Fan-Fic 4 Saarrthi: Romeo and Juliet!!! - Page 2

Posted: 18 years ago

"Romeo and Juliet"

Episode 1

The Big Ben in the tradition city of London had just struck 10:00pm. It was 2nd January 1976. Along the streets, a girl was walking, dressed in black. The girl heads for the graveyard, and goes forward towards a grave, and puts a rose in his memory. She remembered his last words: "If anything happens to me, I will always be with you, up there with the stars, the brightest star of all". The girl bent down beside the grave, and looked up at the stars. The brightest star was shining brightly. Slowly and slowly, the girl takes out a gun and puts it close to her head. "Mujhe maaf karna", she said. And she shot herself and fell beside the grave.

Next scene: 2nd January 2006, Montague House.....

(Siddarth and Shakuntala are downstairs, Shakuntala is preparing the breakfast, and Siddarth is in the lving room with the elders)

Shakuntala: where r the children.......shivangi, zeeshan....arjun, sujal and romeo....come on.....

Siddarth: dont worry, shakuntala....bachi aa jayegi.....

Shakuntala: lekin aaj unka pehla din hai school mein......they shouldnt be late.....

(Someone is cumin down the stairs.....it is Zeeshan)

Zeeshan: hello....people....breakfast plz....

Siddarth: morning.....

Mamaji: oi.....bhanji.....theek tak...?

Zeeshan: oh yeah......

Shakuntala: here u go....a cup of coffee as usual

Zeeshan: thank u mom....

Baisa: where r the rest of the kids.....?

Zeeshan: cumin.....

(A girl is cumin down the stairs....and it is non other than Shivangi!!)

Shivangi (trips): ooohhh!!! neva mind those heels.......hello wonderful people......

Zeeshan: nervous 4 school than sis?

Shivangi: nope.....πŸ˜ƒ....now hurry up otherwise we will get late....and where is this arjun?

Baisa: I dont no.....

Shakuntala: ARJUN!!!!!

Arjun (from upstairs): cumin mom.....

(A guy dressed in red T-shirt, blue denim trousers and a denim jacket is cumin downstairs.....which none other than Arjun!!!)

Bade Dadaji: Beta...uth gaye ho...

Arjun: jee.....BD

Shakuntala: what do u want 4 breakfast?

Arjun: erm...cereal.....thank u

Siddarth: where r yur other brothers?

Arjun: cumin....

Guy: I no how 2 wake him up.....(and the guy is none other than Bobby DarlingπŸ˜†)

Bobby: i'll wake him up.....

(Bobby goes upstairs)

Bobby: chalo utho......come on......sujal......

Sujal: what......is it Judgement Day.....or has mamaji lost hsi chess pieces again?

Bobby: no...it is school-time....yur second year in sixth form..yaar....come on....

Sujal: huh? MY FIRST DAY.....OMG.....GET OUT OF THE WAY!!!!

Bobby: huh....i was affectionate....and luk at how he replies back.....

Sujal: i need 2 take a shower......

(quickly takes a shower, and gets dressed in a black polo neck, wid denim jacket and denim jeans)

Shakuntala: finally......agaya hai sujal......

Sujal: quit the lecture mom.....i'm in a hurry......erm.....i'll take a apple and eat it on the way......

Shakuntala: ok....chaldi karo.....the driver was complainign that the Montague children always sleep in late....

Sujal: what kind of a driver is he......bites the hand that feed him.....πŸ˜†

Siddarth: Sujal!!!!!

Sujal: sorry papa.....ok...zeeshan and shivz school....come on....

Shivangi: cumin.....arjun...chalo (arjun just finishing his corn flakes)

(the kids gets out of the house.....just then sujal and arjun meet their annoying class-mate)

Sujal: hey jennifer....(luking annoyed)

jennifer: oh.....why if it isnt sujal montague....

Shivz: u no waht....get out of our way.......jennifer (pushes her)......we'll talk in school......(they get in the car)

(back in the house)

Shakuntala: Oh gud...the kids have gone 2 school.....and OMG.......ROMEO!!!!!

Siddarth: hez still asleep......and everyone has left......Oh god.....

Baisa: I no how 2 wake him up.......(puts on loud music)

Romeo: WHAT THE.........???????

BD: lo! yur son has woken up.......

Mamaji: yuv....beta go and get romeo......plz....already late 4 univeristy...doesnt luk gud.....

Yuv: ok....

(yuv goes upstairs....)

Yuv; romeo....yaar....utho....it's time 4 university.......come on...

Romeo: huh......uni what?

Yuv: Oxford University...remember?

