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Romeo & Juliet 4 Suraj-Manasvi!!! - Page 12

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Posted: 18 years ago
Episode 47

(the goenkas go back home....suraj sits upstairs in his room)

siddarth: i said...that we should tell suraj the truth...but..arjun wont let me...now luk arjun..what happened....
arjun: papa....how did i know that history will repeat...?
shaku: luk...we cant blame suraj...he didnt know anything...we cant blame him..
kashish(interrupting): actually...mama...he knew...i told him everything..
arjun(shocked): what?
kashish: i knew everything..before u all found out....i kne he was dating a virani...and...
shakti: and u neva told any of us...?
kashish: i told bhoomi bhabhi..
arjun(luking at bhoomi): u knew...? and u neva told me..?
bhoomi: arjun...i...just...
arjun: bhavri....u lied 2 me...and i neva expected this from u....
bhoomi(crying): arjun...
arjun: i'll be back....(goes upstairs....and goes 2 suraj's room)
arjun: suraj?
suraj: yeah....what?
arjun: i neva expected this from u...
suraj: uff bhaiyya...same old words...
arjun: but they r our enemies..how could u..
suraj: but i neva knew....no-one would eva tell me...
arjun: luk...forget her...forget her...plz...otherwise u might end up..where raj chachu ended up..
suraj: bhaiyya...why r u backing out....why wont u support me...?
arjun: bcoz...
suraj(interrupts): luk...bhoomi bhabhi was our servant at first...but when u luved her...i helped u two...unite...so..why...cant u help me now?
arjun: bcoz..our situations were diferent....bhavri was a servant...not the daughter of our enemy family...
suraj: mom says we r like karan-arjun...or ram-lakshman....sumtimes in situations...u were ram..and i was laksman..and i neva left u...like lakshman neva left ram..so...why r u leaving me...when u r lakshman in this situation?
arjun: suraj...but...
suraj(getting up): i'm going out 4 a walk....
arjun: but suraj..
suraj: i'll be back...(leaves)

(back in shanti-niketan)

gautam: those goenkas have crossed the limit...
ansh: suraj...neva gussed that he was a goenka...but..
gautam: we...have 2 do sumthing....
ansh: like what..?
gautam: kill..him..
ansh: gud...nice idea...brother...
gautam: we have 2 keep this a secret...ok?
ansh: fine...i'm going....u stay here....
gautam: ok..
(ansh leaves)

(manasvi is upstairs....reading a book...and suddenly starts feeling unwell...and starts vomiting....she rushes 2 the bathroom...and starts throwing up...)

manasvi(thinking): whats wrong wid me....why am i vomting...i was fine..until..(remembers the big nite...)..no...i cant...be...i have 2 visit the doctors...

(manasvi goes 2 the doctors....and gets her tests done...)

doctor: ok..maansvi..yur tests r done..and the results r clear...
manasvi: and..?
doctor: tests r positive...
manasvi: postive....i dont get u..doctor..
doctor: u r pregnant...
manasvi(shocked): pregnant....?
doctor: anything wrong...?
manasvi: no doctor....nothing is wrong(leaves from there)

(manasvi reaches home...and gets her phone and calls suraj..suraj sees manasvi's name flashing up)

suraj(on the phone): hello?
manasvi: suraj..?
suraj: u no..yur family members will get mad at u..if u call me..
manasvi: but listen 2 me...
suraj: what...?
manasvi: whateva happened between us..that nite...
suraj: jusr forget it....
manasvi: forget it...? suraj..what if i get....
suraj: get what...?
manasvi: neva mind....(hungs up)
suraj: hello...hello?
manasvi(thinking): i'll raise this child on my own...on my own...

(suraj hungs up the phone..and luks up and sees ansh...)

suraj: ansh..?
ansh: just shut up..(punches him)
suraj: just listen 2 me...
ansh: why...should i?
(ansh beats up suraj badly....later...suraj falls down...and is hardly moving...)
ansh: finally....suraj goenka...is dead...(grins)

Precap: Manasvi is shocked to hear about Suraj, meanwhile Arjun reports Suraj missing.

