(update-8 sep) OS My name is Trouble (pg 13, 14) - Page 13

This content was originally posted by: heena_mehta

finally i m here  Welcom swty 🤗

hey tanz first of all a bear hug to u for giving a perfect end to ur os... thanku so much Heenu...u knw how worried abt the ending I was.. i never ended ny of my stories...this 1 was the first 😕

tanz u managed it so well, otherwise wrapping up d  whole story in 3-4 updates is reli difficult, although its my personal opinion ,coz when i tried to finish an unknown desire widin 3-4 updates, it never happened😕 hell it is man 😳 i had to skip so many things.. u can imagine 😕 i had to skip the entire trip of abhiya.. i had to skip Alina.. and offcourse what happened to Jeh..i intend to wrt a bit more abt him bt i guess i will do it in some other OS 😕

i loved d whole set up of d story,it was power packed , wid abhay-pia's roller costal emotional ride!!! thanks swtz 

i loved dat part specially where pia said dat she wl kill herself...n after dat d way abhay accepted everything!! beautiful!!! threat ke bina Abhay sunta nehi hai 😆 emotional blackmail ka time nehi tha 😛 so direct threat 😃

then whole fight sequence was well written!!! 

jay-abhay scene was nicely written

n loved d last part where mathali proved her love!!!

overall as an os this was reli very nice!!! Thanks a lot.. I wanted to give Maithli a proper ending and that was the OS abt 😳

n pls nw update tilld end of timne...i m dying to read nxt part!! i m writing 1st FF now...havnt updated it...thn 2nd one 😳

luv u 🤗 luv u too 🤗

This content was originally posted by: luvd

Wow tanzie it was awsm n heart wrenching.at least maithli died 4 gud.hats off 4 this update.

This content was originally posted by: Rozy77

nice ending tanzie👏, action packed😆👍🏼

abhiya's reunion was awesome😳 so touching...

felt bad for jeh, but i guess that's how it was meant to be

atleast metz did 1 good thing🤔

 

thanks for the pm dear

take care

This content was originally posted by: missglam

Awesum update tanzie
the ending was superb
beautiful OS
i loved it
though , i didnt like metz but i'm glad dat she saved abhay !
Whooopieee !! Finally. . Abhiya together forever!
Thanks for the pm
tc

This content was originally posted by: sunflower52

Wow nice ending all I can say is Love Conquers All. 

This content was originally posted by: snitchseeker

Tanzie dear first of all thank you coz you made Pia slap Abhay.

And this was a good update I don't know how you wanted it to turn out but it is good. 🤗

This content was originally posted by: matwamango

written to perfection TANZIE just caught up with this OS. I think i have read the first 2 update but then lost track with finishing the ending.

 

I will try to catch uo with your other works when i have time.