Saath Phere-Saloni Aur Nahar Ka Safar

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Posted: 2006-01-29T21:51:51Z

hi people, I'm new to this whole fanfiction stuff but I write some on saloni and nahar in the saath phere forum and some people have requested me to post here as well and so I will try. this fanfiction starts after saloni's marriage...on the suhaag raat. hope u like it!

 
Part I

hey guys, I kinda just made up a suhaag raat ka episode for nahar and saloni.... u guys can post ur own versions too!

lots of laughter going on. piya aur kuch aur larkiyan nahar ko uske kamray ke undher dhaka deti hain. he tries to resist but fakingly (kyun ki woh bhi bechain hai LOL). to larkiyan jaldi se darwaazay ko bund kardeti hai aur bahar se lock kardeti hain. woh bed ki taraf dekhta hai jo ke phoolon se bhichha hua hai aur bheech mein behti hai saji hui saloni.  bechara nahar vahaan kharahokar sochata hai "hey Bhagwaan, please mujhse koi galti mat karana varna saloni naraaz hojaaygi aur mujhe abhi tak manana nahi aata" (btw he has his has together like doing a prayer and looking up). aur phir woh dheere se bed ki taraf barta hai. as he approaches, phoolon ko paray karnay se phele woh phir se ek do second ke liye sochta hai. then he comes back to reality. dheere se woh phoolon ko paray karta hai aur bed pe beth jata hai saloni ke saamnay. dono chup rehtay hai. aisay hi chupi mein paanch minute nikal jaate hai...nahar to sirf saloni ki hi taraf dekhta rehta hai aur udhar saloni ki jaan nikal rahi hoti hai. woh sochti hai "ye nahar ghoonghat kyun nahi utharah?" aur tab hi, nahar ko hosh aata hai aur woh aapne haat agay karta hai aur dheere say saloni ka ghoonghat utah ta hai. saloni ki nigaahen neechi hai aur woh bahut khoobsurat dikh rahi hai. both have a silent conversation.

nahar - saloni, mere paas to ilfaaz hi nahi hain...

saloni - nahar, kuch bolo na. mein najanay kyun itni nervous hoon. dekho mera dil kitni zoron se dharak raha hai. oh no, kahin tumhe sach much sunayee to nahi dera?

nahar - aaj mere dil se tumhare liye kitna pyar arah hai... mein tumse bahut pyar karta hoon saloni....

at that point, just as nahar silently thinks that, saloni uski taraf nazrein utha kar dekhti hai aur kehti hai "aapnay kuch kaha?". nahar kehta hai "aapnay kuch suna?". saloni kehti hai "nahin shayaad woh..." nahar kehta hai "meinay to shayad kuch nahin kaha lekin jo aapnay suna woh bilkul sach tah".... they both look into each others eyes for a few secs and slowly saloni agay barti hai aur uska sar dheere se nahar ke kanday ke oopar ruk jaata hai. he encloses her in his arms and the lights get dimmer and dimmer and dimmer and out.....LOL between the whole time the title song instrumental is playing in the background slowly.

kaisa laga? sorry for any mistakes in the hindi. didn't mean to offend anyone in any manner either. how about u guys write up your own versions too. anyways