Howz dat, ppl? Edited by Shirley - 18 years ago

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Shirley thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
ok ppl...updating episode 48 😃
tunna thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
o my god........!!!
shirl.... plz update quick.... u cant imagine how 10sd i'm for suraj.... plzzzzzzzzzzz quick...quick...quick.. !!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
ok..sorry i couldnt update it yesterday...i'm updating the last episode...episode 48 😃
Shirley thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
Episode 48 (last episode)

(ansh calls gautam...)

ansh(on phone):gautam..its me...ansh
gautam: yeah..ansh..what happened....?
ansh: i killed him..just need 2 dump his body sumwhere..
gautam: make sure..u do it carefully...no-one should no find out that we murdered suraj...
(manasvi who was up at the stairs..hears the convo and is petrified...she goes back in her room...closes the door..and screams...she goes over 2 the dressing table..opens one of the drawers..and takes out the sleeping pills..and gets flashbacks of her past wid suraj...and swallows the pills)

(ansh dumps suraj's body in a damp pile of maple leaves...ansh leaves. )

mihir: manasvi...u will be going 2 london...
manasvi: why..?
mihir: bcoz u r...yur flight will be going in a short while..get in the car...
manasvi: but...
tulsi: beta...do what yur papa says..
manasvi: fine...(gets her bags...and goes in the car)
karan: the sooner manasvi forgets him..the better....
nandini: but...erm..where's ansh..?
ansh(coming in): is manasvi ready..?
tulsi; yeah...just going in the car...
ansh; ok..

(next scene: arjun is tensed about suraj)

arjun: papa...its been a long time since suraj hasnt come home yet...
siddarth: he will come...he just needs a little time on his own...
shakti: but papa..luk...its been a long time..
kashish: what if...the viranis...?
arjun: no...if the viranis lay a finger on my brother...i will kill the lot of them...(grabs his jacket..)
bhoomi: where r u going?
arjun: 2 find suraj..
bhoomi: hold on...i'll go wid u...
(both leave)

(manasvi, karan, nandini,ansh r in the car....suddenly the car stops)

karan: why did u stop the car?
nandini: whos that?
ansh(furious): OMG....
(a guy none other than suraj is standing in front of the car...manasvi is shocked 2 see him alive)
nandini: its...him..
karan(getting out): what does he want...?
(ansh gets out and points his gun 2 his head..suraj moves ansh's arm away..and punches him hard..ansh punches him back hard....both get into a fight...)

karan: ansh...stop it....ansh..
ansh: no way..karan..(still beating up suraj)...today i'm not going 2 spare him...

(arjun-bhoomi r still searching 4 suraj..and see ansh fighting wid suraj...)

arjun: OMG...bhavri..wait here...i'll be back...
bhoomi(getting out); arjun...hold on...uff....
karan: let him go....i said let him go...
ansh(still beating suaj up): no...no...way....
(manasvi slowly gets out of the car...nandini tries 2 stop her..but manasvi moves her hand away...she gets out of the car...suddenly she starts spilling blood out of her mouth..bcoz of the sleeping pills...)

suraj(turns around): MAAANNNNNAAASSSSVVVII!!!!
(manasvi collapses and suraj catches her....ansh hits suraj in the back of the head..manasvi falls down on the ground..suraj falls beside her)

arjun(trying 2 pick up suraj): bhavri...come on..we have 2 get him 2 da hospital..
bhoomi: ok...ok...relax arjun...he'll be ok..
karan: nandini....get manasvi in the car now...rite now!!!!
arjun: my brother..and yur sister r in serious conditions..rite now..we should forget our enmity...and save these two..
karan: fine....agreed....lets go...hurry..

(both s-m r in the hospital....)

doctor: both r ok..now...out of danger..
karan: oh...thank god...
nandini: thank god...
arjun: thanx doctor....4 saving my brother...
mihir: ansh...
ansh: i'm sorry....4 hitting yur brother..and all the things i said in the past....sorry....
arjun: its ok...
(both give a hug 2 each other..and both families r happy 2gether...)

bhoomi: can we see them both?
doctor: ok..manasvi is over that way...and suraj is there...
kashish: thank u doctor...
tulsi: ok..we'll see suraj...and...
shaku: we'll see manasvi..
tulsi: ok...
doctor: both r getting discharged....so...u can take them home..
bhoomi: ok...
(both r discharged...and meet each other face-to-face..and hug each other....maple leaves fly around...)

              The End!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
wohooooooooooooooooooo..finally....it ended.....yaar.....shukar hai that they got united in da end.......nice ending......
sorry yaar......kaafi dinun baad reply kiya.....there was some prob.....anyways.....i read alll of them....they were reallly veru lovely........
very very goood...luv it.... 👏

u rock sweetieeeeeeee........
tunna thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
WOW
it was lovely dear.... nothing cud b better...
they were united at the end... a happy ending... wat more can 1ask for...
just sad that my fav ff has ended.... but then ur there... 😊   ll hav more of such fab1s 😊