Romeo: OMG........My first day....and i'm already late.......Oh......tell mom....i'll be there

Yuv: ok......

(Romeo comes downstairs dressed in a white T-shirt, blue denim jeans and a brown leather jacket)

Siddarth: u r in deep trouble...

Romeo: i no...scream at me...when i get home......

(Romeo picks up his bag and runs for the university.......meanwhile......not far away from the Montague House......was another wealthy family called The Capulets)

Next scene, The Capulet House.........

(A lady is doing the pooja...and turns around and it is the lady of the household.....Tulsi!!!!)

Tulsi: Mihir....Ba....Gauri....Tashu...Pakhi...Juliet....come on bacho....nashta ka waqt hogaya hai

Mihir: arre wah tulsi....wonderful breakfast.....jaldi sey karo.....mujhe office bhi jaana hai....

Tulsi: arre mere bahu kaha hai....Madhu......

(A girl is cumin down stairs......dressed in a sari......which is none other than Madhu!!!!!)

Madiha: jee...mummy?

Tulsi: jaldi sey...call the girls downstairs.....aur is cezzane awake?

Madiha: ha.....hez taking a shower.....

Tulsi: call.....mamta, mona and marriyam as well......

Amal: arre kaise ho...auntyji?

Tulsi: theek hu.....

(Suddenly a basketball comes rolling down the stairs)

Mihir: Gauri is here.......

(A girl dressed in sports clothes...with a cap on....and holding a volleyball and a football)

Gauri: oh yes....it is me......Gauri Capulet.....

Amal: hey gauri......

Amal: hey.....(doorbell rings)

Gauri: i'l go and get that (opens the door and finds their annoying neighbour Mrs. Anderson)

Gauri; agaye hai phir se....

Mrs. Anderson: Gud morning Gauri Capulet.....

Gauri: hi

Mrs. Anderson: such a lovely day......

Gauri: ha...tumhara chehra dekh kar kyun kaho gey lovely day?

Mrs. Anderson; now...i'm running late 4 work.....can u drop off alyssa for me?

Gauri: jhuth bulti hai....oh sure come on (Mrs. Anderson leaves)

(Gauri goes back inside and Cezzane is downstairs)

Cezzane: kaun hai gauri?

Gauri: it is Alyssa Anderson again.

Alyssa: Morning Mr Capulet......

Cezzane: Morning....sweetheart.....

Mamta: oh...where is Pakhi.....kaha hai yeh larki?

(A girl is cumin downstairs in a western outfit.....which is none other than Pakhi)

Pakhi: morning mother......and daddy......

Mihir: morning beta......

Pakhi: oh.....school.....oh mamta come on....marriyam..hurry up wid yur hair

(Marriyam is fixing her hair in a high ponytail...)

Marriyam: cumin....

Indu: where r the rest of the girls....tashu and juliet...?

Tulsi: still asleep....

Indu: i no how 2 wake them up......savri-bhavri...come on....

(Indu, savri-bhavri get a bucket of water and throw it over Tashu)

Tashu: Aaaaarrrrrgggghhhhhhh!!!!!!!

Indu: hehehehe.....

Tashu: what the......? Not fair....

Savri-bhavri: u r getting late 4 school.....

Tashu: no...it is still the christmas holidays yaar.......(luks at the calender)

Tashu: Argh!!!!! the christmas holidays r over!!!!! OMG....

Indu: what about juliet?

Tashu: wake her up.....(Tashu goes 2 get dressed)

Indu: juliet.....come on......julie.....chal...yaar.....

Juliet (still feeling drowsy): huh.....come on......i'm tired yaar.....

Indu; u have 2 go university.....

Juliet: OMG......university......I completely forgot.......erm......get my lightish reddish churidaar ready plz....and the earrings....(goes 2 wash her face)

Tashu (just got dressed): Has any1 seen my silve earrings......

Indu; erm...here they r.......

Tashu: thanx......(runs downstairs and picks up her bag)

Pakhi: ok guys.....come on........

(Tashu and Pakhi and the others leave in the driver's car)

(Juliet has just came down)

Tulsi: Juliet....abh yeh acha time hai kya? chalo jao...catch a bus...hurry up....

Juliet: ok...chalti hoo....chal amal.....

Amal; ok.......run 4 it then yaar

Precap: Arjun is taking photos at school and spots a girl through his camera and decides to follow the girl. Sujal is running and accidenyl bumps into Tashu. Meanwhile, Romeo is close by Juliet.

Howz dat, ppl?

