New SS*GUZARISH* ~RELATIONS~...Pg 2

Posted: 12 years ago
New SS - GUZARISH .
 
 
 
-Index-
 
Part 1 - Page 01
 
Part 2 - Relations ..page 02
Edited by Ashima_Mishal - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
Yayyy...although I don't know what it's going to be about...can't wait to read it!!! 😳
Posted: 12 years ago
It begins from the scene where ram gets upset with apeksha's phone..priya hears him talking angrily on phone and soo she could understand something wrong..she had seen ram loose his temper with her around..she had heard him shout and be rude but there was something different about that convo and seeing ram tensed priya knew it was more than his usual moody behaviour! Still the both remain silent as they walk upto the car..since ram didnt want to disturb nuts and karthik he asks the driver to bring another car to the hotel..and since priya volunteered to go back home ram decides to drop her back..in the car the two remain quiet as ram drives the car rashly..that one phone call had left all his old wounds scratched ram..and all the hurtful memories he had left behing were storming back at him! Ram drives the car at full speed as a fearful priya says-Mr. Kapoor..dheerey chaliye..RAM WAS TOO DISTRACTED AND LOST THAT HE DOESNT NOTICE the oncoming truck and when he does it was thanks to priya's warning scream! Turning the car ram narrowly escapes the collision and bangs the car into a tree!..RAM WAS TAKEN ABACK as he realises what had happened and as he gathers his senses together the first thing that hits his mind was..PRIYA..turning to his left he finds priya groaning as she rubbed her forehead that had hit the dashboard! WORRIED RAM GETS down from the car and walking to priya's side he helps her get out of the car and stares at her apologetically as a disoriented priya leaned against the car..RAM SAYS- i am so sorry priya..yeh sab achaanak!..r u alright?..PRIYA LOOKS UP AT RAM and he was relieved to see her forehead was intact and not bleeding..balh track plays in bg as ram steps near to priya leaving her a little offguard..to take a closer look at her..PRIYA FUMBLES- main..main theek hoon..(looking into ram's eyes priya asks him what she knew she shouldnt and she didnt want to but not knowing why but his tension was troubling her& so she begins)mera hak toh nahin banta but still mind if i ask what's the matter?
Posted: 12 years ago
Ram stares at priya and he thought was there true concern which he could see in priya's warm eyes..was actually there or was he imagining things..her voice breaks into his thoughts-kya hua Mr. Kapoor..RAM JUST STARES AT PRIYA..wondered if he should share the most painful part of his life with her..if he should confide into her..if he should tell her how cheated and hurt he still felt..if he should show how scarred and betrayed that woman had left him..balh track plays in bg as an uncertain ram tries to solve his dilemma and priya gazes at him..all set to lend him an ear and try to help him too!Edited by Ashima_Mishal - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
Hey shamma u r first on this ss! Glad u lykd the start next part asap hope u keep reading it dear!Edited by Ashima_Mishal - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
Great start Ashima!! Loved it!!! Can't wait to read the next part! 👏
Posted: 12 years ago
brillant first part, look forward to reading more!
Posted: 12 years ago
Glad u liked the start next part asap hope u keep reading it dear!
Posted: 12 years ago
Ram just gazes at priya and after much thought he decides to keep away from priya the most painful chapter of his life..sighing he says-kuch nahin..everythng's fine..kuch buisiness ka problem tha..anyways i am so sorry ki meri wajah se..PRIYA INTERRUPTS-Its ok..main theek hoon..THE TWO STAND NEXT TO ONE ANOTHER as priya leans against the car..cool breeze blows across their faces as the usual silence falls between the two..broken only by the rustling of the leaves..as if even they were trying to prompt the two to talk..PRIYA SPEAKS up at last-pichle paanch minute se hum dono chup hain and we dont have any common topic to talk on! RAM TURNS TO glance at priya as she says on-kitni ajeeb baat hai na Mr. Kapoor hum donon baaki normal logon ki tarah nahin behave kartey!..ab hummein dekhkar kaun kahega ki hum dono bahot jald zindagi bhar ke saath mein bandhney jaa rahe hain..A CONFUSED RAM ASKS-iska matlab..hum dono abnormal hain?..PRIYA SMILES SHEEPISHLY..as RAM waits sincerely for her wise words..and is all ears as priya turns to face him-aisa toh nahin keh saktey ki hum Abnormal hain..its just that hum donon kuch aisey halaaton mein mile the ki ek hichkichahat hai humare beech (balh tune plays as ram hears priya intently)..aur karthik nuts ki tarah hum dono kahan jaantey hain ek doosrey ko! Waqt ke saath har rishta panapta hai..ussey samajhney ki samajh aati hai..i guess humare rishtey ko bhi shape up honney mein waqt lagega..PRIYA REALISES how interested he was listening to her and embarassed she falls silent! RAM finds himself in awe of how well she understood relations..and how easily she put her thoughts into words and balh track plays as ram says to her softly-kaash main tumhari tarah suljhi hui baatein kar pata priya..u are a really intelligent woman..PRIYA LOOKS AT RAM taken aback but blushing at the honesty she could feel in ram's complement..
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by Ashima_Mishal


Ram just gazes at priya and after much thought he decides to keep away from priya the most painful chapter of his life..sighing he says-kuch nahin..everythng's fine..kuch buisiness ka problem tha..anyways i am so sorry ki meri wajah se..PRIYA INTERRUPTS-Its ok..main theek hoon..THE TWO STAND NEXT TO ONE ANOTHER as priya leans against the car..cool breeze blows across their faces as the usual silence falls between the two..broken only by the rustling of the leaves..as if even they were trying to prompt the two to talk..PRIYA SPEAKS up at last-pichle paanch minute se hum dono chup hain and we dont have any common topic to talk on! RAM TURNS TO glance at priya as she says on-kitni ajeeb baat hai na Mr. Kapoor hum donon baaki normal logon ki tarah nahin behave kartey!..ab hummein dekhkar kaun kahega ki hum dono bahot jald zindagi bhar ke saath mein bandhney jaa rahe hain..A CONFUSED RAM ASKS-iska matlab..hum dono abnormal hain?..PRIYA SMILES SHEEPISHLY..as RAM waits sincerely for her wise words..and is all ears as priya turns to face him-aisa toh nahin keh saktey ki hum Abnormal hain..its just that hum donon kuch aisey halaaton mein mile the ki ek hichkichahat hai humare beech (balh tune plays as ram hears priya intently)..aur karthik nuts ki tarah hum dono kahan jaantey hain ek doosrey ko! Waqt ke saath har rishta panapta hai..ussey samajhney ki samajh aati hai..i guess humare rishtey ko bhi shape up honney mein waqt lagega..PRIYA REALISES how interested he was listening to her and embarassed she falls silent! RAM finds himself in awe of how well she understood relations..and how easily she put her thoughts into words and balh track plays as ram says to her softly-kaash main tumhari tarah suljhi hui baatein kar pata priya..u are a really intelligent woman..PRIYA LOOKS AT RAM taken aback but blushing at the honesty she could feel in ram's complement..

Oh ho kya baat hai!!!! Loved it Ashima...waiting for the next part!!

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