cheers,

dc

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Posted: 2006-01-29T21:53:34Z
Part 2
its like three in the morning and nahar and saloni are sleeping. nahar is in a light sleep and laying on his back and saloni has her back to nahar. nahar ek bari si angraii leta hai and lands up on his stomach but his hand falls on saloni's waist. he moans and then thinks, "yeh kaun hai?" and then sits up and slaps his head and thinks "arre haan, budhu, ab teri shaadi hogai hai". saloni turns onto her back so she is facing upwards. she looks so beautiful sleeping (she has no jewellery except the bangles). nahar looks at her and thoray chir kaliay kho jata hai aur uski nazar saloni ke sulfon pe parti hai. while saloni had turned, some of her hair got onto her face. nahar dheere say aapnay haathon se saloni ke balon ko paray karta hai and caresses her face gently. he takes another look at her and lies back facing upwards aur ab to uski neend gayi. woh apnay khayalon mein hota hai aur saloni bhi angrayi leti hai. she lands up with her face lying on the right side of his chest and her hand on his stomach. woh to sorahi hai na. nahar is hesitant and smiles. of course usay achha laga! woh bhi aapnay right arm se saloni ko apnay saat dhak leta hai. subha hogayi hai aur chiriyon ke shor se saloni utnay lagti hai. she moans in half sleep and slowly opens her eyes. at first she doesn't realize anything and moves closer to nahar (jise koi hosh nahin hai...sari raat soya nahin na bechara ) aur phir saloni realizes uskay haat bed ke upar to nahin lagta and she opens her eyes and realizes she her postion and nahar's arm around her. she's about to get up right away but slowly moves nahar's arm so that he doesn't awaken. she sits up and smiles faintly while looking back at her hubby. then she puts her hands together and looks up thinking "hey bhagwaan, please meri madat karna ke mein nahar ko koi shikyaad karnay ka mauka na doon". she looks at the clock and its 5:45. woh uth kar washroom jaati hai. she comes out in a beautiful lilac coloured sari all dressed up like a navi naveli dulhan, but she doesn't over do it. and then she goes to the kitchen and tara meets her at the stairs and greets her "arre saloni, bahut khoobsurat lagrahi ho" in a teasing manner". they both go to the kitchen and start the breakfast preparations. dheere dheere sab ajatay hain except nahar. woh bechara raat soya nahin teek se. saloni aur tara table teek kartay hain aur tara kehti hai "saloni, jao nahar ko utao". saloni gives her an expression of "mein?". tara says "haan, tum, akhir tum uski patni ho" and smiles. saloni nods her head and goes...phir kya hota hai? wait for next time!
cheers,
dc
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Posted: 2006-01-29T21:56:33Z
Part 3
recap: saloni is asked to go wake nahar up and she is hesitant as she doesn't really know how
saloni dheere dheere apnay kamray ki taraf bharti hai aur chalte chalte soch bhi rahi hai.she reaches the room and moves towards the bed. she moves the flower garlands aside (still standing) and sees nahar sleeping in the same position as she had left him. the only missing part is her. and she sits down and smiles and thinks "mein kitni kismat wali hoon ke mujhe nahar jaisa pati mila." and then she snaps out of it and remembers she has to wake him up so. first she clears her throat loudly...koi farak nahin para. she slowly and sweetly calls out his name. "nahar. utiay na, sab nichay aapka intezaar kar rahay hain". he doesn't move. she tries again and this time she puts her hand on his arm and lightly shakes it. "nahar, utiay na. nahar?" she gets frusterated aur sochti hain "ab mein kya karoon? sab neechay arahay hain aur ye... itni gheri neend mein sotay hain to mein kaise roz utaoongi?" again woh koshish karti hain and tries to shake his arm. shes sitting next to him by the way. aur phir woh apnay hath ko nahar ke sar par la kar ruk jati hai (another hestitant moment) and then puts her hand on his head and gently moves his hair aside and calls his name sweetly. and finally shes frusterated when he doesn't respond and gets up immediately and turns around. but then nahar turns on his side (where she was sitting) and immediately grabs her hand and makes her sit.
nahar - itnay pyar se utaengi to uthnay ka mann hi nahin karega.
saloni - nahar, iska matlab, aap...?
nahar - he sits up. "sorry, maine zaada tang to nahin kiya?". waise jaanti ho saloni, aap aisay mere saamnay bethi hain ke utnay ko dil hi nahin karta.
saloni - "achha?", she lets her hand free and "to phir mein yahan se chali jati hoon." and she quickly leaves aur nahar hasta rehjata hain. and then the little boy (sorry don;t remember the name) comes in.
boy - "kyun mama, roz to aap mere utnay se pehlay utjatay ho aur aaj itni late?"
nahar - teher tujhe batata hoon kaise...he gets up to get him but the boy runs out and nahar goes to the bathroom.
downstairs. sab log dining table par hotay hain and saloni touches the elder's feet, etc. brijesh, "arre, humaray dulhay miyan kahan hain, kahin nazar hi nahin ahrahay?". tara, "lagta hai, kal ki raat thori lambi hogayi kyon saloni?". everyones teasing and nahar comes along and sits. everyone is sitting and piya says, "bhabhi aap bhi baitiya na?" while pointing to the seat next to nahar. and saloni sits. sab kharahay hotay hain (they do that alot in serials eh?). all of a sudden nahar starts coughing. he's choking. piya, "itni bhi kya jaldi hai bhaiya, dekho na kitna khana para hai". saloni grabs a glass of water and gives it to nahar. he drinks and supresses his cough but everyone is giggling. saloni puts takes the glass from him. nahar, "woh, galay mein kuch..." and the phone rings. piya, "I'll get it!". its salon's mom. piya, "bhabhi apkeliay hain, aunty ji" (what do they call each other?). saloni gets up. shes sitting on the left side of nahar, and as she gets up her hand accidently hits nahar's who was holding a spoon. the spoon falls on the plate and saloni "oh, sorry". and she moves ahead but can't because her bangles got stuck with nahar's braclet! shes embarassed and tries to remove it and finally she does, with nahar's help. and she attends the call. mom, "saloni, kaisi hai beta? ghar kab arahai hai?". saloni, "teek hoon mummy, ghar mein sab...". mom, "sab teek hai, humesha doosron ki sochti ho, tum kab arahi ho?". saloni, "jaldi". while saloni's on the phone, everyone is teasing nahar and he gets up and spills daheen on himself. everyones laughing now. saloni looks over, "mummy mein aapko bad mein phone karti hoon". she puts it down and rushes over. bhabho, "jao, saloni isay undhar le jao, ye to ab kisi kam ka nahi raha". everyones laughing and both nahar and saloni leave the table emabarassed.
phew! baaki ki baad mein. bye!
cheers,
dc
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Posted: 2006-01-29T22:09:03Z
AWESOME JOB!!!!!!!! PLZ CONTINUE SOON! Clap
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Posted: 2006-01-30T06:59:15Z
as i said before that is soooooooooooo GOOD!!! keep it uP!.. can't wait till u cont! Big smile
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Posted: 2006-01-30T07:11:37Z
gr8 scene pls continue soon Big smile
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Posted: 2006-01-30T07:34:18Z
i think u should start to write the saloni script
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Posted: 2006-01-30T12:11:30Z
great parts yaar!! Clap
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