Teri Yaad(A-K fanfic)Last part!!!!pg-9 - Page 2

Posted: 18 years ago

guys i was sad because of what's happing in the show so i thought of writing my own fanfic.pls write your comments

well the storyline is the same till yesterdays episode

then kripa comes to know about prithvi and and goes to

give her gavahi on (anagd's side ofsourse😉).anagd won the

case and prithvi goes to jail😡anagd was in there filling 

out the formalaties.Evryone else was just happy that anagd

won the case.Kripa was also going when someone came to her

it was Dadi.

Dadi-Kripa beta mujhe maaf kardo maine tumhe galat samja.

Kripa-nahin! dadi isme apki koi galti nahin maine hi anagd ko galat smaja.shayad main hi sahi aur galat main fark nain samaj paye.Balki mafi tho mujhe apse mangni chahiya.

Dadi-ab yeh sab bathein chodo aur chalo andar.

Kripa-nahin dadi ab us gahr pe mera koi haq nahin.Anagd deserves more happiness then i could ever give him.(how right you are)

Dadi-par beta

kripa cuts her of.

Kripa-nahin dadi.ab bohot der ho chuki hain.

Kripa takes out a white envelope and gives it to dadi.

Kripa-Dadi yeh anagd ko dedena.

And kripa leaves from there.Angad comes out after finishing all his formalaties.All the time ouside angad was looknig for kripa but could not find her so they all left to khanna house.(BTW all means Dadi,naina,dilip,kartik,manek,aaliya,anitah and anagd).Anagd went to his room to get fresh.he went down and asked dadi where kripa was because he saw them talknig to eachother.

Anagd-dadi kripa kaha hain?

Dadi-mujhe pata nahin vo kaha hain lakin usne tumhare liye kuch bagha hain.

Dadi takes out the white envelope and gives it to angad.

Anagd opens the evelope and finds a letter:

Anagd main janti hun k mari wajase tumhe bohot taklef hue hain.Maine tumhe bohot takleef de hain.Lakin agar ho sake tho please mujhe maaf kar dena.Maine tumhari zindagi main akar tumhe sirf takleef de hain.Isliye main tumhari zaindage se hamasha hamesha jane ka faisla kiya hain agar ho sake tho apne zindagi ko phir se shuru karne ki koshish karna.ab main tumhari zindagi main kabhi nahin aungi.

                                                    -Kripa

Tell me if you want me to continue pls write your comments😆     

 

 

Edited by khushi19 - 18 years ago
Posted: 18 years ago
wow this part was awesome plz continue
Posted: 18 years ago
awwwwww khushi .. thats was the best soo far... 👏 contd soon ... hehe i wish something good happens ... ugh i am waiting till the maniac is sent where he deserves😡 ... hehe but i love the way u started it ... 😳
Posted: 18 years ago
thanks i will try to cont tonight 😆
Posted: 18 years ago
nice yaar let them b together again
Posted: 18 years ago
brillient like ur other fan fics plzz con all of them this was all so in my mind sth like this may happebn in show any ways gr8888888888 fan fic con soon 👏 👏 👏
Posted: 18 years ago
it fablouse plz contt i jt luv itt 😃
Posted: 18 years ago
YESSSS!!! continue...that was so good!! cant wait!
Posted: 18 years ago
please con. soon it was a great part 👏 👏 👏
Posted: 18 years ago
Part-2

Recape-anagd is freed from jail and kripa left anagd


There was another thing in the white enevlope it was manglesutra.Angad was totally shocked.He fell on his knees.Everyone noticed him and went to him.(btw:no one knows that kripa left)

Naina-kya hua angad tum thik tho hona?

Angad(motionless)-vo..vo chali gaye..vo mujhe chod kar chali gaye.

Shabbir-kuan angad tum kiske baath kar rahe ho.

Angad-K..kripa

Everyone was shocked hearing this.Manek also felt bad.

Dilip-angad tum chinta mat karo hum kripa ko kuch dund kar layeinge.

Aaliya-ha bhai ap himat mat haro.

Everyone lookes for kripa.Hours turns into days and days turns into months.But they could not find kripa on day angad was sitting on the beach whne someone came and taped on his shoulder.

Every one guess who it was 😉

Edited by khushi19 - 18 years ago

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