OS SID AND METS SECOND CHANCE last part 20 august - Page 18

Great update bt alina n abhay...hazam nahi hota...lolzzz
thnx for d pm...

nice ending. i loved how abhay turned back to face pia

Oh no. some how I would like to see a part two for this just to show how wrong Alina is may be she loves Abhay and is willing ot go any lenths for his but love is not something you steal and capture. It looks like there is more to this story and would have loved to read it form the authors point of view.

Originally posted by: ninja_hattori

Sorry for the late.Was busy for fasting 😳
Though it's a sad ending , I loved it..U wrote it very beautifully..And the more important thing is we got something new from the real..😃 Btw were JiYa together in the last part?

Its understandable yaar We have all been under dureess during Ramzan

amazing brill nice update ...plz cont soon 

Originally posted by: kuttu

Oh no. some how I would like to see a part two for this just to show how wrong Alina is may be she loves Abhay and is willing ot go any lenths for his but love is not something you steal and capture. It looks like there is more to this story and would have loved to read it form the authors point of view.

I only provide U with whatever is cooking up inside my head and like U know i am very crazy