Posted: 18 years ago
ohhhhhhhhhhhhh its cho chweeeeeeeeeeeeeet. 😳 😳
i m very exited from the precap. 😳
plz write soon. πŸ‘
Posted: 18 years ago
Episode 2

(Arjun has rushed into his chool, Pakhi has reached her other class)

Arjun: Gud morning, maam
Teacher: well....arjun montague....have a seat.....u r saved this time...
Arjun: Phew!!!!!
(Pakhi almost missed the bell, but made in time)
Teacher: Pakhi Capulet....
Pakhi: yes miss.....
Teacher: 2day u r saved.....but next time...plz be careful.....if u were late 2day.....then it wouldnt luk gud on the first day.....would it?
Pakhi: no miss.....and i'm sorry.....
Teacher: have a seat.......
(registration session is finshed....and arjun is heading for hsi next lesson: art.....his favourite πŸ˜‰ )
Teacher: today class....we will be tkaing pictures of thegarden...flowrs and trees and try and focus.....on the detail of those pictures so u cna get the idea of how art is actually created.....
Arjun: ok....
Teacher: u have yur cameras.....now view anything u want and take yur pictures.....
(Meanwhile, Pakhi and her frends r daring each other 2 steal sumthing from the school gardens......where arjun is, Pakhi leaves 4 the gardens)

(Arjun is about 2 take a photo of the river....but through his camera, he sees a girl running, he decides 2 follow the girl)

Arjun: hey who is that?
(Pakhi sees Arjun running towards her, and picks up the objects she was stealing and starts running, Arjun notices that she was stealing)

Arjun: hey....chor....thief.....how dare u steal?
(Grabs her hand, and pulls off her shawl, Pakhi turns around. Arjun and Pakhi luk into each other's eyes. From that moment, the skies stop moving and the Big Ben had just striked 10:00am and stopped right there and maples leaves fly around the two....everything had stopped....and starts moving again)
Pakhi's frends: pakhi...jaldi karo...miss monica is cumin....pakhi...come on...pakhi....
Pakhi: come on...let go of me.....let my hand go.....(arjun is still holding her hand)
Pakhi: plz.....let my hand go.....(arjun is still holding her hand).....i'm sorry mister....(bites his hand)
Arjun: Oww!!!!
Pakhi (turns around): I'm sorry!!!!!!
Arjun: Pakhi.....buhut hai bakhi....
(Arjun picks up one the maple leaves and runs towards his classmates)

Next scene....Sujal and Tashu ki love at first sight.....

Sujal: oh god....so late.....i'm so late....
Tashu: Hai.....mein bhi na...i should've turned on my alarm.....
Sujal: where did my alarm clock get lost to?
Tashu: teacher is going 2 murder me....
Sujal: teacher will murder me....no doubt about that.....
(Sujal is luking down at his watch and Tashu is sorting her file out and unaware of where they r going....Sujal and Tashu bump into each other on the hill where the junior students play and roll down the hill, Sujal falls on top of Tashu, their eyes luk into each other....once again, the skies and the birds stop moving, the Big Ben stops striking....maple leaves fly all over the lovers, one maple leaf lands on Tashu's face, Sujal takes it off)
Tashu: ahem-ahem....
Sujal: oh...sorry (helps her up but neva stops luking at her)
(the bell rings)
Sujal & Tashu: OMG.......Registration.....
Sujal (grabs tashu's hand): come on....
(they quickly rush 2 the class)
Teacher: well....sujal....and tashu.....u r lucky...bcoz it is the first day...i will let u off....but do not be late again....
Sujal: yes maam
Tashu: ok....it will neva happen again
Sujal: I'm Sujal Montague
Tashu: Tashu Capulet.....(they shake hands)
Next scene....Romeo and Juliet.....ki love at first sight.....
Romeo: oh god.....i'm late....not going 2 luk gud when mom and dad hear about this
Juliet: Mom and dad....will be so angry when they hear about this......
Amal: dont worry.....juliet...we wont be late...
Romeo: oh....i will be so glad when this university will get over and done wid.....
Juliet: kya university jaana bhi zarrori tha kya?
Amal: yes...it was important
(Romeo starts running.....so does Juliet and Amal, Juliet trips and her folder and papers r messed up)
Amal: jaldi karo yaar.....one minute left....
Juliet: ek minute....
Amal: mein tho chale.....
Juliet: hey amal.....(amal goes)....some friend she is....
(Romeo catches up wid Juliet.....but Juliet has her back turned)
Romeo: excuse me....do u need any help?
Juliet: no..thank u......i got it now....
Romeo: i'll help u (walks up more closer)
Juliet: i got it..all under control..thanx (stands up and turns around but romeo turns away 2 luk at his watch.....the wind starts blowing and Juliet covers her face wid her hand.....and Romeo turns back at Juliet, Juliet slowly removes her hand, Romeo and Juliet luk at each other.....once again the maple leaves fly, and time stops, and starts again)
Romeo: chalo...
Juliet: ok...
(Both rush 2 their class)
Teacher: well...Mr. Romeo Montague.....late on the first day back.....not a gud sign...
Romeo: sorry ma'am
Teacher: ok..just sit down.....and same goes 4 u Miss Capulet....
Juliet: yes....
Romeo: btw.....I'm Romeo Montague....
Juliet: kool...I'm Juliet Capulet...
Romeo: also....a maple leaf is tuck in yur hair...i'll take it out (takes the maple leaf out)
Juliet: thanx

