stands their in shock as he saw this "ram kapoor" first time..
Here in ram's cabbin..
priya:thank you mr kapoor..
ram in anger:kis liye..
priya:mujhe apni wife kahne ke liye aur uska haq dene ke liye..
ram was confused after heraing this and turns to her and was just going to say and priya's phone ring..
ram asks:kiska phone hai??
priya:dadi ka phone hai mr kapoor...
priya recive the call and says:ji dadi kahiye..
dadi:priya puttar tu kidhar hai..
priya:dadi,woh main mr kapoor ke sath office ayi thi diwali puja ke liye,koi kam tha dadi..
dadi:ha priya puttar,tu abhi udhar se nikal mujhe kuch dena hai tujhe..
priya:ji dadi,main abhi ati hu and ended the call..
ram:kya hua,kya keh rhi thi dadi??
priya:woh dadi mujhe bula rhi hain,main chalti hu...ap chalenge sath ya main jau..
ram:nhi mujhe kuch kam hai,tum jao..
priya:ok mr kapoor main chalti hu,par ghar jaldi aeyega...
ram:ha,thk hai..
priya goes from the office and ram calls vikram..
vikram:ha ram bol..
ram:vikram,tu abhi office aa..
vikram:kya hua ram,tu pareshan lag rha hai..
ram:ha tu office aa phir btata hu..
vikram:thik hai,main abhi aya..
Here in sid's cabbin..
mamaji:oye ashwin hame aj diwali pe kuch na kuch jarur karna padega taki priya aur ram ka rishta aur majbot hone se pehle hi tut jae..
ashwin:ha mamaji,ap thik keh rhe hai,aj kuch na kuch toh karna hi padega mujhe..
All three of them make a plan and starts laughing loudly...
Here in ram's cabbin..
vikram:ha bol ram kya hua..
ram:yar mujhe kuch samjh nhi aa rha hai..
vikram:kya hua,puri bt toh bta..
ram narrates him the whole thing that happened in puja and said:main yeh soch rha hu ki agar priya ke ashwin ke ane ke bd se khush toh usne aj mujhse cabbin mein yeh sab kyo kaha..
vikram:ha ram,yeh bt kuch ajib lgi..
ram:vhi toh main soch rha hu..
vikram:ram ho na ho,mujhe lagta hai in sab cheeze mein ek aisi kadi hai jiske bare mein tu nhi janta hai,aur jo yeh sab tu galat soch rha hai bhabhi ke bare mein woh kadi janne ke bd tu sharminda ho ki tune bhabhi ke bare main aisa kyo socha...
ram:ha yr vikram ho sakta hai,par main ab kya karu...
vikram:aj tu kuch mat soch aj diwal hai,apna mood sahi kar hum kal bat karenge iss bare mein..
ram:thik hai yr..
and ram's phone ring..
vikram:kya hua kiska phone hai???
ram:priya ka..
vikram:toh utha na..
ram:nhi yr..main nhi utha rha..
vikram:ram utha na..
ram:acha uthata hu..
ram picking the phone..
ram:hello..
priya:main kab se phone kar rhi thi utha kyo nhi rhe the..
ram:woh main thoda busy tha,bolo kya kam hai..
priya:dadi ne apko order dia hai ki ap 15min ke andar andar ghar pe dikhane chahiye..
ram:are yr,dadi bhi na..acha main abhi ata hu..
priya:thik hai,but drive safely,jaldi pahchne ke liye dont drive rashly..
ram was touched after hearing this:hmmm,thik hai,bye..
priya:bye..c.u after 15mims..
ram ends the call and vikram asks:kya hua??
ram:kuch nhi dadi ne bulaya hai...
and they both go to kapoor mansion..
In the night..
last tym preprations are going in kapoor mansion as parry is going to start..
Ram enters his room and finds a very nice kurta for him on his bed..
ram smiles as he sees the kurta and says:waise priya ki choice kafi ahi hain..manna padega uski choice ko toh..
he gets freshen up and wears that kurta and watch himself in the mirror and says:aj itna bura bhi nhi lag rha hain main..
just then priya enters the room and ram mouths open broadly as he sees her..
she was looking very beautiful..she was wearing a green saree,with her hair open..ram was just mesmerised by seeing her..
he walk towards her and said:kafi achi lag rhi ho..
priya:lowering his head:thanq u mr kapoor..
ram was going close and close to her he was just going to kiss her and some bang on the door..they both come in their senses..and were embarssed..
priya goes and opens the door and finds neha standing their...
neha:kya bt hai priya,aj toh bijliya gira rhi ho..
priya:neha,tum bhi na..
they enters the room..
neha:kya bat hai fatty aj toh tum bhi kafi smart lag rhe ho is kurte mein..
ram:thank you..
ram:vikram kaha hai..
neha:woh niche hai,dadi se mil rha hai..
ram:acha main bhi niche jata hu..
In the hall..
everyone gathers in the hall. sharma family,kapoor family and shergirls with ashwin and shruti...
when ram saw ashwin his blood starts boiling and he becomes more angry when he saw that he was staring priya.and priya was smiling and enjoying with her family..
ram suddenly goes to priya and stand behind her.. stopping the view of ashwin..
just then someone goes from their and mistakenly hit priya,priya looses her balance and was just falling when ram hold her..everyone was seeing them..
but ram was seeing directly in the eyes of priya and they share an eyelock..when sudenly ayesha said:jiju,yeh sab bad mein kar lijiega,sab ap dono ko he dekh rhe hai..
ram come to his senses and make priya stand properly and said:tum thk ho na..
