Gunahon Ka Devta

SS-"Back in Your Arms"Updated,Pg-7

joliefille thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey friends😊
how are u all?
missed you all and out dear Avita so much😭
so m back to bore you all with another storyπŸ˜†πŸ˜†
i thought to make it an OS but my editor "Priya" want it to be a SS 'Short Story'
so here is the intro , as i have not decided the title yet so these lines's title is not the title for SS,
if you have some idea, your most welcome for it😳

Stay With Me



I used to imagine my future;
When I will find you,
You the one who was made to love me,
You the one who will take me;
To the world of my dreams, my desires,
You will make me feel
How special I am,
For you,
And the day came;
You came in my life as a gentle wind
You were calm, silent; opposite to my dreams
I use to wonder was it you
For whom I was waiting,
But
You make me realize how foolish
I was, yes it was you,'
Always you, you never expressed it
But your touch, said it all,
Now I realize what you are for me,
When you are going away from me,
I know I never said that
But
Yes you were my dream
You are my love, you are my desire
And now I can do nothing except to
Get on my knees n beg
Plzz "Stay with me"
 
She got married to someone whom she never met while she was imagining her dream boy to come on white stallion and take her with him to his world of dreams and happiness, away from her harsh world of reality; the guy she got married was much older to her, just opposite to her wish, calm, composed, hardly share his feelings with her.
She manage herself in his way, she give him everything what he wants from her,
Now she wants only one thing from him, that is a word of assurance to stay with her,
That's her only desire, that's her "Tamanna"

Kyun hum kisi ki yaadon me kho jate hai,
Ek pal ki doori me yun to jaate hain
Koi humen itna bata do
Hum hi aise hain ya pyar karne ke baad
Sabhi aise ho jaate hain.

 Waiting for your replies guys,😳
Finally got the sutable Title for this one its
"Back In Your Arms"


Part-I...Page-3
Part-II...Page-4
 Part-III...Page-5
Part-VI...Page-7
 
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yoga23priya thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
Res πŸ˜›

I am not going to comment further in this story...b'coz i have already read it πŸ˜›

this is and always will be my fav story πŸ‘
Edited by yoga23priya - 12 years ago
Suhana6 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Kyun hum kisi ki yaadon me kho jate hai,
Ek pal ki doori me yun to jaate hain
Koi humen itna bata do
Hum hi aise hain ya pyar karne ke baad
                                      Sabhi aise ho jaate hain.


I just fell in love with these lines...Awsome Darling...am eager to read this FF now...DO start ASAPπŸ‘πŸΌ
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey u πŸ˜Š
exotic into yaar β­οΈ 
shayari both r 2 gud πŸ‘
just wondering abt  ur  * SS * πŸ˜
post it soon πŸ˜ƒ

joliefille thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: yoga23priya

Res πŸ˜›


I am not going to comment further in this story...b'coz i have already read it πŸ˜›

this is and always will be my fav story πŸ‘


Dai i knw u read it already
but that doesn't mean u can escape from commenting ok😑
u didn't told me yet wat u think about each part separately πŸ˜•
btw Love ur Title suggestionπŸ˜‰

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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: Sunaha6

Kyun hum kisi ki yaadon me kho jate hai,
Ek pal ki doori me yun to jaate hain
Koi humen itna bata do
Hum hi aise hain ya pyar karne ke baad
                                      Sabhi aise ho jaate hain.


I just fell in love with these lines...Awsome Darling...am eager to read this FF now...DO start ASAPπŸ‘πŸΌ


Hey Anusha dear
than for liking it
vil try to do it as soon as my editor get well hehe😳

Btw when r u going to Update the super romantic One  my Damsel and our loving Gangster πŸ˜›
m loving it😳

Edited by joliefille - 12 years ago
joliefille thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: MuktaJaiswal

hey u πŸ˜Š

exotic into yaar β­οΈ 
shayari both r 2 gud πŸ‘
just wondering abt  ur  * SS * πŸ˜
post it soon πŸ˜ƒ


Hey Mukta diπŸ˜ƒ
Thanx di, n sply for liking my shayari hehe😳
i hope u will like the update too
will do it soon😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
Oyyee Hoyee...


u r back with new SS

start it soon swets..

The poem and those lines are just out of the world..


Staaarttt sooonnnπŸ˜‰
joliefille thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: prash_t

Oyyee Hoyee...


u r back with new SS

start it soon swets..

The poem and those lines are just out of the world..


Staaarttt sooonnnπŸ˜‰


Hey i think i shud say that U r backπŸ˜†

will start it soon when my Edi. finish with her UD n my Editing work

we know hw busy she isπŸ˜‰
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hoping to get know more about this Tamanna of Arpi's soon...
Good intro Jo