Precap: The three boys and girls reach home. Arjun begins to paint Pakhi when he saw her, Sujal holds the maple leaf and remembers Tashu and Romeo has flashbacks of Juliet.

Howz dat, ppl?
Posted: 18 years ago
very-very nice n sweet part ,keep it up shirley.
Posted: 18 years ago
πŸ‘ i see poo nd tashu blushing πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† wow shirley u rok hney 😊
Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by newkidontheblok


πŸ‘ i see poo  blushing πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† \ 😊

 wowwwww , hunny , u like to see me blushing------πŸ˜†πŸ˜† i also wanna see  when u blushing.πŸ˜‰

Posted: 18 years ago
wowwwwww! that was really something i loved reading.....now am excited abt d next part...pls....continue soon...and keep up d gr8 work... πŸ‘
Posted: 18 years ago
Episode 3

(Arjun's art lesson has finished, and walking over to his locker)

Arjun: hmm...kaun thi voh larki.....aise...larki maine aaj thak nahin dekhe.....(has flashbacks of the love at first sight)......(puts his books in the locker....and is about to go 2 the cafetaria for lucnh and bumps into Pakhi on the way)
Pakhi: woah!!!! dekh kar chala karo........oohh....(luks at arjun)
Arjun: tum......pakhi...yahan phar...kaise?
Pakhi: oohh.....aap.....sorry....aaj ki chakar....u no...jab maine aapke haath ko bite kya...
Arjun: oh...about that...koi baat nahin...hota hai...vaise......aap ka sahe naam kya....aur aap kahan rehte hain...
Pakhi: mera naam Pakhi Capulet hai....aur....vaise...lunch ka waqt hai...kyun na hum dono lunch karle....vaise humare dosti bhi ache barlegi....(gives him a warm smile)
Arjun: jee....chale....
Pakhi: aapne aap ne aap ke baari mein nahin bataya....
Arjun: Arjun Montague....mein yahan london mein rahta hoon....aur...mere do baari bhai hai....ek chota bhai aur ek choti behen.....aur...u no...everythign a guy can wish for...
Pakhi: buhut ek interesting character hai aap....Mr. Montague...
(Arjun laughs and luks down)
Pakhi: buhut sharmele hai aap....
Arjun (blushes): nahin...aise koi baat nahin hai
Pakhi: dont worry...main bhi kabhi aise hi hoon....
(both head for the cafetaria)
Next scene: Sujal - Tashu
(Sujal and Tashu r in their media studies class)
Sujal: yeh lesson kitna boring hai....haina?
Tashu: hmm.....kaash jaldi sey lunch ka time hui.....aur hum yaha sey bach jaye.....
Sujal: uff....yeh teacher bas sirf baqwaas bulta rehta hai...
Tashu: koi shaq....sujal?
(the bell rings)
Sujal: shukar hai...ki lesson khatam hogaya hai....varna main tho jeethi jeethi hai....
Tashu: sujal....chalo....
Sujal; arre....aaj subha jo bhi kuch hua...us ki liye i'm sorry....
Tashu: kaunse kaam ki liye sorry?
Sujal: aaj....jaise tarha hum dono hill sey ghir gaye thi....aur...
Tashu: koi baat nahin...badi badi desho mein aise choti choti haadsey hoti rehte hain....(she smiles sujal smiles back).....rite?
Sujal: rite....
Tashu: chalo...lunch ka waqt hai...hum dono lunch karte hai...
Sujal: acha idea hai....tho phir chalti hai
(the both head for the cafetaria)
Next scene: Romeo and Juliet at University........
Romeo: oh....tho...university ki baad kaunsa career karna chahti hoon?
Juliet: erm....main ek journalist bana chahti hoon
Romeo: oh...a journalist....that's gud....
Juliet: what do u want 2 be?
Romeo: A doctor....
(Juliet sniggers)
Juliet: tum ek doctor....forget it...
Romeo: well....i have many other options...such as a aircraft pilot....
Juliet: go for it.....main tho sirf joke kar rahe thi...
Romeo: so...howz life?
Juliet: ooooo.....just keeps getting better
Romeo: sounds good....
(bell rings)
Juliet: oh....lesson time...i guess it is.....
Romeo: we have....biology now...
Juliet: oh....how interesting...
(the school day ends 4 three couples...and r at home now)
