New FF: Till the End of Time(Book1 DONE)note pg149(Page 62)

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Posted: 2011-09-22T15:57:59Z
Originally posted by heena_mehta


inteeah hogayi inteezar kiConfused

So sorry to keep you awake... i rewrite the pool scene 3 times cause I didn't like it at first thats why late ho gayi Ouch Sleepy Confused
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Posted: 2011-09-22T16:04:47Z
Originally posted by princess_xeelan


Originally posted by heena_mehta


inteeah hogayi inteezar kiConfused

So sorry to keep you awake... i rewrite the pool scene 3 times cause I didn't like it at first thats why late ho gayi Ouch Sleepy Confused 
gosh i m totally dead, dat was outstanding. pool scene was amazing , ..finished reading it, wanna comment nw, bt wl do it tomorrow wid whole detailingWink, coz my eyes r nt supporting me nw...Sleepy...bye luv u hun Edited by heena_mehta - 2011-09-22T16:05:26Z
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Posted: 2011-09-22T16:08:27Z
RES!!!WILL READ LATER AND WILL COMMENT LATER..BY D WAY HEER(ADDITI)IS ENTRYING THIS FF JUST SAW HER N ARYAN(HARSHAD,PREM)WEDDINGS'S PIC..
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Posted: 2011-09-22T17:43:55Z
Awesome update! I'm so glad Abhay saved and healed Piya! I felt really bad that Piya plans to leave Abhay and Aryan soon! Ouch I'm glad that Piya is a self-respecting individual who doesn't want to rely on anyone but her not living in that house would make their house empty and Abhay and Aryan's lives would be lonely again! I felt sorry for Aryan, poor guy is still in love with his wife despite her leaving him! And Abhay is so sweet to have bought Piya's property back for her! I hope somehow Abhay and Aryan stop Piya from leaving the house! Eagerly waiting for the next update! Continue soon Smile
Edited by Deepi20 - 2011-09-22T17:44:45Z
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Posted: 2011-09-22T19:54:13Z
Wow tanzie its awsome.abhay himself dnt want to let piya go...aryan is married bt c left...aww...feeling sad 4 him.abhay has got feelings 4 piya thats gr8 n nw they know deepanita is a werewolf.its superb dear.it has become one of my fav ff.continue soon.
With love
srija.
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Posted: 2011-09-22T21:05:14Z
wow really nice update. love the way abhay is losing himselfWink
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Posted: 2011-09-22T21:32:31Z
Awesome Update!!!StarStar
I hate Dipannita
Dead, she treats Alina like dirt...she should get the same treatment!Angry. Pia-Aryan's convo was nice Smileand i think Abhay won't let her go.Oh so Aryan is a married man.ShockedFeeling bad for Aryan, Peehu left him.UnhappyAbhay  cares a lot about herSmile .Loved Aryan's dialogue" I'm at a party hosted by Prabeen Jaiswal. I just met his business partner. A woman who seemed to have used all lipsticks available in ManaliLOLROFL and she's a werewolf!! Will give info soon". Continue soon. I enjoy reading this FF of yoursSmile.Good Luck!Thumbs Up and thanks a lot for PM.Big smile
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Posted: 2011-09-22T22:00:11Z
Wow..
Abhay and Piya part was Amazing...Day DreamingAbhay changed Piya's wet clothes...Blushing
A woman who seemed to have used all lipsticks available in Manali
ROFLROFL
update soon...ClapHug
ROFL
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