New ff *Love lasts forever*...PART 2 Pg 2...

Posted: 12 years ago
Index part 1 (lamha) pg 1 part 2 (changing times) pg 2Edited by Ashima_Mishal - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
It begins from yesterday's last scene...priya's mom bangs the car into ram's...shocked and sorry priya gets out of the car and soo do ram and vikram...before priya's mom can say anything vikram blurts out-- Gaadi chalani nahin aati toh sadak qar kyun laatey ho...priya tries to quieten her mother but in vain as she replies back angrily--achcha? Badi gaadi hai toh kya sadak khareed lii hai...VIKRAM keeps on arguing...and priya keeps on trying to stop her mother who was giving a tough time to vikram with her instant replies (Poor vikram doesnt know how much that woman loves her voice lol)...while Ram had begun tn loose patience too...he wanted to reach the temple on time and the delay plus the noise of argument was irritating him as he finally speaks almost shouting-BAS KARO YAAR... Vikram fallr silent and soo does priya's mother...they both stare at ram...while in the silence ram now notices priya...HE feels charmed by how beautiful yet simple she was...and as priya too meets his eyes she looks at him grateful that he ended the chaos...and surprisingly ram found himself attracted to the never seen before serinity in her eyes...


With great difficulty he looks away from her ( Cupid Strikes may be!) and turns to her mother and says polietly--dekhiye...galti humari hai...main hii driver se jaldi gaadi chalaney ko keh raha tha...aapki gaadi ko jo bhi damage hua hai...I WILL MAKE sure it gets paid...ab plz jhagda khatam keejiye...


VIKRAM stares at his friend wondering what was wrong with him! While priya's mom flashes a victorious smile...and ram makes her note down his personal number and asks them to call to tell the price...he indicates vikram to get into the car and apologising again he to hurries back into the car...and asks the driver to start...the car zooms away while priya too insists her mom to let her drive as she was getting late...

Inside the car u see vikram remains quiet...and ram just looks out of the window smiling and wondering what was happening to him...( Mr. RAM KAPOOR isi ko kehte hain love at first sight)...the male version of the title track plays in the background as ram TRIES TO FIGURE OUT HIS NEWLY DEVELOPED FEELINGS... 

VIKRAM steals glances at his friend...surprised that he wasn't noticing that he was angry with him!...AFTER A WHILE the car comes to a halt and the two get down...to walk upto the temple...its then that ram realises that all through the journey vikram was unusually quiet...he stops and looks at him...vikram comes to a halt too and frowns at his friend in disapproval!...


RAM flashes a cute smile and asks--ABB KYA HUA VIKRAM...KYUN ROOTHI hui biwi ki tarah chal raha hai...

VIKRAM turns to him and says--ROOTHI HUI biwi? Main? WAH! Wahan sadak par us ajnabee ki side lekar tunney maafi maangi aur iss dost ka saath nahin diya!...ROothna toh wajib hai...RAM chuckles and replies--tu bhi na vikram...choti si baat par naraz ho raha hai...

THE TWO WALK TOWARDS the main altar of the temple as ram says--maana ki woh maa thodi khadoos thi par woh ladki toh kitni masoom si thi...ek alag si baat thi uski aakho mein...RAM TURNS to look at vikram and rees his friend looking at him in utter shock! AND he wondered what was wrong with him...people come to welcome them and ram walks ahead with them while Vikram stands back...stunned yet elated..

.ALL THESE YEARS HE HAD BEEN DYING TO SEE THAT ON HIS friend's face...and At last...there it was in his eyes!...VIKRAM COULD SEE that the woman they met on the road...had found a path into his Friend's heart...AND NOW IT WAS UPTO HIM...TO BRING HER IN HIS LIFE...
Edited by Ashima_Mishal - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
Glad u lyk it dear wil try to updt tomorow :)
Posted: 12 years ago
wow Ashima... ur too good yaar๐Ÿ‘ its too cute๐Ÿ˜ณ  just hope this happens in the next๐Ÿ˜‰ epi.. w8ing 4 ur update.. really eager 2 knw priya's part of feelings๐Ÿ˜ do update soon๐Ÿ˜›
Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Ashima, that was cool update.๐Ÿ‘
Itni jaldi cupid strikes ?๐Ÿ˜‰
 
Nice to keep weekend going, please continue.
 
And 'Roothi hui biwi ki tarah' ha ha,,,,,,, have we heard this somewhere before ?
Liked the mention tho' missing the duo.๐Ÿ˜ญ
 
Edited by achumen - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
Hi achumen glad u lyk the update next one asap hope u enjoy and wow u remember it and yes how much we miss him if only he could understand!
Posted: 12 years ago
Hi anamika wow glad u lyk it dear next part asap hope u keep enjoying :D
Posted: 12 years ago
Ok i thought a lot and finally have come to the desicion that i wil make this oneshot into an ff hope u all enjoy next part asap :D
Posted: 12 years ago
Vikram still found hard to believe what his friend had just said...as he finally gathers his senses to walk after ram his last words still echoed in his head..*LEKIN WOH LADKI KITNI masoom si thi..ek alag si baat thi uski aakhon mein* a broad grin crosses vikram's face as he saw the hope of his friend finally settling down and having a family of his own! He tries hard to curtail his excitement as he reaches the temple stairs..he sees ram on the phone talking to his step mom saying-maa hum log aapka wait kar rahe hain ..sid aur ishika bhi nahin aaye..ho sake toh..HIS MOM interrupts saying--RAM...SIDDHANT ko buisiness trip par london jana bahot zaroori tha..aur ishika toh apne honeymoon ke liye kal hii paris chali gayi..jaldi jaldi mein tumhe batana bhool gayi..aur yahan bahot traffic hai ram..i dont think main pahonch paaongi beta..(RAm feels sad and disappointed)..ok ram i have to go..WITH THAT she disconnects the phone and a hurt ram turns to look away from vikram as he didnt want to show him his pain...tears well up in his eyes and he walks in the temple..asking the pandits to begin the pooja he sits for the rites..vikram watches his friend sit in front of the burning havan kund..unhappy and hurt..the fire of loneliness was burning his heart..and vikram knew what evil a mother that woman was..and how self centered she was to always use ram to the best of her advantage and then leave him heartbroken!...VIKRAM HAD KNOWN RAM FOR three decades now..he was his childhood pal and seen him give away all those little wishes..dreams and his entire youth to those selfish so called family of his!..the day ram's father died he lost the person who loved him unconditionally more than even vikram too..still ram hid his broken self by building a wall of Work around him and worked day in day out to build up the empire he owned today...VIKRAM ALWAYS FELT SAD about ram and anguished by the fact that he was helpless to find him true happiness..but today as he watched him do the pooja..all alone..SURPrisingly he didnt feel bad!..
Posted: 12 years ago
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next next... Priya part plz๐Ÿ˜ณ

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