New FF: Till the End of Time(Book1 DONE)note pg149(Page 53)

Posted: 2011-09-14T12:34:13Z

Wow tanzie wht an update.1st Aryan ki halat sun kar hasi aa rhi thi.Abhay spinned his head.And wow Abhiya's were tempted 2 touch eacj other.Tht was hot.Abhay hurting Pia is common so it hardly effects but uff Abhiya were sizzling hot.I love last line of this update'Pia actally brought sunshine in Abhay's graveyard life'.Plzz continue.I m ager 2 know who is lady raichand & will she b as gud as aryan is wod Pia or not?ConfusedEmbarrassed

LUV U HugEdited by cuteshrishti - 2011-09-15T06:32:29Z
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Posted: 2011-09-14T12:47:54Z
Awww tanzie. . such a fabulous update...
I'm speechless...

Abhay ignores piya but The way he showed care...& brought clothes , food for her. . .very touching. .

Aryan is sho shweet !! always trying to cheer up, Pia ! Why do i feel dat aryan is going to bring abhiya closer!

The towel scene was super hawt. .
& those lines :
(Abhay supported himself against a wall and closed his eyes. His body was trembling as well. "You are going to be the death of me and yourself Piya...why?? why?? " )
when will this guy let his guard down & accept his love !!
I just hate the control he has over his emotions. .

The precap 'unexpected' looks damn interesting. .
Hmmm!! Wat unexpected things r going to happen?. . Hehe

Thanks for the pm & beautiful update
continue soon
tcEdited by missglam - 2011-09-15T03:03:33Z
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Posted: 2011-09-14T13:49:24Z
*Chapter updated guys*

Sorry for being so late... I'm really busy these days...hope you understand like the chapter Embarrassed
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Posted: 2011-09-14T14:22:48Z
Brilliant chapter Tanzie...
You make me crack up completely at placesROFL
Good resistance Abhay...lekin kab thakWink
Lady AR sounds interesting and intimidating...
Thanks for the PM
Contnu soonHug
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Posted: 2011-09-14T14:37:27Z
Super awesome update! I love the friendship bond between Piya and Aryan! They are so cute! Tongue And Abhay feeling a bit jealous of their bond is adorable! Embarrassed The Abhay in a towel scene where Piya walks in to his room was hot! Embarrassed But I felt bad for Piya later as she felt cheap for not controlling her feelings. But Aryan cheered her up! I'm so happy that Aryan said he won't let Piya leave this house as she brought sunshine into their house as well as Abhay's life! Eagerly waiting for the next update! Continue soon Smile
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Posted: 2011-09-14T14:39:05Z
lovely update
really abhiya scenes were damn cuteEmbarrassed
but he was seriously rude with her why he has to hurt her and himself so muchAngry
but the last line by aryan has really shocked me to the coreConfused
i hope he is caring for her just like a friend or more so a brother
please no love triangles here we already have jai for this in ur story
thanks for pm and please .update soon and clear my doubt regarding pia and jai's relation

Edited by shivanirajput - 2011-09-15T02:28:53Z
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Posted: 2011-09-14T14:52:35Z
wow nice story plz update soon
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