prya:ha mr kapoor,i m fine..
just then the lights go off and sid comes and spotlight on him..
sid:hello everone,thank you all for coming here and celebrate diwali with us..
so this the first diwali for many couples in kapoor mansion so there is a gift for them..
we all make a collage of pictures of our three newly married couples so here it goes..
everyone was seeing on the screen..
firstly there was some pics of ishika and his husband,then nats and kartik and then comes the pics of ram and priya...there are some pics of their and engagement..ram was happy to see this but just then the pictures of ashwin and priya started to come..priya and sharma family was shocked to see this..and ram was full on angry mood..just then ram shout band karo yeh sab..
everyone was scared as ram said it very loudly...
ram to everyone:sorry to all but this party is over now thank you all for coming..everone starts going,ram said:ek min ashwin tum yahin ruko..
so now kapoor faimy,sharma family and ashwin,shruti and vikram-neha are in the hall..
ram goes towards priya angrily and said:priya,yeh sab kya hai...aj main sab sach sunna chahta hu..
kab se dekh rha hu jab se ashwin ne office join kia hai tum bhahut khush rehne lgi ho..
priya was shocked to listen this and tears stared to roll down from her eyes..
ram:maine ashwin se bhi pucha iss bare mein toh usne mujhe btaya ki tum dono ek dusre ko chahte the aur tumhari shaddi hone wali thi toh tumhara yeh farz nhi banta tha priya ke ye sab tum mujhe btao bolo priya..and starts shaking her by hoding her shoulders,priya was feeling so much pain but didnt utter anyting..
ram:bolo priya chup kyo ho,jb maine ashwin se puch ki tum dono ki shaddi kyo nhi hui toh usne mujhse kaha ki kyoki woh amir nhi tha isliye,mujhe nhi pta tha ki tum bhi baki aurto ki tarah paise ke piche bhagti hu..
then priya said bas kijiye mr kapor,bs..bhahut ho gya..
priya:iss ashwin ne apse jo bhi kaha aur apne man liya,mujhse ek br puchna bhi thik nhi samjha..and tells him that why their marrige broke,ram was shocked after listening this..
just then rishabh said that bhai bhabhi aswin ke ane se khush nhi thi woh toh isliye khush thi kyoki unhone ek NGO mein bauji ke nam se ward banvaya hai aur usmein bauji ki murti bhi banwai hai,isliye bhahi khush thi itne dino se..ram felt ashames after listening all this..
priya was all in tears and said:mr kapoor shyad apko yad nhi par maine shaddi se pehle bhi apko ashwin se milvaya hua hai..then ram remembers about that and priya said aj main apko yeh bhi btati hu ki maine u din aese behave kyo kia tha:and tells him that what ashwin said to her near the lift..ram was so angry on ashwin he tighten his grip and was ready to just punch him..just then priya ran fron their crying..
ram to ashwin:tumse toh main bd mein bat karta hu and ram behind priya..
In the room..
priya was crying very bitterly and ram was said because all this happend coz of him..
ram goes towards priya and said:priya main janta hu main mafi mangne ke layak bhi nhi hu par main phir bhi tumse mafi magta hu..
mujhe pta nhi ya hogaya tha,main tumhe aur kisi ke sath nhi dekh sakta tum sirf aur sirf meri ho..aur jab mujhe ashwin aur tumhare bare main pta chala tha toh main tut gya tha,i m sorry priya..i m really very sorry..
priya just run and hugs him and cried..
THE END..
hope you all liked it..
it's very long...

Edited by 14shubhi - 2011-11-13T01:37:10Z
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Posted: 2011-11-10T02:56:14Z
Coolawww to good and awesome hope its happens as same happily great work great just awesome ClapThumbs Up
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Posted: 2011-11-10T02:58:54Z
tooo good  but y did u put the end... u should be saying to be continued...very lovely imagination ...hope something like this happens...really liked it...continue the next part also ...
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Posted: 2011-11-10T03:14:41Z
parulkhare13 thanxx a lot dear...
glad u like it... 
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Posted: 2011-11-10T03:15:50Z
 sreearavindh thanx a lot dear for liking it..
but did u want that i continue this...
as this is an os..

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Posted: 2011-11-10T03:18:41Z
too good n awesome ya i wish all this actually happens in the serial too, m waiting for ur update plz do continue it fast...!!!!
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Posted: 2011-11-10T03:21:43Z


Originally posted by 14shubhi


 sreearavindh thanx a lot dear for liking it..
but did u want that i continue this...
as this is an os..



liked your style of writing and imagining...hence wanted to read more ...Tongue
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Posted: 2011-11-10T03:23:17Z
ShaiqMadiha thanxx a lot dear..
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