hi people, I'm new to this whole fanfiction stuff but I write some on saloni and nahar in the saath phere forum and some people have requested me to post here as well and so I will try. this fanfiction starts after saloni's marriage...on the suhaag raat. hope u like it!
hey guys, I kinda just made up a suhaag raat ka episode for nahar and saloni.... u guys can post ur own versions too!
lots of laughter going on. piya aur kuch aur larkiyan nahar ko uske kamray ke undher dhaka deti hain. he tries to resist but fakingly (kyun ki woh bhi bechain hai ). to larkiyan jaldi se darwaazay ko bund kardeti hai aur bahar se lock kardeti hain. woh bed ki taraf dekhta hai jo ke phoolon se bhichha hua hai aur bheech mein behti hai saji hui saloni. bechara nahar vahaan kharahokar sochata hai "hey Bhagwaan, please mujhse koi galti mat karana varna saloni naraaz hojaaygi aur mujhe abhi tak manana nahi aata" (btw he has his has together like doing a prayer and looking up). aur phir woh dheere se bed ki taraf barta hai. as he approaches, phoolon ko paray karnay se phele woh phir se ek do second ke liye sochta hai. then he comes back to reality. dheere se woh phoolon ko paray karta hai aur bed pe beth jata hai saloni ke saamnay. dono chup rehtay hai. aisay hi chupi mein paanch minute nikal jaate hai...nahar to sirf saloni ki hi taraf dekhta rehta hai aur udhar saloni ki jaan nikal rahi hoti hai. woh sochti hai "ye nahar ghoonghat kyun nahi utharah?" aur tab hi, nahar ko hosh aata hai aur woh aapne haat agay karta hai aur dheere say saloni ka ghoonghat utah ta hai. saloni ki nigaahen neechi hai aur woh bahut khoobsurat dikh rahi hai. both have a silent conversation.
nahar - saloni, mere paas to ilfaaz hi nahi hain...
saloni - nahar, kuch bolo na. mein najanay kyun itni nervous hoon. dekho mera dil kitni zoron se dharak raha hai. oh no, kahin tumhe sach much sunayee to nahi dera?
nahar - aaj mere dil se tumhare liye kitna pyar arah hai... mein tumse bahut pyar karta hoon saloni....
at that point, just as nahar silently thinks that, saloni uski taraf nazrein utha kar dekhti hai aur kehti hai "aapnay kuch kaha?". nahar kehta hai "aapnay kuch suna?". saloni kehti hai "nahin shayaad woh..." nahar kehta hai "meinay to shayad kuch nahin kaha lekin jo aapnay suna woh bilkul sach tah".... they both look into each others eyes for a few secs and slowly saloni agay barti hai aur uska sar dheere se nahar ke kanday ke oopar ruk jaata hai. he encloses her in his arms and the lights get dimmer and dimmer and dimmer and out..... between the whole time the title song instrumental is playing in the background slowly.
kaisa laga? sorry for any mistakes in the hindi. didn't mean to offend anyone in any manner either. how about u guys write up your own versions too. anyways
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