awww tanzie u have blown me off with this update i m stunned how can u write so well i m falling short of adjectives right now to praise u and besides i don't think i m good enough to appreciate such a beautiful piece of work abhiya were truly amazing in this update i think now pia is getting close to abhay's truth the way she has consoled her that he is such a good person is amazing they both have surely fallen madly in love with each other and the last part when abhay gave her his blood and save her inspite of struggling from his blood thirst u have wrote it really well that i can almost feel their emotions the last line of abhay was really touching i hope now he will admit his feelings btw as abhay has given her his blood will it going to have some consequences anyways a big to u for this update now i just can't wait to read the next part i hope it will contain some abhiya as well please update soon and thanks for pm
Awesome update! I'm glad Abhay is realizing that he cares for Piya and Piya should just admit she has fallen in love with Abhay! It was really sweet how Piya was in pain but all she was concerned about was the blood coming out of Abhay's eyes! I can't wait till Abhay and Piya admit to themselves that they are in love! Looking forward to the next update! Continue soon
Phew long update that was awsum tanzie dipu and aryans convo finally abhay realised that he feels something for pia thanx for pm i have a confusion are u planning a love triangle between alina aryan peehuand continue soon
Edited by strawberryrashu - 2011-10-08T23:17:11Z
Superb Update Tanzie..!It's was Awesome...Wow last lines were awesome..!I so loved ur writing..Wish I was gud at writing n not lazy..!Ur two FFs r d best one I have ever read..!Thanks for PM n Update soon..!!