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Posted: 12 years ago


i love RAYA too much...so i'm trying to write somethin on them may be its not perfect. so if you people like it then please read it and hit the like button or do comments

index:

part:: 1...page::1
part:: 2...page::2
part::3...page::4
part::4...page::4
part::5...page::5
part::6...page::7
part::7..page::9
part::8..page::10
part::9...page::12
Part::10...page::14
part::11...page::17...new


Edited by riya01maddy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
part ::1...

The scene begain from RAYA's suhagrat in their room where priya and neha are talking.
Neha: priya aj tumhari suhagrat hain,so excited na! you know hamari shadi ke waqt,main aur vikram to is dinke excitement me 3 dinose so nahi paye the.Priya: nahi main woh Mr. Kapoor..Neha stops her by telling - are priya tum kya main woh Mr. Kapoor kar rahi ho,re sharmao mat hum dost hi to hain tum mujhse sub kuch share kar sakti ho.Priya feels so nervous.Priya: nahi aisi koi bat nahi hain,i will share with you lekin neha sach kahu to main bohut nervous hoon.woh pehlibar 😳Mr. Kapoor ke sath ek kamreme,mujhe
bohout ajeeb feelings ho rahi hain...its
feels me k jaise agar main saab kuch chorkar avi kahi vag sakti to acha hota.Neha:
priya pagal ho gayi ho kya? re tum nahi janti tumhara pati-Mr. Ram Kapoor jo itna vola
bana firta hain😉  asal me hain nahi,asal me hamara fatty bohut hi romantic😳 hain.i'm sure
ram aj tumhe apni dilke bat jarur bol dega.Priya feel so embarrased☺️ that she cant
tell anything.In another direction vikram and ram are also talking about the same
matter.Ram: yaar mujhe kuch samajh nahi araha hain kya karoon,aur pata nahi teri biwi
waha priya ko kya path para rahi hain.Vikram: re aisa kuch nahi hain,tu bekar me
tention le raha hain.Ram: haannn apko to aisa hi lagega.Vikram: no yaar,serously tu
itna darr kyon raha hain?? priya teri biwi hain or jo vi bat karni haina jake kar.apni
suhagrat ke din sabko aisi bechaini hoti hai lekin jab priya ke pass jayega na sab kuch
vul jayega.ye ek special feelings hai.main to kehta hoon tu time waste mat kar jaldise
priyake pas ja aur...ram intruputs vikram with embaracing face😳 - aur...aur kya?main yaha
thik hoon,tujhe jana haina to ja.Vikram: gussa kyon hota hain yaar...aur main kaise
priya ke pas...Ram: hey😡...tu priyake pas kyon jayega maine tujhe neha ke pas janeko
kaha.Vikram: ree woh to priyake sath hain na🤣...(dadi comes with ishika) dadi: ram
maine anderse teri awaj suni...tu avi tak yahapar hain?? re mera golu vina itna volu
hain🤪!!..tu meri bahu ko akela chorke yahan gappe lara raha hain.chal avike avi priya
ke pass ja nahito main..Ram: nahi dadi apko kuch karneki jarurat nahi hain main ja raha
hoon😎...ap jake so jaye.Dadi: ye hui na baat!!!Here in RAYA's room,Neha:priya main to
kehti hoon tum na bed par ghunghat dalke beth jao,i'm sure ram ko ye bhout acha lagega😍.
Priya: nahi nahi neha main yahapar perfect hoon...uski koi jarurat nahi hain😳.Neha:priya
tum dono kya waha par khari rehkar rat gujarne wali ho? aur...suddenly vikram knock at
the door,Vikram: neha sari bate tumhi bol doge to ye dono ky karenge? aur mujhe lagta
hain ke ab hummein chalna chahie nahi to ye dono sari zindegi hummei dosh dete firenge.
Priya looks at the door and see ram standing with vikram but his eyes  iced on the
floor.Vikram: kyon ram?(by touching ram).Ram looks at priya for the first time😳(balh tune
plays) and starts to go back with telling - woh neeche thori kam baki hain.Vikram stops
him and brings him to priya then tells - ok...hamara kam to khatam ho gaya ab hum
challein neha?😉? neha: (by catching vikram's hand) of-course baby...aur ram-priya best
of luck👍🏼 for this special night.They leave the room and locked the door from outside.😉

