New FF: Till the End of Time(Book1 DONE)note pg149(Page 82)

Posted: 2011-10-08T14:58:47Z
COMMENT UPDAted Tanzie Edited by cuteshrishti - 2011-10-08T14:59:12Z
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Posted: 2011-10-08T15:27:33Z
awww tanzie u have blown me off with this update
i m stunned how can u write so well
i m falling short of adjectives right now to praise u ClapClapClapClap and besides i don't think i m good enough to appreciate such a beautiful piece of work
abhiya were truly amazing in this updateClap
i think now pia is getting close to abhay's truthConfused
the way she has consoled her that he is such a good personEmbarrassed is amazing
they both have surely fallen madly in love with each otherEmbarrassed
and the last part when abhay gave her his blood and save her inspite of struggling from his blood thirst u have wrote it really well ClapClapthat i can almost feel their emotions
the last line of abhay was really touching Cry
i hope now he will admit his feelings
btw as abhay has given her his blood will it going to have some consequences
anyways a big Hugto u for this update
now i just can't wait to read the next part i hope it will contain some abhiya as well
please update soon and thanks for pm

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Posted: 2011-10-08T15:50:46Z
Amazing tanzie.really i dnt hav any words 2 say.i read it abt 5 times bt i still feel like reading it again n again.
Sorry yar really dnt av any words.
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Posted: 2011-10-08T15:52:51Z
Awesome update! I'm glad Abhay is realizing that he cares for Piya and Piya should just admit she has fallen in love with Abhay! It was really sweet how Piya was in pain but all she was concerned about was the blood coming out of Abhay's eyes! I can't wait till Abhay and Piya admit to themselves that they are in love! Looking forward to the next update! Continue soon Smile
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Posted: 2011-10-08T19:37:09Z
Awesumme tnzie ...well written ...but too big ...LOL
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Posted: 2011-10-08T20:04:34Z
Phew long update that was awsum tanzie dipu and aryans convo ROFL finally abhay realised that he feels something for piaEmbarrassed thanx for pmSmile i have a confusion are u planning a love triangle between alina aryan peehuConfusedand continue soon Edited by strawberryrashu - 2011-10-08T23:17:11Z
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Posted: 2011-10-08T21:06:52Z
Superb Update Tanzie..!It's was Awesome...Wow last lines were awesome..!I so loved ur writing..Wish I was gud at writing n not lazyLOL..!Ur two FFs r d best one I have ever read..!Thanks for PM n Update soon..!!
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Posted: 2011-10-08T21:09:48Z

Hey tanzie

thanx alot for the wonderful update and PM

Omg ! Abhiya were superb!

it is amazing to see abhiya feel each other's pain, but gadha toh gadha hi hain na, samjh nahin pa raha hain why he feels for her! Chalo..atleast he admitted that he cares for her !! Lol

Wow abhay saved piya from wolves...fight scequence was good.. Abhay looks really hawwt when he angry .. Hehe..(official bodyguard ko bhi to compliment milna chahiye)...

Awww abhay cud not see her in pain... I just loved the end part & abhay's concern ...

Btw, who is mohini ?

Precap sounds interesting..

Already waiting for the nxt part.. Continue soon

Edited by missglam - 2011-10-08T21:11:04Z
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