(Arjun gets his painting ready....and thinks of what to paint...suddenly remembers pakhi...arjun begins 2 paint pakhi...)
(Sujal holds the maple leaf that he had removed from Tashu face and has flashbacks of the love at first sight....and smiles to himself...)
(Romeo, in his own room, holds the leaf he removed from juliet's hair, and remembers their conversation at lunch)
(Shivangi suddenly comes)
Shivangi: wassup, brothers?
Romeo: oh..nothing....
Shivangi; then why is sujal smiling while holding that old leaf?
Sujal: it is not old.....
Shivz (luking surprised): alrite....(turns 2 arjun).....and what r u painting.....
Arjun: oohh.....nothing special....
Shivz: hmmmm....erm...mom is saying that dinner is ready...come down.....
Romeo: alrite we r coming.....
Next scene: Capulet House....
Tashu: i got a lot of homework....uff!!!
Tulsi: come on...children.....dinner....
Mamta: coming.....i just need 2 put my books up
Tulsi: ok beta....
Amal: erm....aunty.....my frend is coming 2day....u dont mind, na?
Tulsi: nahin beta....when will she come?
Amal: oh...it's he....a guy....
Mona: a guy....oohh....someone is getting lucky
(Gauri and Juliet join everyone downstairs)
Mona: oh guess what....juliet?
Juliet: what?
Mona: amal has a bf....
Gauri: u have 2 be kidding.....
Mona: no...his name is.....
Amal: Ashmit....Malhotra...
Juliet: oh....so when will this ashmit malhotra come..? (gives her a funny luk)
Amal: ok....luk at u juliet....wid romeo....
Gauri: romeo? who is romeo?
Marriyam: erm...ppl....cut this out now...yaar plz
Pakhi: yeah...who is romeo?
Juliet: he is just a frend of mine....
Tulsi: what is his full name?
Juliet full name is romeo mon....(phone rings)
Marriyam: i'll get that
Juliet (to herself): montague
Marriyam (picks up phone): hi.....u will be coming.....kool.....i'll be waiting......(hangs up)
Pakhi: who was that?
Marriyam: karan.....
Tashu: who is karan?
Marriyam: a frend of mine....hex coming over 2nite 4 dinner
Tashu: ok...is it just me or is everyone inviting everyone for dinner?
Gauri: i think it is the famiyl problem....
Mamta (luks out of the window): hey some guys r coming...
Amal: oh they r here
(Ashmit and Karan Grover come in)
Amal: hi...
Ashmit: hi amal....kaise ho?
Amal: theek ho...
Karan: hey marriyam...
Marriyam: hey....
Mamta: can u c the smiles on amal and marriyam's faces?
(amal and marriyam luk at mamta)
Mamta: sorry
Juliet: hey there
Amal: that is my frend...juliet...
Karan: hey...and hey gauri
Gauri: hey there.....
(they sit down 4 dinner)
Mihir: arre....tulsi...cezzane aur madiha kaha hai?
Tulsi; abhi....bulati hoon.....cezzane!!!!! Madiha!!!! aao.....khaana kalo....
(upstairs, cezzane is working on his laptop)
Madiha: cezzu....tum yahan hu.....mummy hum dono ku bula rahe hai....aur tum bhi...
Cezzane: madhu....mujhe kaam karna haio...plz mein ka loga....
Madiha: nahin...mujhe yeh attitude acha nahin lagta hai....come on...mujhe bura lagega agar tumne mere saath khaana nahin kaya.....
Cezzane: uff!!! (folds his hands) theek hai memsaab.....aap jeethi.....hum haare.....chalo....
Madiha: chalo...
(both come down for dinner)
Mamta: arre aayege hai....
(all sit and have dinner)

Precap: Arjun completes his painting of Pakhi, and Pakhi keeps thinking about Arjun. Tashu's dupatta gets hooked onto Sujal's watch. Juliet's hair keeps blowing in her face and Romeo helps her move it out of the way.

Howz dat, ppl?
Posted: 18 years ago
awwwwwwwwwww shirley i loved dis part hunny------spec. when arjun blushes n me says dat------ main bhi aisi hi hoon 😳 --------i m really loving it. πŸ‘Edited by pakhi joshi - 18 years ago
Posted: 18 years ago
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very very wonderful and sweet 😳

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