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Edited by riya01maddy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
tnx dear for loving this...
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Posted: 12 years ago
love it.. this can very well happen
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Posted: 12 years ago
continue soon.. :) 

awesome start.
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Posted: 12 years ago
tnx for like this...@josupra
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Posted: 12 years ago
yeah its ready ...i will update soon...tnx for likink it @niroo
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Posted: 12 years ago
part-2

in sharma house sudhir and shipra are talking.sudhir:yakeen nahi ata ke ye sab itana
jaldi ho gaya.priya uski sasural vi chali gayi.shipra:janu apvi na...kaisi bate lekar
beth gaye.re avi to uski hasne ki din shuru.bas ram-priya ke jodi hamesha aise hi bane
rahe.sudhir smiles.shipra:pata nahi kya kar rahi hogi🤔 meri...nahi apki beti waha?re
mujhe to ye vi nahi malum ram ke sath uski banti kaisi hain(shipra become tensed) aur
mujhe kuch batata vi nahi hain.sudhir stops her like always tellin SHIPRA!😛!! jovi hoga
na acha hi hoga.here in ram's room ram-priya still stand on their place.they are feeling
so embarracing😳 that they are not able to move at least.after few miniutes priya breaks the
silence.priya:ye decoration...ram:hun woh neha ne ki hain maine mana kya tha firvi
...ram feels that priya gazing at him surprisingly.ram: nahi acha hain.woh neha ko
decoration ke mamleme kuch special jankari hain,acha hain!!telling this ram making his
face so disturb that priya laughs on him sweetly😊.priya:Mr. Kapoor us din vi ap hotel me
ajib behave kar rehe the or aj to aise bat kar rahe hain jaise thori der me main drakula
bankar apki khun pi jaungi🤣!!!ram realised that priya pulling his leg again.so he also
tries to laugh.priya:Mr. Kapoor main jantihoon hamari shadi baki sabki tarah nahi hain
thats why hummein aisi ajeeb mehsoos ho rahi hain.main samajh sakti hoon apke liye ye
kitna mushkil hain mere sath time spend karna.main janti hoon ke apko meri koi vi bat
pasand nahi hain firvi ap mere sath hain.ram intrupts her.ram:nahi priya woh bat aise
hain ke.priya:nahi Mr. Kapoor aise hi hain aur ye sach to humdonose behtar kisiko nahi
pata.main janti hoon ye shadi ek samjhota hain to maine apni dilse ek samjhota karli
hain aur isi liye apko mere bajese itna awkward feel larneki koi jarurat nahi hain.
barsose ye kamra apki thi or ajvi hain.so agar ap aise behave nahi karenge to mujhe
sach me bahout khushi hogi.ram:(his lips curves with little smile but he is feeling
guilty)priya tumne avi jo vi kaha main janti hoon usme koi jhooth nahi tha.but trust
me main apni rishteme hamesha honest rahunga😛.future kisiko nahi pata lekin main hamesha
tumhara sath dunga.i'm sory for my behaviour.priya:it's ok(with a little smile).ram:priya
ek bat bolu to kya tum believe karogi?priya nodes her face--...ummm han.ram:priya
actually main tumhe jaisa samajhta tha asal me tum thik vaisi nahi ho...hannn...thori
complicated jarur ho lekin achi ho😎.ram make his mind to listen priya's lecture but no
she smiles and tell - actually apki vi kuch batein aise hain jo asanise pasand ajaye
but kuch batei avivi meri samjh ke bahar hain!😳!!they both smiles but ram feels something
strange.😳...what is this he coudn't understand...BALH TUNE PLAYS

KUCH JANA KUCH ANJANASA MUJHKO TO WOH LAGE
SARE RAINA SAPNA BANKE WOH AKHOME JAGE
BADE ACHE LAGTE HAIN...
YE TARE NAZARE...YE CHANDA (aur) AUR TUM

Edited by riya01maddy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
very nyc ff.Keep it up...
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Posted: 12 years ago
👍🏼chooo... chweeettt... update.❤️👏