Posted: 2011-07-26T17:58:54Z
Part 1 - Page 01
Part 2 - Relations 02
Edited by Ashima_Mishal - 2011-08-03T04:40:44Z
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Posted: 2011-07-26T18:22:32Z
Yayyy...although I don't know what it's going to be about...can't wait to read it!!! Embarrassed
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Posted: 2011-07-26T18:34:17Z
It begins from the scene where ram gets upset with apeksha's phone..priya hears him talking angrily on phone and soo she could understand something wrong..she had seen ram loose his temper with her around..she had heard him shout and be rude but there was something different about that convo and seeing ram tensed priya knew it was more than his usual moody behaviour! Still the both remain silent as they walk upto the car..since ram didnt want to disturb nuts and karthik he asks the driver to bring another car to the hotel..and since priya volunteered to go back home ram decides to drop her the car the two remain quiet as ram drives the car rashly..that one phone call had left all his old wounds scratched ram..and all the hurtful memories he had left behing were storming back at him! Ram drives the car at full speed as a fearful priya says-Mr. Kapoor..dheerey chaliye..RAM WAS TOO DISTRACTED AND LOST THAT HE DOESNT NOTICE the oncoming truck and when he does it was thanks to priya's warning scream! Turning the car ram narrowly escapes the collision and bangs the car into a tree!..RAM WAS TAKEN ABACK as he realises what had happened and as he gathers his senses together the first thing that hits his mind was..PRIYA..turning to his left he finds priya groaning as she rubbed her forehead that had hit the dashboard! WORRIED RAM GETS down from the car and walking to priya's side he helps her get out of the car and stares at her apologetically as a disoriented priya leaned against the car..RAM SAYS- i am so sorry priya..yeh sab achaanak!..r u alright?..PRIYA LOOKS UP AT RAM and he was relieved to see her forehead was intact and not bleeding..balh track plays in bg as ram steps near to priya leaving her a little take a closer look at her..PRIYA FUMBLES- main..main theek hoon..(looking into ram's eyes priya asks him what she knew she shouldnt and she didnt want to but not knowing why but his tension was troubling her& so she begins)mera hak toh nahin banta but still mind if i ask what's the matter?
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Posted: 2011-07-26T18:35:01Z
Ram stares at priya and he thought was there true concern which he could see in priya's warm eyes..was actually there or was he imagining things..her voice breaks into his thoughts-kya hua Mr. Kapoor..RAM JUST STARES AT PRIYA..wondered if he should share the most painful part of his life with her..if he should confide into her..if he should tell her how cheated and hurt he still felt..if he should show how scarred and betrayed that woman had left him..balh track plays in bg as an uncertain ram tries to solve his dilemma and priya gazes at him..all set to lend him an ear and try to help him too!Edited by Ashima_Mishal - 2011-07-26T18:46:11Z
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Posted: 2011-07-26T18:37:55Z
Hey shamma u r first on this ss! Glad u lykd the start next part asap hope u keep reading it dear!Edited by Ashima_Mishal - 2011-07-26T18:48:38Z
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Posted: 2011-07-26T18:43:33Z
Great start Ashima!! Loved it!!! Can't wait to read the next part! Clap
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Posted: 2011-07-26T20:34:26Z
brillant first part, look forward to reading more!
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Posted: 2011-07-27T07:07:19Z
Glad u liked the start next part asap hope u keep reading it dear!
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