Very Nice Tanzie . aww abhay gonna behave rude to piya again. . i was really happy seeing abhay being nice to piya. i hope soon piya finds out abhay;s truth n she tells him she still loves him n even the monster inside of him n she is only safe when he is with her. thanks for pm. n update soon.
first of all dnt evr think of ending ur ff's ! evn if the show ends m nt going anywhere! so just keep continuing. Nw coming to the update. beautiful update tanyie. ohh aryan is so hurt.sad to see him like dis. and tht dialogue of aryan to abhaxy-(if she wants to stay in ur room forevr then also u will agree) was t gud. i ws enjoying imagining abhay's expressions.aww piya's dress was so beautiful.and tht line of aryan (murder mission to kill my brother) was just awesum. aryan is so naughty bt sweet at the same time! abhiya dance part ws dreamy and mesmerisingohh no! abhay again in his stay away mission mode !poor piyawonder wht will ay do nowjay do nw! and tanzie u bettr keep on writing.got it? otherwise bangladeshe 4a tomay khuje bar korbo
thx tanzie for deciding nt to end ur ff'sfav fav fav update tanziedis is one of ur most beautiful updatetht line of piya'heaven shud b empty when god made you'was aww that abhiya kiss was..kano je show te arokom hoye na sigh. so aryan caught abhay. bt koi fayeda nahi hua! the zip scene was very well wriuen. poor piyanw abhay will go back to his usual stay away or hate me piya mof again! god knows when will dis abha boy realise the trutha/w our strong headed piya wont give up so easily tht toh m sure. aftrall abhay belongs to piya naand dear who was dis ragini?was she mohini's sister? and why was abhay blaming himself regarding ragini's death? k nw m behaving like piya so i shud stopso humm jay too is a werewolf nt an adopted oneso r u planning to turn him grey nw? m eager nw fr d nxt part. plz update asap . t.c.