MG[FF]Maan Proposes Geet Disposes[Thread1/Note149] - Page 15

Originally posted by: Lip-a-Licious

Jazzyyy that was so brilliant  ⭐️
and so very well written ⭐️
that i don't know what to say 😆
love the relationship between the Handa's !!!!!
and eager to read what you have in store for us 😃

Originally posted by: serenelove

Hey Jazz,

Lovely start.

Introduction from Chaudhary Handa's POV was worth a shot. 

Liked their simple life, teasing, caring & loving acts for each other. 

Seems S-I-Ls are kind of disappointing. 

Continue Real Soon. 

Edited:

Punjabi is fine. No problem in understanding. 

Originally posted by: Krishnaluv94

That was awesome, Jazz! Beautiful! I loved it!

Originally posted by: sush1

the concept seems interesting

always wanted to see how maaneet would romance in a periodic scene

thanks for pm

Originally posted by: Vidushi89

Aww...this was such a sweet part...
Loved it...

Updt soon.
Thanls for the pm.

Originally posted by: jyoti_l

awesome...

love his wealth that he considers,,,,...his daughters...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...

Originally posted by: Eowyn

You transported me to an altogether different place Jazz...

I was totally lost in the Handa family...

I loved all the 'jee jee' especially😆

This Punjabi I can understand thankfully😳

I respect Chudhary ji a lot for considering his daughters as gems...

That was something rare in that period and even now at places and times...

Rano is a strong woman for sure...

All three of the girls are fun to read...

Thank you for the pm Jazz

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Hi dear..thanks 4 da pm n superb update. Loved it! Well written! Update soon

Originally posted by: Dreamy_Mystique

hiii jazz..
dil khush kar diya..
what an update...
pehle part mein hi sixer maar diya...loved it sweetie
keep writing
reva

Originally posted by: lil.mizz.smexii

awesome start
cont soon
thanks for the pm