New FF: Till the End of Time(Book1 DONE)note pg149 - Page 32

Posted: 12 years ago
last customer perhaps 🀣
Read both ch-3 and ch-4. I simply loved it to the core.. Hats off to you for creating such a bond of aaryan-abhay ! Am loving both of them.. And the way abhay promised to take care of piya is awesome. No long comments this time as my cell is behaving nuts today :/
So I will bore you on ch-5. πŸ˜† Plz update soon..
Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
loved it
Who was the lady on the phone please reveal soon
continue soon
thanks for the PMEdited by pari_smart - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago

hey tanz 😊😊😊

u knw wat  i reli need to buy a dictionary nw for commenting on ur updates...i m done wid my vocab!! always running short of words to priase ur writing skills!!!
 another brilliant piece of writing!!!
so abhay felt bad, dat he couldn't resist pia's blood!!! does he ever felt so bad bf4??πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
 don't knw wat to say, bt just loved every single dialouge of ur update!!
finally pia came back to her senses n found her angel!!! rude angel!!!
n i must say this time  u r too admant to keep things under fold!!!πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
dat was mindblowing in last where abhay after answering pia's questions said- kya musibat le li maine apne serπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...gosh, dat was damn good!!!
i m sure abhay gonna kill aryan for nt being there wid pia , bt i loved d way he took care of her!!!
wat abt orchid!! haan!! i m sure abhay would av done dat!!!
jay-alina, damn cute!!!!
n dat gal who was talking abt gaurav?? a new mystrey!!!
looking for wards to d nxt chapter tanz
do update soon
 
lov u n a big hug to u!!
 
 
Edited by heena_mehta - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago

Hey awesome update sweety I loved it.Wow hosh aate hi question express chalo.Poor Abhay Pia usse question pooch pooch k dimag kharab kar deti hai ahahah.I loved Abhay & Pia's attraction towards each other.His concern 4 Pia.Alina-jeh bond.Waise who is tht lady who talked wid Abhay on phone.Aate hi aryan ki band bajegi I guess ahaah.Plz continue tanzie

LUV UπŸ€—
Edited by cuteshrishti - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
Rail ka dabba πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
keep waiting... i'm writing guys πŸ˜†
Posted: 12 years ago
loved your update ...please update quickly
Posted: 12 years ago
wow
nice story keep going I really like this story of your

Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update! I'm glad Piya woke up from her unconscious state and has met Abhay! As expected, Abhay was a bit rude and Piya was charging him with so many questions! πŸ˜† I feel bad for Jeh, I hope he finds out that Piya is safe and sound! The next chapter's title sounds very interesting! Eagerly waiting for the next update! Continue soon 😊
Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update tanzie and nice brothers aryan abhay loved them and dipu and prabeen so bad people thanks for the pmEdited by strawberryrashu - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome..so finally Piya regained her consciousness...and she saw Abhay...
mindblowing...
update soon...

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